An Unorthodox Path to Immortality: Starting with a Gu Poison Vaccine

Everything else is fine, but the protagonist's inexplicable ability to learn breathing techniques is a bit unreasonable. After all, there's no reason why something that can't be learned in modern times could be learned in ancient times. Even if it's in another world, there needs to be a reasonable explanation. Furthermore, the protagonist showed no surprise at being able to learn the breathing technique, as if he knew it was inevitable, which seemed rather taken for granted.

Practice using the memory palace more often, and once you get used to it, you'll be able to remember everything you see. Engage in mentally challenging activities, such as solving very difficult arithmetic or engineering problems. Once you get used to it, you can develop your brain's capacity.

Less of that, damn it, this kind of idiotic language...

The conflict felt too contrived. 😒

What does it mean that seven 5-meter-long bamboo poles weigh hundreds of kilograms?

The author is only suited to writing about alternate universes; he always writes fictional historical novels, and he can't continue writing them beyond the middle. After all, historical novels themselves have limitations. He should either use a cross-dimensional teleportation portal like Kunlun Mountain in the middle stages, otherwise the later world-building is so small that he can't nurture a true dragon, resulting in a feeling of small-scale battles.

Myths should be written as myths; don't interpret them using science.

Thoughts after reading the introduction Weakened immunity is a disease An overactive immune system can also be a disease. The immune cells are too strong, causing damage to the body's own cells. The body's own cells are enhanced. Immune cells are also a type of autologous cell, so they are also enhanced. Left foot steps on right foot, right foot steps on left foot, and you ascend from the spot.

The author has written many novels that all have terrible endings.

Congratulations to the author: May your literary career flourish forever! May inspiration always reside within you! The new book is a bestseller! Successfully completed!