Start as a Bottom Adventurer and Clear the World

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Very delicious! Shockingly delicious! It feels like eating a very delicious plate of braised pork ribs. The potato inside is a very good variety that is suitable for cooking. It is not the kind that remains tight even after being pressed in a pressure cooker for two hours, but the kind that tastes a bit thick and sweet after cooking for a while. The chef is also a good cook! There was no messing around with the preparation (adulteration of private work), no wrong steps (using words indiscriminately, terrible sentence structure), and no use of an integrated chef (writing with Ai). I was so moved that I can't even remember how long it's been since I've eaten this kind of fragrant rice! Well, I really need this kind of fairy grass to prolong my life! Author, please keep it up, it's great! This kind of story requires a third-person description like a bard telling a story. Western fantasy needs this sense of storytelling to have an epic feel. It's very, very good, and the worldview feels very rich. After reading it now, I feel like I can see everything at a glance. 👍👍👍👍

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I always felt weird, and suddenly I figured it out. The author's writing style isn't bad either, but he just made the time-traveler aspect so toxic 😂. It is obvious that the soul has traveled through the aborigines, so when encountering something, he will recall the past. In addition, the protagonist's thoughts and comments are usually a bit modern, and the writing is as if the aboriginals have taken away the soul memory of the time traveler. Although it feels like the author wanted to make the fantasy adventure more localized, it is also mysterious when it is so localized that the protagonist loses any trace of a time traveler.

It's just a little delayed, and there are some inexplicable flash points that are a bit awkward 🙂

Yes, the plot has a good pace, the protagonist has grown up little by little, and is very solid. The combat system is not easy to break down at first glance, and the supporting characters are also well-shaped. The only worry is that I can clearly feel that the author wants to create a team of protagonists, which has already taken shape. However, since the protagonist comes with his own plug-in, whether the supporting characters can keep up with the growth of the protagonist in the later stage. It is still necessary to force various adventures later to enhance the strength of the supporting characters. This can easily destroy the rigorous combat effectiveness improvement logic that has been created before, and it can also easily lead to the collapse of the combat effectiveness system. I hope the author can solve this kind of problem later, or arrange the exit of old supporting characters and the entry of new supporting characters in the protagonist team.

I hope the author can be more steady and take his time, and not add too many overly grand plots in the early stages when he is still a novice. Remember the title of your book, take your time, and do whatever you are capable of. It looks good, come on, the author is great, it will become popular sooner or later.

The beginning is pretty good, but I don't know how it will continue. It's the Eagle Vision skill that allows the protagonist's first-level proficiency bow and arrow to easily hit a big spider more than ten meters away. I don't understand it. It is important to see clearly in archery, especially at long range, but the key is to shoot accurately. For a distance of more than ten meters, this mainly depends on archery skills, but the protagonist's archery skills are so low. Many authors, on the one hand, suppress the protagonist's ability, and on the other hand, they want to perform well. If you want the protagonist to be so good at archery, don't make the protagonist's archery skills so low.

Is there a female protagonist? Single and more than nothing?

I can only say that it is watchable, and when I saw it on the shelves, I personally felt that the shortcomings 1-Goldfinger did not start from the simple accumulation, 2-It focused too much on character portrayal, with too many memories, and the emotional foreshadowing was awkward 3-I felt that the arrangement of the female characters was too deliberate and, 4-Inserted too many things into the battle, such as recalling system information, etc. Advantages: 1-The writing is smooth 2-The character design is okay 3-No old and disabled plot

After Genghis Khan traveled to another world, he was considered by the dwarves as a wise king who did not kill prisoners because he still adhered to the concept of not killing those who were below the wheel In the dwarf country, fruit wine was far less popular than ale because the dwarves could not reach the fruit In the past, there was only one breast shield at most. It was not until the dwarves launched a war with other countries that leg guards were added Dwarf players like to choose loli characters when playing games, because this is the only one. Plant characters that are not as tall as them Dwarves say their bows can shoot two hundred paces Elves say their bows can shoot a hundred paces dragons say elves' bows have a longer range mind-reading monsters say no one is lying Dwarves have more famous scholars than humans Because dwarves are more likely to unlock achievements with a body of work Why do dwarves have technology so long before humans? Because dwarves will discover gravity earlier than humans who can pick fruits with just raising their hands

The improvement is too slow. Also, reality is not a game. Why aren't there powerful monsters on the edge of the deep forest? It makes sense that there are so many rookie adventurers and powerful monsters at the edge of the deep forest wandering out to make some tooth sacrifices and then go back.

How could the protagonist feel that the tree snake is worthless when he eats black bread and vegetable soup? Can't eat it? Snake meat is very expensive and tastes good

No, you bought something and wrote five chapters? Booked immediately.

The story is okay and the characters are good. Goldfinger is a bit cliche but concise. I don't really like those kinds of complaints or obscure cheats. Personally, I feel that the shortcoming of this book is that the author's writing style is a little more gorgeous, that is, the various descriptions are a bit excessive, as if the emotions are particularly full and need to be expressed. Maybe some readers will be infected, but I feel a bit embarrassed.

The story is great. It finally feels a bit like a fantasy novel. The adventure, the labyrinth, the heroic legends of the past, the protagonist's legendary adventure path, and the shaping of the world view is okay (I hope there will be more details of the fantasy world, especially some customs and customs). It is very comfortable to read in one sitting. I hope the pace is not tense. The protagonist maintains the image of a positive character. Don't let the protagonist's actions only focus on interests and not right or wrong. After all, he is the flower of the motherland.

Every time I read these adventure-type articles, I always wonder, when will we fight the dragon? Can you really write about fighting a dragon? Want to see fighting the dragon

The protagonist is finally going to be promoted. There is no problem in a longer story from 0 to 1, but it is recommended to speed up the pace of the subsequent transition levels. Only at key nodes (such as 5 to 6, 10 to 11), the lag time will be longer, otherwise the pace will be too slow. The protagonist must be promoted to 20, or even higher. If you write 500,000 words for each level, you will have to write more than 10 million words. The length is too long and it will easily collapse.

Nowadays, there are too many female characters that are too weird, and it feels a bit like a stud novel. Especially when the character of the female paladin appears, it feels very strange. There has already been a major female character with this "noble" label, and she is the heroine in the early stage. It will be very strange when the mayor appears again later. Two-thirds of the adventurer characters depicted in Lao Yaohua Battlefield are female, which gives people the feeling that there is a gender imbalance in this world. And there is a problem: Winnie shouldn't have such a deep relationship with the male protagonist at the moment. At least there needs to be a solo plot, right? Although the copy of the group inner demon can explain emotional changes, it still lacks feeling and is not powerful enough. The dwarf brother at least has a chapter of the premise of inviting you to dinner. Winnie is completely obsessed with the male protagonist after finishing the inner demon copy. Is it necessary to rewrite a contrasting character like a tiefling? And many of the main male characters are labeled as "dwarves", "dwarfs", "old men" or "mouthless" who cannot compete with the male protagonist. At present, I feel that the only normal and important human male adventurers who are the same as the male protagonist are the blond guy and the security guy who temporarily replaces the red-haired girl. It's not that stallion stories are bad, but there should also be normal adventurer lovers in stallion stories, right? In other words, don't make every important role a female. But it feels like the cat is also a female character. Well, it's weird. It's an adventurer team with a male protagonist, a dwarf and three women. Don't we dwarves have human rights? Just look under the bed😭😭?

I just saw the bunker. The writing style is mature and the plot is smooth. I haven't read Western Fantasy for a long time. This one is one I can read now. The author takes his time and writes at the current pace when conditions permit. Good works will not be buried! Recommended monthly tickets are provided.

Great article! Another excellent Western fantasy adventure novel in the recent fantasy area The writing is solid, spicy, fresh and natural, making people unable to stop at the first glance The characterization is natural and not pretentious, calm and mature The combat portrayal is exciting and realistic, making people feel like they are there The overall plot advancement is well detailed and accurate Unlike ordinary mediocre works, the plot advancement is written as a running account Overall, it is very good and can be rated as an excellent Western fantasy adventure novel with more than 85 points. If the author continues to maintain quality and quantity, we will definitely order them all after they are put on the shelves.

After reading Chapter 220, I feel that this relationship is a bit too full. The group portrait should be driven by the story, rather than relying on memories and words. Have you seen the later ones? Tell me how it was and whether it has improved...

It's much better written than many fantasy novels, but it's strange that the results are average and incomprehensible😡😡

A good-looking, pure adventure novel. Just like eating scrambled eggs with tomatoes, it won't be amazing. Once you taste it, you will say "this is the taste". The disadvantage is that the pace is a bit slow, and I personally think it is a bit formulaic. Every battle is about the protagonist breaking out in crisis or solving the problem after discovering the core of the problem. In short, I can give it a score of 7 or more out of 10. It is passable and not toxic but not explosive either

It's rare to encounter such a well-controlled depiction of a battle, intense without being disgusting or despairing.

Very well written! The world has not yet fully unfolded, and there is still much to look forward to in terms of career tree and planning. It is a classic Western fantasy, with a good rhythm, battles, and life stories interspersed with each other. This is why some readers say that the details are well controlled, and they are accustomed to reading and reading. The subconscious behavior of water, the world of flesh and blood, is not about game upgrades or cheating. Respect your opponents and respect the laws of social operation. People will get tired. They are taking risks, not cheating. It seems that they are not activated when they are activated. What is used is combat wisdom! It's not attribute crushing. Anyway, I feel very comfortable. I don't stack attributes right from the beginning. The professional level and adventurer level are clearly divided into categories. They are steel-level adventurers, but they can get stuck in professions. Professionals are level 20, and the first level is one day. It will not be embarrassing until the end of the wholesale of the Great Emperor, Emperor, and Supreme! The collapse of combat power is a common problem in all kinds of Xiu/Xiqi novels! These are the roots laid down by the early serial novels. Come on 💪Author!

? What the hell, how did it end?

I would like to ask, does this book have no character drawings or other illustrations?

It's so beautiful, one of the few fine works from the starting point Xi Nan, it's like I'm on an adventure. I give the author a big thumbs up.

The boss of the latest chapter, as an archmage, can be the chief designer of the Ark, but he is unable to send his family to a safe rear in advance? (I don't mean that it is completely safe, but the nobles stay in relatively safe places.)

Promise me, keep updating, I really subscribe and watch it, don't be a pig!