One Piece: Rising to the Top by Devouring the Rumble-Rumble Fruit!

One Piece is now an era of great dazzle and depression 😍, and hormone fruit is the answer 😁

The manga is so bad that I can't read it. I thought the plot before Ming Ge's chapter was pretty good, but the stuff I drew later made the previous chapters illogical and boring. Just refer to some fruits and settings in the comics. If you copy the plot, you won't be able to get around it. Many plots are simply illogical. If nothing else, the red-haired arm cannot be explained at all.

The author was stabbed in the back by Oda. The Thunder Fruit was still in Elbaf until Luffy went to sea more than ten years ago. In the end, it was eaten by Enel for some reason!

Don't do too many fruits, it's really meaningless. It's not good to make it too complicated, and it doesn't look pure. Even if you want to imitate Blackbeard, two are enough. Don't do too many. Multi-fruits are a big poison in pirate novels.

Don't write the original heroine in such a disgusting way.

You are a person with the Thunder Fruit ability. I have never seen you use lightning strikes several times. You have been fighting here for a long time, and I have never seen you use active and passive elementalization to avoid damage in battle. With your current strength, facing those non-mobile characters, even Whitebeard can use the Thunder Fruit handle to fly a kite and beat him to death.

At first I saw that the setting of Zi Shao Shao was interesting, so I saved it. But now I see that it is not my cup of tea. The original female protagonist is too boring, and the characterization is just a mess. There are obviously so many characters to choose from in the original work, but they just waste time and ink and not include some. This is a fanfic...

😅 Too many fruits are poison points? There are two Blackbeards on the surface. How many protagonists are there is not too much. What is the difference between having multiple fruits and those abilities given by the system? There's no difference, okay, why don't you say it's poisonous? If the writing is poor and the writing is not good, everything will be poisonous. Can the writing be called poisonous if the writing is good? Don't be too toxic and cause trouble.

If the author doesn't set up character cards, not many people will read the novel!

I like the One Piece fanfic, but I'm afraid the author is a eunuch