Don’t Evolve into Anything Weird!

The start was too rough for Weasel, but when he encountered a beautiful ghost and aphrodisiac mist, he couldn't get hard. The protagonist was simply the chosen one by Slaanesh.

I just watched Nurgle's Chosen a while ago, and here's another Slaanesh? Khorne caught a lot of them, that is, the blue-haired bird was too smart, otherwise it would be all together.

I feel like it's the opposite. Only when you have extreme happiness in whatever you do can you learn something. It's similar to how you enjoy learning mathematics and tutoring. Do you dream of learning every day? There is no reward mechanism here, you may only suffer from jade syndrome, and it is impossible to learn things for the sake of happiness and excitement.

The author is the reincarnation of Sun Xiaochuan. He has done too many bad things, so ordinary bad things cannot cause waves like the protagonist in the book. The starting point is to spread the curse of millet porridge while throwing Sun Xiaochuan away, so that everyone has to endure the pain of a single kill of rice porridge (Da Che Da Wu)

"Don't mess with the author, be careful of retaliation! He used to be a gangster, and he has tattoos on his thighs and lower abdomen. They seem to be written on a bunch of hearts and have open wings. There is also some kind of stick weapon hidden behind his drum. It's really scary!"

I couldn't stand it after just reading a few chapters😂. The protagonist, an ordinary person, relies on the limits that ordinary people can reach, and fools this bride with a love brain who has survived for tens of millions of years to pass the highest level of natural disaster. It feels like nonsense. It would be much better if the bride knew that she was being chosen and used the rules that restricted the protagonist to have an interaction instead of just a few dry words.

Point 1: 1. The novel has a big imagination, the exciting operation setting and the special protagonist are the attractive highlights. 2. Some copies are too lengthy and procrastinating (that Sand King). Some core creative points are good, but the process of revealing them is a bit cumbersome (lies and falsehoods) 3. The climax design of the copy is very good, but it is still the Sand King... Point 2: 1. The author is good at describing the special characteristics of the protagonist, but the description of the details of the battle is insufficient. 2. It is recommended to use strengths and avoid weaknesses, and give full play to the author's strengths. It can not only be about fighting, but also some small ideas can be added. Then when writing, first roughly hint at the strengths and weaknesses of both sides, and then introduce the protagonist's moves in a turn-based manner. Point 3: 1. The protagonist's personality has no obvious changes in Chapter 197. 2. Although the protagonist's particularity has been explained, there is a lack of description of growth and progress. 3. If the changes in the protagonist can be reflected, it will enhance the appeal of the story. To-do and remaining items: 1. Pay attention to the copy structure, simplify the process and avoid procrastination. 2. Improve the combat description and highlight the innovative points of the protagonist. 3. Deepen the protagonist's growth trajectory and increase character changes. Good medicine tastes bitter and is good for the disease. The author comes to drink the medicine

It's scary to think about it, the male protagonist must have tried men and women, men and women, men and women, men and women, women and men 🙂🙂🙂

Just like the title, after reading a few chapters, I suddenly realized that the protagonist is the Chosen One of Slaanesh, right? Continuously pursue greater stimulation.

The author is competing for the position in Sanjiang today, and it is not very stable. I hope that everyone who supports books will stop doing so and help the author by reading for two days. I will definitely repay the favor after it is released 😭😭