One Piece: Starting with a Single Equipment Slot

Write this again, what kind of disaster fruit can not only absorb diseases, but also pain and injuries? If it absorbs diseases and pain, it can absorb injuries, so what? People need to be proficient in medicine to use the fruits of surgery. It would be better for you to absorb all the concepts directly.

They were hugging each other, playing and pulling each other, and finally said that the world is so big, I want to become stronger, and I want to go out and see, so I won't take you with me. I patted my butt and left. When I met Luo, he was secretive. He played the Riddler and didn't tell others that his sister was still alive. He just stayed at his own place. It was really embarrassing.

The protagonist now carries three oil bottles and writes daily routine and training every day 🙂. There are very few fights. Is this the Pirate King? Why don't you ask me to play the Nuan Nuan Nook Game with Pirates?

It's better to change it in your heart. If someone sees you talking like this, you will be in trouble. After revising it and reading it again, there are fewer people writing like this recently. I didn't expect that there are still authors writing like this.

Can you just write about the world of One Piece? Traveling through too many worlds and encountering unfamiliar ones, I have no desire to continue reading! Can you also write it longer? Two to three million words is best. The previous book ended just after Invincible, and the dozens of heroines who paved the way for the entire book ended without making any progress at all! How is this different from a eunuch? I had no desire to open the previous book Traveling Through Many Worlds, and the last book ended before I even opened it!

Such an awesome Goldfinger writes such rubbish

It's hard to criticize, as I haven't learned any lessons from the previous book. . .

The idealistic world of One Piece itself is not lacking in fantasy, but many authors like to mix in content from other worlds or themes. However, there are not many fans nowadays, and there are really not many well-written ones. If the author really likes to write pirate fans, he hopes to publish a pure pirate series in the future.

The plot advances too slowly and there is too much nonsense. After so many chapters, there is only one Synchro 25% and one Specialty. There is basically no progress in the Devil Fruit. What are you going to do after writing this?

Can you write less about the psychological growth process of Joel and the protagonist? One Piece is obviously a hot-blooded series, but now it is almost written by the author as the growth process of an underage. The outlook on life and values ​​must be written in a large space, regardless of priority.