I Somehow Talked Your Ultimate Move Into Surrendering

Can you write a book? How come those who can use superpowers are all superpowers? I really vomited

"Awakening starts from watching movies with a female classmate in her schoolbag"

Sure enough, the divine book must be written by a divine person😋

Qidian should have a refund mechanism for eunuchs, otherwise there will be no punishment and a bunch of authors can write whatever they want and cut whatever they want.

The introduction is quite abstract😰

It's very similar to the kind of soldier king who was in school more than ten years ago, and then discovered special abilities, looked for things everywhere, and was able to awaken some abilities...

I was born in a heavy snow I have been fighting to survive since I was a child. 😠 People have seven emotions and six desires. When the thirteen emotions are added together, I understand my intention. 😮 The destined white dragon is the voice in my dreams when I was a child. 😴 In order to search for the White Dragon, I traveled all over the black mountains and white waters, and went through many twists and turns, just to find him every time in my life. 😏 I have lived through the cycle of spring and autumn, and when I was three years old, I started to practice guns As soon as I got started with the gun, I became one with the gun😎 I couldn't put it down, and at the age of nine, I realized the thirteen deadly spears😤 On the Nine Heavens, I killed the monster monkey in Huaguo Mountain😠 At the age of twenty, I was familiar with the world's gun manuals, and I was invincible in the world😔 They all said that I like to kill people behind my back. The charlatan killer 😃 I don't care, everyone has their own skills Some people strategize and win from thousands of miles away🤔 Some people can't open the door if one man is in charge😡 Someone traveled thousands of miles away to take someone's head🤬 And I just enjoyed the taste of hunting🤤 The thirteen fatal shots started from the mighty grace of God, like a hundred ghosts walking at night, unparalleled in the world. 😋 The wind is as calm as the still water, the light has no shadow, the seven swords have no trace, the sea embraces all the rivers, and the muddy people are muddy! I'm going to ask Buddha if we are destined to be together with Han Xin🤔? The Buddha said, You have no fate with Han Xin😭. I said seeking fate, Buddha said, then you have to wait for thousands of years😢 In this thousand years, you can see Han Xin🤕 But Han Xin doesn't know you are there, are you willing to wait😟? I answer, Hanxin, the national server, please fight😡. First shot! Long-term lovesickness brings long-term memories, but short-term lovesickness brings endless love! Lovesick! 😣 Second shot! A one-night stand lasts forever! Heartbroken! 😫 Seeing is believing, hearing is believing! The third shot! Blind dragon! 😵 The world is as small as a drop in the sky, and the moon is like a hook, it's hard to ask for anything else! The fourth shot, romantic! 😍 How many books are there, who in the world is worthy of white clothes The fifth shot, unparalleled! 😤 The spear is like a swimming dragon and the head of ten thousand soldiers, but the fate is like a dead end and there is no turning back! Sixth shot, white dragon! 😦 Only when you have experienced pain can you realize that all living beings are in pain. If you have experienced concern, you will no longer be concerned! If you want to cultivate Buddhism first, you need to cultivate your heart. One shot of wind and snow and one shot of ice The seventh shot! Forget the River! 😨 The clouds and fog hide murderous intent, sweeping thousands of troops tens of thousands of miles away The eighth shot! Kunpeng! 🤭 Even if Han Xin breaks his gun, I will only be injured. Ninth shot! Hundred Ghosts Night Parade! 👻 No matter how much hatred there is in the world, weeping at night will not last long It is God's will that the unjust souls will not complain, the spear will come out, and the king will weep The tenth shot! Seeking revenge! 👹 Don't bow your head when you see the king. The officers and soldiers of the three armies often kowtow. At the eleventh shot, they bow to the general and become a marquis! 🤴 You said that you will live up to your beloved in this life and share the beauty of the moon thousands of miles away. But when the person leaves, the sky is like a cloud of smoke. In an instant, your hair and black hair are white. In this life, you will be reincarnated as a young man. After you have loved, you will know more deeply. When the beautiful woman leaves, your hair will not be left behind! The twelfth shot, look up! 🤯 Millions of soldiers are waving flags, General Han Xin is invincible The thirteenth shot, my fate is up to me😡 I think there may be no marksmanship in this world, and there will be no sharing of strength in thirty years. In 50 years, there will be no gold and iron horses, stop Liao, stop Liao, fight and kill, when will it be... Thirteen fatal shots!

The levels of the passerby sequence are so high, a level 4 pops up here, a level 4 pops up there, and then suddenly a level 5 appears, which is a bit inflated. It feels like the protagonist has to kill himself to catch up even if he starts. It is better to add some life-saving improvements to the protagonist. The awakened people outside are starting to cause trouble, and the protagonist is just an ordinary person.

It is normal to modify the rhythm due to reader feedback, but whether the protagonist sleeps because of an idea or a premeditated decision, it is not a good choice in my opinion, and it is unfair to both ends. Yo, what a rough word, the protagonist feels like an incompetent husband when he sleeps. Originally, it was a normal relationship to do some tasks and get rewards. If the pace was slower and I had something to do, and I could see the benefits, I would accept it. After sleeping this time, I felt that both time and the system had been overpowered by the author, and the protagonist had no choice but to watch the time pass and then receive the formulaic reward that everyone knew would come. It felt as if his enthusiasm for reading had been dampened. Seriously speaking, the last time jump without content was a posthumous manuscript I read in a bad book. There is a feeling that the author has abandoned these plots. The feedback from readers was that they experienced danger in the early stage but lacked the ability, as if they were a step behind. To put it bluntly, they felt "suppressed", so the author introduced the potion to awaken the ability as if to "enhance" it, but in fact it was not. First of all, this kind of jumping method limits the protagonist's actions. There is obviously so much lead time, and there is obviously a system to take one step with one step, but in the end, everything is lost with one stitch. This is "suppression". Secondly, getting the mysterious fifth-level ability is actually not a "promotion". It is a certainty that the protagonist will get a good ability from the moment the system appears. Even a little bit of quests and draws will be there, so this is "flat" at best. As a result, after expectations are generated, the discoverer's ability is at this stage non-existent. It is still a gimmick to quench the thirst. The situation has taken a turn for the worse, which is still "depressive". So this did not bring about the so-called rescue of suppressing first and then increasing, but suppressing first and then suppressing, like a drop of water on my enthusiasm for reading. Yours sincerely, at 2:40 in the morning on January 12th.

What I think is the most rubbish thing is that he laid out more than 80 pieces, and the countdown was about to end, but he awakened a Xiaoxiaole , such a poor ability, it seems that you have worked so hard to become a little trash, and you are so overwhelming. You wrote a piece of shit, and you said a lot in order to look awesome. I was almost impatient to read it. I looked at it carefully and found that it was just like that. No matter how good you wrote in the front, everyone will think that you are trash in the future. You have conceived the beginning that has been laid out for so long, and I can't stop throwing myself into the street.