Brazilian Elite Forces: Guns and Order

It felt rather uninteresting. The protagonist was a pure Brazilian native who didn't reincarnate or have any special abilities, and there wasn't a compelling plot. Plus, there was too much unnecessary dialogue.

You can take a look if it's free. But if you pay for it, this book isn't worth a single penny. Other novelists write about lawlessness and thrills. But you, you've described a protagonist who can lead everyone to lawlessness, to a better life from the abyss. But I won't. I'll train myself to become a dog for the powerful and wealthy.

You've watched too many movies, haven't you? It's such a familiar American movie script. Novels are all about thrills. This is completely unfamiliar to you; it even gives off the vibe of the protagonist being a lackey of the powerful.

This dialogue, like a movie script, is simply impossible to connect with.

The premise is good, it's just that the start time was too late.

It would be best if you could include an image, even an AI-generated image would be fine.

To be honest, this one died before I even started reading the previous one, which I was planning to save up to 150 chapters!