1983 Started from the Security Department of Supply and Marketing Cooperatives

Goldfinger is a small map, where you can see gold and silver and hostile people or bad guys The author can write tens of thousands of words about a small plot of discovering silver coins. Sometimes he is delayed by this, and sometimes he is disturbed by that The same goes for catching bad guys, and the writing is similar to suspense. It's the same as the mystery film, but it's either based on finding clues or simply relying on the mini-map. Then every time I almost find out what the bad guy looks like, someone will talk to the protagonist. I have written more than ten chapters in a row and still haven't found out what the bad guy looks like. Even though he is only ten meters away every time, it's awesome.

After reading the first chapter, I felt a little bit offended when I saw someone reborn as my relative. I don't quite understand why it's set up like this. When I see my biological father, I call him brother, when I see my biological mother, I call her sister-in-law, and when I see my grandmother, I call her mother. I feel embarrassed just thinking about it.

A shovel can be used to hit someone on the face. The person using the shovel can still kick the person 3 or 4 meters away. It's incredible that the other person can still be conscious. Is it because the author has no common sense or is it the t800?

A mentally handicapped plot, hydrology. I deliberately tried to depress my wits three or five times for the sake of the plot. I died of poison. It has been abandoned.

There's nothing to say about the author's chronology, it's just the setting of being reborn as his third uncle...

I would like to remind the author that sensitive people cannot leave the country. There is no possibility of leaving the country for such missiles. The author actually asked an expert in missile flight control to teach in the United States. How lacking in common sense do you have?

It's only been two chapters, so you're just pushing it a little bit. At least it's seven or eight chapters. In addition, the setting of being reborn as my third uncle is a bit convoluted. The second chapter has been revealed so far. It depends on how to deal with it later.

It was a bit of a trap. An enemy agent used his gun. He was caught once and escaped by himself. The second time, he was caught again and killed at the police station. The first time it was okay, it can be said to be careless. The second time, didn't a more advanced person come to this thing? Knowing that this person is so important, he would be poisoned, which is a bit incomprehensible. 🙂🙂

This book, this kind of routine, this kind of blunt reversal, this kind of disgusting thing, it's all your fault that you can make money, the quality is really low. The potential of the party that leads the way

I have known the author of this book since Feiyang was still being serialized. That is, I blacklisted her works as soon as I read the beginning. One author's work can to a large extent represent all works. Those who write boringly or stupidly will gradually become a habit and continue to the next book. The shortcoming of this author's book is that the left brain attacks the right brain very obviously. As soon as it comes out, it will be very toxic to those who cannot accept it.

After reading Chapter 25, the male protagonist's mind was filled with just that. A widow, an opera singer, a classmate, and another one the classmate mentioned. In addition to the pair of gold earrings and one Yuan Datou that were eaten by the system, the money earned by using the system was 5 Yuan Datou. In terms of business, the criminals in the supply and marketing cooperative case have been caught. But still no work. The last thing is the Liu Jun at the beginning, or whatever his name is, the one who set the trap for the third uncle and his insider. Nai Ying was caught in the "cinder grabbing" incident, but the trap is still there. To summarize, after rebirth, I didn't see between the lines that the protagonist wanted to make money or work. I just felt that he was playing his true role as his third uncle, a street kid who met the three women by chance.

This is written by a female author! Thirty chapters and three days of writing the plot, I'm convinced! The protagonist seems to be dealing with the crisis in a orderly manner, but in fact the result is incompetence and rage. And the second brother is simply the best treasure!

Why is it more chaotic after gk than before? It's because the changes were made too fast, resulting in a power vacuum, which was seized by local forces, and 156 broke the foundation of its predecessors. I feel like there is a big problem. My grandfather is literate and my father is illiterate. I'm gibbering

The plot is so procrastinating! ! One thing, accident, accident, or accident, as long as it is something to be done, it is all an accident one after another, what a stupid way to write! ! It makes me dizzy and nauseated.

The third person protagonist is called Zhao Fei, and the protagonist is called his third uncle. The supporting character is called the protagonist Lao San. In fact, the person dressed as the protagonist is named Zhao Dongfeng. Writing like a neurosis

A spy broke into the supply and marketing cooperative department, and the department leader let him go before. Being let go for the first time was already extremely toxic. A man who was obviously a professional in killing methods was caught and casually handcuffed and left alone, and escaped casually. The second time someone broke in, the protagonist had the map plug-in to take the lead, and the department was full of his own people. They were blown up by an agent. The protagonist hit the shovel and started to stand and hang up. Then a department watched the agent roaming the dragon. The agent protagonist had no plug-in and relied on his strength to beat the retired soldier with a gun in his camp.

Things written by typical Northeastern people are extremely exaggerated and illogical. They are just fantasies and bragging. From now on, all Northeastern writers will be blocked. I want to be blocked geographically.

Even with this bird's setting, it's all high-quality. If you write a rebirth novel normally, you'll definitely get thousands of orders. You have to highlight that you're different from others. After reading it a few times, you still can't stand it. Do you dislike having good grades when writing a book? Worried about too many readers?

It's really inexplicable. From the beginning to the end of the fight between Chief Qian and Liang Zhankui, the protagonist did nothing and watched the whole process. When Chief Qian stabbed Liang Zhankui, the protagonist still did nothing and just watched, and then ran away. The protagonist still did nothing and just watched

I was really poisoned by that two-on-one situation. How terrifying is an old spy in his fifties behind enemy lines? A person who has been practicing martial arts since he was a child and has strengthened his body due to time travel, and who can easily carry hundreds of kilograms, plus a veteran, can actually be knocked down by someone in a two-on-one fight. And the protagonist, without being affected by the recoil, can't hit a target that is only seven or eight meters away from the target. In broad daylight, an enemy agent is exposed at the entrance of the cafeteria at noon and can still hit a person safely.

Hahaha, finally got it

I felt relieved when I saw a lot of scolding in the comments section.

After so many years of reading, I read a chapter for the first time and I was so poisoned that I died. Is it even ranked in the top 50? Is this something a normal person can read? For a moment, I wanted to change platforms.

Can stuff that destroys your outlook be put on the shelves? ? ? ? ? ?

Can you tell me who is the editor of this book? Just cut your salary, you're just messing around like this.

Is the editor of this book a woman? Are resources given so much to books written by female authors?

I am super powerful, and it makes me sick just to stare at the widow. Either there is no heroine, or there is only one heroine. Who can stand this whole thing?

What an outrageous thing. In the first chapter, he dressed as his third uncle. Do you have any fetishes? Can this kind of article be considered a high-quality article?

I've watched half of it, and to be honest, it's worse than the one written in The Flying Era. It's forced to subdue the wit and the plot. Forget about stressing on leveling and stressing ability, I finally felt a little bit more excited while watching it. In order to satisfy the plot, I took another tough turn. The more I wrote, the more I went back. It was such a loss of character. No wonder the results were not good. Originally, I just read interesting articles, and the logic is almost forgotten, but you still want to be watery even if you read interesting articles. One drum is vigorous, the other drum is weak, and the third drum is exhausted. The more you watch, the less interesting it becomes.

Sima starting point. Is this also blocked?