My God Development Game

I feel like there's something wrong with this book. It says that the main character is so cold and a lot of girls like him, but he says he doesn't like him and he's not horny, but his inner activities are so horny. He talks about cherishing life and killing decisively, which is so cool, but he behaves like a virgin.

The author has a low IQ, but forced to write a character with a high IQ, and it was a mess.

I finally opened a new book, and many girls are following me 😍😍😍

Good book, not bad 😍😍😍

100-102 Is a poisonous point. If you want to try it, don't subscribe more. I want to ask now where can I get a refund?

This plot should be faster

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 8, so I gave all my money to a strange woman I had just met once. In the previous chapters, I was still saying that I had no money to pay rent, and my mother worked three jobs alone in her hometown.

Good-looking Personally, I think it's a bit annoying when there are too many women 😜

The author has some strength, but he cannot keep up with the times and has too many poisonous points. Nowadays, censorship is strict, and stallion stories are a dead end. How can you attract readers with just a few driving points? In other words, harem stories rely on the characterization of the heroine and the interaction between the male and female protagonists, plus some driving skills to attract readers. The setting in this book is actually not suitable for opening a harem. The dungeon will force people to enter. The more familiar the person is, the higher the probability of being admitted. After being admitted once, they will have to keep entering. Ordinary people have no way to survive in the harem, unless the protagonist works as a nanny, but this is a big poison. So this book is actually suitable for a single female protagonist, who needs a ghost bride and kills her way through it. The layout of this book has been decided, so I won't say much. If the author intends to break out of his comfort zone and write harem novels in the next book, I hope he can refer to my opinion. I am a long-time reader of harem novels for ten years. First of all, the author obviously does not focus on love as the main line. The main line is still a dungeon, so the love line and the dungeon line must be separated. The number of female protagonists should also be controlled within seven, roughly divided into three wives and four concubines. There is no doubt that the main wife needs a heroine like the ghost bride who has a community of interests with the protagonist, is the protagonist's golden thigh, and can help the protagonist fight. Moreover, the Ghost Bride is an alien and has different logic from humans. It does not prevent the protagonist from starting a harem and solves the biggest moral problem in harem novels. It can be said to be perfect. This is why I was attracted by the introduction. The flat wife can be a talented girl like Xue, who grows up with the protagonist and supports each other. It's mutual support, not unilateral support by the protagonist. This character was well portrayed when he first came out. Unfortunately, it later tended to be reduced to a vase, and it also became a bit of a virgin, so its charm was greatly reduced. Another flat wife recommends choosing a boss with high combat power who can protect the protagonist through the early and mid-term development period, such as Ji, and then slowly attack the protagonist after the protagonist develops in the mid-to-late stage. The concubine can be casual, as long as the money is paid, the chaebol eldest lady, the protagonist will give extraordinary resources, she will give the money, and she will keep it as a vase. There is no need to carry a copy, just pull it out every day and pretend to be cool. The strategy must be fast, help the protagonist get rid of Chu Nan's identity as soon as possible, and by the way, it can also solve the protagonist's source of money, which is also useful. The second one can choose a reverse Bai Yueguang like Jiang Xiaohua. After the hero saves the beauty, he falls in love with the protagonist and lets her actively pursue her. You don't need to spend too much time on it. You just need to choose the right time in the middle and late stages. The main purpose is to show off in front of brothers and classmates and highlight the charm of the protagonist. The third one can choose the landlord. After all, some book friends like the attributes of married women, and I feel that the author also likes mature women. She can be a good wife and mother, taking care of the protagonist's food, clothing, and daily life, which is equivalent to a life assistant. The fourth one can be someone like this tea girl, someone who brings a little tea but is devoted to the protagonist, interesting and sensible. If some protagonists pretend to be relatively low-level, you can let her pretend. Don't have too many ambiguous relationships with other than the preset heroines. Don't die, cheat, give away, or miss the girl. This is very important. Finally, I want to complain. The Ye in this book is really unattractive. He is incompetent in literature and martial arts, and has no status bonus. Is it just because he is beautiful? But beauty is a scarce resource in reality, but it is uncompetitive in novels. Which heroine is not beautiful? This kind of thing is easiest to stereotype.

The death of a girl is quite serious, first a stranger who had a crush on the protagonist, then an acquaintance who had a crush on the protagonist, and finally a passer-by who had a relationship, even the protagonist's first woman died. And there is no point in dying so hastily. My armor and defense can't even handle it. There are probably a lot of missing girls, and several were confiscated when the first book was finished. This one should be better. They all have to die, and they won't be missed after they die 🙂 In summary, the copy is okay, but it is extremely unfriendly to pure harem parties, so be careful.

I hope I can take in Xu Shaowei, Li Jiayao, and Jiang Shan. After all, Yang Jian, the leg guy, has taken in several of them.

Personal opinion: It's not good-looking. It's a very white text. The characters are poorly drawn. They are all the template of the Urban Dragon King. People who read them feel annoyed for no reason. There are a lot of silly psychological portrayals of the supporting characters, which seriously affects the sense of the story. Of course, I know the author won't care about this comment, because I don't care either. This book was written just to make money. Water is the norm. There is no newness or creativity. It is comparable to the Internet articles from ten years ago. I don't understand why it was introduced to me. It's disgusting.

A waste of money, dying for the sake of dying, the two female classmates ended up in the end, and were deliberately arranged to die just because they didn't choose to stay inside and wait in the end. What's the point of all the effort to protect it? It's not that I can't die, it's that I lost all sense of it in such a deliberate moment. Also, reading the comments, there is a plot later in which Paradise coins are wasted to save three strangers? Feed poison?

Um, this book seems to be a novel that is written to make money, has no sincerity, and is a bit of a sham.

I don't know if the protagonist's fruit can be used before it's put on the shelves.

To be honest, every picture has its poisonous points. If you endure it and read through every poisonous point, congratulations, you will have the poisonous points in the next chapter. Wonderful novel, a waste of half a day

Is this a great level? Xiaobai's writing doesn't even count, I'm almost dead and still thinking about women, can you please stop being disgusting?

The protagonist was described very coldly in the first part, but then he started to resist and give up, and then he saw the Neptune sequence... The abilities described in the ghost bride copy in the first real world and the thoughts described later felt very separate, like two people.

His intelligence is no less than that of an adult border collie, and his writing skills are on par. He can look at pictures and write words.

I feel that since they are all harem stories, they should be collected. Currently, the protagonist is dissatisfied with several women who are interested in the protagonist, and they are afraid that there will be a thunderstorm later.

The setting is good, the beginning is good, but the rest is full of poisonous points. This is the first time I have seen a book with so many poisonous points.

This rubbish book recommendation is contaminating my eyes. It's disgusting.

I regret not reading the comments earlier. The writing is the same as urban writing from more than ten years ago. It really poisoned me.

I've opened a new book, save it first. I hope Panic and Boiling is good to watch

Most of the novels written now are about eunuchs. Let the author consider continuing to write Panic and Boiling.

Thirteen years have passed, as mentioned in the postscript at that time, and I will write a sequel when I have the opportunity to introduce the mysterious Xiu, the big boss controller and the Trojan system, etc.

I'm not a black man, but I really want to talk about the bad parts of this book I've read Chapter 58 so far, and the most important thing is that the plot is too dragging! Starting from Chapter 23, there is a plot similar to a cutscene, and it is a bit difficult to write it to Chapter 58. To put it simply, it is the three steps to become a transcendent. After completing these three steps, you will become a transcendent and marry the ghost bride. In fact, it can be written in two chapters. Some unnecessary details are stuck there, which really made me feel a little bored. I skipped more than 10 chapters without affecting the plot at all. By the way, I am a novelist, and it is really unfriendly to people who listen to novels. The second point is that the protagonist's left and right brains are fighting each other. He talks about looking for a girlfriend, and then he doesn't want three girls who are all good-looking. One of them is not a school beauty, and one is not as good-looking as the school beauty, but it's still okay. The bonus point is that he doesn't want a super big one. The other one is good-looking and has an okay body, but he doesn't have any features. To be honest, it's really annoying. I really can't hold it in anymore. It's okay to be a eunuch male protagonist, just be an eunuch honestly, don't spend time on women, honestly write the writing on the plot, or open up a wide harem and accept all the women with a high appearance rate, but you are depicting these women in various ways, with a high appearance rate and not accepting them at the same time. Isn't this pure poison? The other part is to reduce the intelligence, whether it is the male protagonist's intelligence or the supporting character's intelligence. At certain moments of crisis, the male protagonist always has a low IQ, and then the supporting characters also start to look for trouble. When the situation is out of control and a few people are killed, suddenly the male protagonist's IQ is online again. I am really speechless about this. It's really a bit It doesn't fit the character profile as written. It clearly gives the impression that the male protagonist is very smart, but he loses control at critical moments and ends up cleaning up the mess. It was okay in novels a few years ago, but it is really not popular now, because the character you give the protagonist is a high IQ, but it goes against the character. This is also a poisonous point. The rest of the novel is basically okay, and the minor points are not too harmful. I can still read it. I don't know if there are more books. I have only read 58 chapters. I obviously feel that this novel is not bad, but I can't stand it now. I will put it on the bookshelf for now. I will read it again when I have no more books to read and I am bored. The above is purely my personal opinion. I share my views on this novel. I hope it will not affect everyone's reading. If you have other opinions, I also hope that you can comment and discuss them together. If possible, I also want to continue reading.

How can anyone read this kind of mentally retarded novel? All the supporting characters have no brains.

Has this book hit the streets again? Fortunately, I gave up the book without reading much 😁

After reading books for so many years, this is the first book that has been fully updated and genuine. However, it is getting more and more outdated and there are dangers of eunuchs. I don't know what to say.