Jidao: Start by Killing the Pseudo-Guanyin

Brother, the writing is good, but if you want to write a Ji Dao novel, don't write about fighting each other all the time, but have that kind of instant kill every three or two. Combine the cool points in a reasonable way. Or the kind of press from beginning to end. It would be too embarrassing if no one was killed by the bombardment, and the ancient counter-attack with explosive seeds was also not allowed. I want to write down the fearlessness of the Eternal Sword Master, risking his life for tomorrow, and the ruthlessness of the Knight of the Abyss. The helplessness of occasionally intervening in the mage's path. Add a little bit of the Ji Dao Tianmo's funny attributes. Of course, I said this blindly. Don't blame me if you believe me 😁😁

He is decisive in killing and doing good things. He is a good person with pig's feet.

The writing is good, but the visual impact of the big muscle tyrant's description is still not enough. I will give you a recommendation vote first. If it can be put on the shelves without any poisonous points, I will read the ads to support your reading.

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The realm is too confusing. Anyway, no matter what realm the protagonist is in, he can beat others. It's boring. Go away. Apart from providing a genre, the content of this novel is actually very general.

Has this contract been signed yet?

Brother, keep writing, as long as it's fun enough, don't overwhelm the protagonist's combat power and level 😁

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The character has been slightly changed to become a little more human or humane. See if it feels better

Come on, write it down slowly. After writing it, it will be difficult to agree with others. Just feel that you are not up to it.

It's pretty cool, but there's only one shortcoming: I keep making mistakes. I've used the points in the front, but there are more in the back. It's very funny.

The name of the protagonist seems too deliberate. It makes the protagonist look very ferocious and fierce. Maybe the character is so rare and twisted that it makes up the name. Every time I see the name of the protagonist, I feel a bit embarrassed. After all, normally no parents would give their children such weird and vicious names. Go away and make their protagonist's name Lu Sheng Wei He something more ordinary.

I need stronger form and teeth!

Go faster. I won't even see how long it takes.

It looks good, the killing is decisive and not verbose, come on

During a fight, if you chirp for a long time, you will basically be useless! People who watch Yakuza like to be straightforward, and fighting and talking are too dramatic.

Write more chapters and vote monthly if you have one

Three monthly tickets give me some encouragement, come on!