Begin to Become an Immortal from the Magic Gate Consumables

Have you ever entered a magic door? Just write it all out, take it for granted?

Not counting the Silver Alliance, this book actually has 43 paid consumables, which is terrifying.

Are you paying to write a book? It's very strong, bro.

Why is it still on the list despite being cool in the comment section?

I was attracted by Silver Alliance and read a few films. The writing is good, the plot and setting are also good, but why are the scores so poor?

Does this mean that there is another Shang Yin on top of Tai Yin, and then Shang Yin is the master of all Yins (Tai Yin is superior)? I feel like this innovation is unnecessary...

The writing style is not bad... But how can I put it? It's not that exciting. At least I haven't seen the chapter that can arouse the reader's emotions. You can say it expands the world view or it's a foreshadowing. After all, writing a book is for readers. I persisted until chapter 30 and didn't see anything that could arouse emotional waves. I can only say it's a bit regretful?

This Silver League was purchased by the author at his own expense

Man, this is such a waste of money How many years ago I gave myself a book reward of only ten or twenty, which made me feel distressed.

It was so well written that I stayed up late to finish it for you. Update now.

After reading Chapter 10, I still feel that it is a little less interesting. Maybe it's all because I've been practicing. The hang-up is huge, but it's not suitable for this opening.

I'm afraid I'm going to send it. There are over 200 chapters, but there are very few comments. I'm even in the top ten on the book friends list.

Can a figure of 300,000 words be on the bestseller list?

Come on, well written. Support

It seems that the author has a lot of ideas of his own

Another Madonna who spreads values ​​here

Dude, you are so perseverant, I admire you. I was still studying other novels at around four in the morning.

The writing is okay, but why is it so anonymous?

What are you writing? There are too many dramas in your mind, too many repetitive words, and it makes you angry. It's like a poisonous weed.