How Can There Be Any Good People in the World of Immortality?

I kind of understand the protagonist's brain circuit. Even though he knows that he's being hunted outside, why don't you go up and stay in a safe place for a while before going out?

Personally, I think it's okay. I can listen to it in one sitting. There's nothing to describe how handsome the protagonist is. At the beginning, it's a bloody plot where he meets a beautiful woman or something. It's the main plot from the beginning, and then he escapes from death. The writing is quite reasonable.

If you often walk by the river, your shoes won't get wet. If there are so many crises, it's impossible for the protagonist not to die every time.

This Duan Peng is disgusting. He used you to block the knife and deliberately caused trouble. You should deal with him instead of continuing to write.

Not only is the writing style good, but the plot is also full of ups and downs, which makes it boring.

Chapter 27 is written inexplicably. In the first 26 chapters, it was written that it was suspected to be a magic weapon, but in chapter 27, it was said to be an inventory, and there was a magic weapon slot.

Can you stop arranging crises for the protagonist again and again? I often walk by the river, but my shoes don't get wet. Can the protagonist really pass the test every time?

The rhythm is tight, the content is substantial, the story is not watery, and it is a rare excellent work.

Wandering toad trumpet? ? ?

Thousands of collections, so many good reviews, I'm afraid

Little Karami is a bit more cautious and will participate in the level 30 dungeon as soon as he reaches level 3. Is it fun to write like this?

I wipe this. . . The battle strength collapsed at the beginning, and the book was abandoned before entering the main chapter. In fact, the plot is quite compact. There is no need to write it in a formal way. There can be many stories happening without joining the sect. I started reading from Chapter 9 and only found the prologue, which is a pity.

The first book was really good. Although I haven't finished it, I can read 80% of the books I haven't finished. I thought it was awesome. I didn't expect that the new book would go downhill.

Haha, the previous comments were all good, but I ended up writing them off. Hahaha, these good comments turned into ridicule.

It feels like I have sold my vest, and it is completely different from the first Siheyuan. If you are good at writing about eras, write more about them. I like to read them.

If it really doesn't work, I can just polish it with AI.

Pinned to the top, please tell me when the new book will be published.

It feels like a toad, the opening chapter is well written.

1. The golden finger is a panel that can identify skills, treasures, etc., And can increase the protagonist's understanding of the skills. The setting is a dark world of immortality, where skills and treasures are full of pitfalls. The golden finger can be avoided, and it will be very satisfying. 2. I am not satisfied with the plot, so I wrote It's more than 100,000 words, and the protagonist doesn't have much time to practice steadily. Basically, he has just stepped out of the wolf's mouth and into the tiger's mouth. He is a general practitioner of Kung Fu. He knows nothing about cultivation and is constantly being hunted. I can take a moment to slow down a little and explain the background of the world, the training system, and clarify the protagonist's promotion route.