The Heavens Began to Worship Tong Lao

I hate the Murong family, they have committed too many sins, but some people like it, but there is nothing you can do about it. No one can correct anyone. Just like Murong Fu, you might as well let him take his more successful me to Nanyang, to Anantai. The country of India may really be able to build a small country for fun, but forget it if it becomes a big country. With the negative political IQ of the Murong family, it is embarrassing to think about it. This is good for everyone, instead of talking so much nonsense, how can they be able to talk nonsense like this? ? ?

Renzong is the temple name, which was used after the emperor's death. "Renzong is now in power." It's a bit difficult to stretch, there is no such explanation; Secondly, wasn't it the time of Song Zhezong and Zhao Xu? Finally, I found out that it was the Song Dynasty, and a little girl was being chased Kill, the martial arts he learned is called Plum Blossom Hand. I didn't expect it to be very difficult in Tianlong Babu. You said that the protagonist doesn't know about the Song Dynasty, but the little girl and Plum Blossom Hand can learn martial arts from another world with the same name. She already knows about the Song Dynasty, so she should think of Tianshan Tonglao...

Tianlong let himself go in the later stage. I was quite looking forward to seeing the Tang Dynasty. After turning the next chapter, I saw that all the chapters were women. To read this, I might as well read a pornographic book.

I only had a brief relationship with Murong Fu, and it was really a bit awkward.

Taoism emphasizes the dual cultivation of life and life. Look at the way the protagonist of the Tang Dynasty is being chased by the Yin Queen. He is really embarrassed and loses so much martial arts.

Did you begin to think that Tong Lao was the heroine? In the end, it turned out to be the same as other novels!

The author's explanation of Chapter 1, "The official Renzong is in power" is that Tong Lao doesn't know who is the emperor. What does this have to do with knowing who is the emperor? The Xiaoyao sect is not an ignorant sect. Don't they even know the name of the temple?

Give Murong Fu the idea and replace it with Wang Yuyan. This is also a classic way of writing. Murong Fu actually had a few paths, either secretly recruiting refugees and orphans to go to overseas islands, accumulating power, and sailing all over the world; or going to Shandong, occupying Jinan Island, and accumulating strength to attack Goryeo. This is the classic route of Water Margin fans; or he could go to the north, occupy a small tribe, and slowly build up his power with money, food and martial arts from the Central Plains. This is the route of the Jin Kingdom and Mongolia. Other civet cats for princes, doves occupying magpie nests, and civil strife in Liao are also opportunities, but the opportunities are too small and they are all illusions.

Everything was good up front, especially the game with Li Qiushui! It turns out that starting from Li Qingluo, they are all useless waste! If you want to drive a car and attract readers, you must also divide it into roles! A deep-seated resentful woman, a love brain, as stupid as a maggot, with so many debuffs stacked up, and the protagonist is having an affair with the other party! Li Qiu Shui at least knew who she was, and Li Qingluo lived purely in her own world, treating herself as a queen!

I felt numb when I saw that real demon coming into the world, so I could only stop my losses in time.

Li Qiushui's combat power is set much higher than in the original work. It was painful to watch.

It was still peaceful in the past, but after everything was done with the sweeper, the situation took a turn for the worse. Oh my, it really scares me to death

The writing and plot are smooth and have little foreshadowing without dragging. It is recommended to write less plots that are not related to martial arts. It is better to save two homeless girls and make reference to Ouyang Ke's harem. After all, martial arts novels are not historical military novels.

The TM has become smaller again. The author has a special hobby, right?

Zhu Yuyan chased the protagonist for seven days, went to sea, and walked on the sea. Brother, isn't it... Is this the Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty? Could it be that what we will undertake next is not The Rain and the Clouds but Journey to the West...

Why do you feel like the protagonist is licking more and more?

I finished it in one night. The first part is really good. The protagonist in the first dozens of chapters has a lovable personality and drives with warmth. The character change in the later part is a bit abrupt. After the devil comes out, the plot feels free.

There are already enough stallion stories, but with this attitude, the author is also preparing to align with stallion stories? ?

The Tianlong chapter is okay, but the enemy coming from the sky is a bit weird. I'll give it a try later.

Two chapters are updated at 8pm every day. It is very important to read the new book issue monthly. The author hereby implores readers to read it and stay for half a minute.

I gave up and stopped pursuing it. I have never seen such an irresponsible writer.

Isn't the author Li Guding?

It's still unfinished, I had a premonition after seeing Fairy Sword...

I feel that the author is still very good at writing. At least the emotional scenes and fights are very good, and they are in line with the imagination of using martial arts to reach immortality. However, things like the Nuwa Emperor are very dramatic later on. You can't be the protagonist and let these ancient gods put their hopes on you, right? Look at who among the Xuanjian Immortal Clan stepped on the horse and placed their plans on Xiaxiu? And putting things like hope on the protagonist gives people an uncomfortable feeling, as if he is being manipulated to become stronger and then take the initiative to save the world. This is very cliche. Anyone can do it, so why does it have to be the protagonist? It's also very discouraging.

Around Chapter 170, it suddenly became unreasonable and the map/dungeon suddenly had to be changed. It looks a little uncomfortable.

For me, it is a novel that can be listened to instinctively, and the sense of immersion is automatically beautified. What I am most afraid of is that there is too much science. It is all narration and manuals, talking about settings, endless, character descriptions, and little battle dialogue. This book is good. If you can continue to listen, it is telling a story. It is very happy to cooperate with fishing at work.

Damn it, it looks good, please tell me if you are a Su Ye trumpet! ! ! It doesn't matter whether you breed a stallion or not, but you are the only one in the martial arts area who can write the emotional line of a stallion in a way that makes people feel comfortable. The writing is smooth, and the characters stand out in just a few lines of dialogue. It's comfortable 👍 and I gave it a monthly pass

It really sucked, the gods said yes.

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After you finish writing, go back and finish it 😆