Immortality

It's too slow to pick up, and the protagonist hasn't appeared in many chapters. Now readers are impatient, especially in the early parts. If you don't find something exciting or interesting, how can you retain people? Compressing the latest chapter directly to half of the original chapter feels like a regular rhythm.

This is the first time I've seen this kind of novel where the protagonist doesn't appear in many chapters. Is it purely behind the scenes?

It suddenly occurred to me that if the protagonist compiled a poem about the disasters that were destined to happen in this life or the next life, and then spread it widely. What will happen?

I haven't seen this kind of writing for a long time. The writing is very charming. There are not many classical fairy tale novels. Although I have been writing about martial arts in the early stage, it has this kind of flavor. Good books should not be buried and should be rewarded.

The writing is very good. There are only 26 book friends, and they have given so many monthly votes, which means it is very attractive, but the traffic is not enough. Try to find a way to increase the traffic.

What a lousy book, with only such a small amount on the shelves, the author should be locked up and locked up in a dark room without being fed if he doesn't update dozens of chapters a day 🙂

It's very well written, but a bit verbose!

Such deep writing power, whose waistcoat is it? ? It's so scary for newcomers😰

It's very interesting, but I haven't written in the past two days. Why?

Very comfortable to watch. I'm actually curious about the author's personal knowledge. From the strokes, we can see that the author himself thinks deeply about the meaning of life and the world. I actually hope that the author can maintain this state. Don't cater to marketization. Slowly sort out your own thoughts during this writing process. Finally, I give some suggestions from my perspective, hoping not to introduce some intrigues and hierarchical situations of the jungle and the strong. Seeker. No matter what, at least get rid of these animal personalities

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20251011200053994","UserId":482740874} has more than a hundred chapters, why don't you put it on the shelves?

There is nothing wrong with the behind-the-scenes flow. The main thing is to spread the emotions around a story. After reading more than 80 chapters, it feels a bit scattered. Once scattered, I don't know which scene to bring into, and naturally I can't feel the ups and downs of emotions.

At present, the shortcomings of this book are obvious: It is slow to gain popularity, but it is too slow. It is already on the shelves. The protagonist is just acquired, and there are innates and masters in the back. And then the introduction also wants to turn to immortality to lead the development of the world. The plot is too scattered, the plot is a hammer here and there, and the plot correlation is too poor. There are also advantages, the protagonist is of high quality

Damn, this is really well written. It's one of the best among group portrait articles.

It's well written, why isn't there anyone?

Brother, if you want to make money, I advise you to change it quickly. Who knows that the novel has more than ten chapters with supporting characters, and the protagonist never appears at all?

The writing is delicate and a bit biased toward group portraits. There are too few protagonists, which would be fine if they were just behind the scenes. Overall, it lacks appeal to new book lovers and lacks excitement. You can add some major events appropriately to enhance the protagonist's sense of presence.

The writing skills are very good, but this kind of group portrait writing method is not popular

A group portrait? The protagonist didn't appear a few times! I've read Chapter 70 or 80, and I can't stand it anymore.