I Am an Ancient God in the World of Spiritual Practice

How disgusting is this Jiang Xueyao? When you open the book circle, everyone scolds her? The author is a genius for being able to write such a character, and it seems to be an important supporting role, or even the heroine?

To be honest, the writing style of this book is not bad, and the creativity is there, but the author feels a little pretentious, and the main and branch lines are messy. The author is too self-indulgent and fails to write clearly in many aspects, which gives people the feeling of looking at flowers in water. The novel is for the public to read. The author is too self-excited and some literary youths.

The writing is pretty good, why are there no comments

There are good points and bad points. It is a very provocative work. Some of the content and character creation are okay, which makes me want to continue reading. The most attractive aspect may be the creation of the female character and the interaction between the protagonist and the character. The e-sports expert of Minao Game said so.

I like reading Fenghuo's books. The young man can still persevere under all kinds of oppression to save the world and save those who have been treated unfairly. The dream of being young and unable to fight against the world will be shared with you in the book.

In fact, I only came here after seeing the recommendation in this book, but it hasn't been put on the shelves yet.

It's a bit slow to write. I saved it for a long time and finished reading it in two days.

Chapter 1: Very Self-Happy 😅 Comments on Wu Shennong

The first is the issue of the protagonist's realm. After fighting for more than two hundred chapters, he still practices Qi. Even if he has top-notch skills, he doesn't practice. Anyway, he is always just exploring information. The opponents that appear are more powerful than the last. You talk about ancient god skills, but you also say that the level is high and now the body can't bear it, eh, but I just don't practice or improve. Also, I don't understand the development of the plot. It was said earlier that the emperor was invincible in battle. He went to fight the monsters alone, and the monsters' sacred artifacts were stolen by the protagonist. Later, he directly attacked the monsters all the way south along the river and attacked the core area. I directly ask the black question ❓ Where is this country's military? Are so many people in so many realms fake? Your country has been beaten to the hinterland. What's the difference between killing randomly in the core area and being defeated? The formations are just decorations, and then the protagonist has a skill and the monsters are all confused and killed by others. This means that the protagonist is watching and ignoring the level, so why does it need to be chased by others? Anyway, there are more than 200 chapters, and there is no map expansion at the moment. The battle in the border town is just that, and there is still a competition in Jiuyou. Put that aside, the protagonist has a bunch of messy things, and King Kong is indestructible. Upgrading to the top level has not seen any effect. The current feeling is messy and frustrating. I have been fighting back and forth and am still in the Qi training period. Don't tell me that there are so many realms in the future. You can reach one realm a day. Isn't the world of cultivation based on strength? Of course, some people will say that the time is too short, so it doesn't take much time for the training game to devour other ghosts, right? Can the protagonist hide his own level? In summary, the author wanted to cram in too many things at once, and it was disorganized. So many settings had to be developed in the early stages. It didn't feel powerful, just confusing. The plot basically revolved around the battle in the border town. As a result, the other plots were like a mess, without any feeling, and even made me want to laugh.

Could this book be a little more relaxing for everyday life? I was breathless after reading the last book. There were endless copies and the protagonist was never busy. A passerby's version update was better than the protagonist. It was so frustrating to read.

First of all, in the original text, after the protagonist chopped down an invisible ghost, he pretended to be shocked and said that he seemed to have hit something. Ghosts can be hacked to death, and even ordinary cars can jump when tripped by invisible ghosts. It shows that ghosts have entities, but they are just invisible, as if the entities are invisible. Since there is an entity, it is definitely perceptible to high-level monks, otherwise it would be completely unreasonable. For example, for wind spirit root monks, the wind will always be blocked when it hits the entity. Those who major in music, or monks with enhanced senses, can also feel the rebound of sound when it touches the entity. The ghost in the original text can even speak (or vibrate the air), and the weak air vibrations caused by all the ghost's actions can be detected. It was impossible that there were no high-level monks in the battle at the border town ten years ago. In this case, it was also impossible that no one would believe what the princess said. Secondly, assuming that ghosts can transform between virtual bodies and entities at will, it makes sense that they cannot be physically perceived. But in this case, wouldn't ghosts be invincible? You can't hurt him, but he can hurt you. Even though his attacks are weak against high-level combatants, there's nothing you can do against him. But in the original text, the monk's attacks can indeed hurt ghosts. Then suppose that physical attacks can only hurt the ghost's entity, but attacks created by monks using spiritual power can hurt the ghost's incorporeal body, which is equally unreasonable. Because since the spiritual energy or spiritual power in the world of immortality can hurt ghosts, then spiritual energy can definitely "touch" ghosts. As a being who controls spiritual power, a monk can definitely sense the existence of ghosts. It is enough to directly release spiritual energy, or to sense the fluctuations of spiritual energy around him. The top monks and the sword-carrying guards cannot sense the existence of the pretense. I am a bit embarrassed here. Thirdly, it is assumed that the ghost has some very basic means that can block physical and spiritual perception, and as the level of the ghost increases, this method will become stronger. Obviously, the ghosts in the original text are either strong or weak, and the weak ones can be killed by the attacks of the monks in the early stage of Qi training. Ghosts of this level are also called ghosts of the same level in the Qi training period. Then we can know that monks of the same level cannot sense ghosts of the same level, and only high-level monks can feel ghosts of lower levels. (I don't know exactly how high the level is before I can sense it. To be honest, the combat power system is a bit broken, but the novel itself is a doomsday salvation theme, so it needs to set the point where the combat power collapses.) From this, there are definitely senior monks who believe in the princess. After all, the original article also mentioned that people in border towns were massacred by invisible entities. It is impossible that the ghosts who killed people were all high-level ghosts. Are they so cautious in order not to be discovered? Assuming that all the ghosts who killed people were indeed high-level ghosts, then there would definitely not be too many ghosts participating in the battle in the border town. After all, if there are a lot of ghosts like this, why are you acting? After putting the ball flat, you are still afraid of a ball exposing your existence. Therefore, it is estimated that there were only single-digit ghosts participating in this massacre, so to complete the massacre of ghosts, certain conditions must be met, such as the ability to kill in a large area, or the ability to kill quickly and move at high speed. People are entities, ghosts can cause harm to entities, and the ghosts in the original text did harm entities. So to be honest, from the perspective of a high-level individual monk, if you personally see a large number of people being killed by unknown forms or unknown existences, why can't you believe in the existence of ghosts? Finally, I just want to say a few words. The novel is very interesting and I enjoyed it so much that it doesn't matter if I don't have any brains. I hope the author can come back to his senses.

I hope you won't stop speculating. I have great expectations for Sister Yan, but as much as I look forward to it, I will be disappointed. Don't let us down.

When the protagonist is in a desperate situation, he draws his sword to attack the protagonist without any chance. As a result, the undead man breaks the sword and gives him a personal sword? Just because she is a woman? If that person doesn't die, he will die. It's not as good as the old-fashioned "protagonist's gambling battle". Not to mention being too violent, I have already "died" twice with a cheat, and the cheat repeatedly emphasized that I would die. With this experience, I knew that I was in a desperate situation and someone was going to set up a trap to kill me. I was attacked inexplicably. Not to mention the killer, wouldn't I even be ruthless? Are you still fighting and cultivating relationships at the same time? When the protagonist has incomplete memory and has never seen "her", shouldn't the first thought be to think about whether there is something wrong with her? Is it because of the state of affairs revealed by "a certain woman" that the enemy directly killed her without being framed? After all, the living will not care about the dead, especially the death method of being nailed on the bridge after crossing over, which has the element of warning and showing off. It can only be said that this player is not professional enough and does not like to use his brain.

Then "Thieves of the Three Realms" is obviously much better than the current rubbish name, unless you are clearly telling the author and readers that the theme of the outline has been changed, and you will no longer steal the Three Realms. And the early performance of your book is obviously not like the ancient gods, and it has no relationship at all. Changing the name is at least as awkward as changing the theme. If I come, then be more intuitive. "Desperate E-Sports Immortal"

This author's book has been abstract from the beginning. Those who can accept it think it has many advantages, and those who cannot accept it think it is a mess. But there is one thing that has been said since the end of the world. The author has not listened at all. Your writing is really bad, especially when it comes to women. It is even worse. If it doesn't work, let's not write it.

In the state of death, being crucified, stealing from the three realms, has the artist fallen into evil? 🤓

After reading the first chapter, I don't know where the ancient god is, but the author is quite amazing. Normally speaking, when writing about ancient gods, it should be about some kind of conceptual level ability or some kind of grand and terrifying mechanism. This author is good, he writes tasks, plays games, TM and the mall. When this ability looks like a system, sounds like a system, smells like a system, and tastes like a system, then this is either God or a system! ! ! The first one is such a serious off-topic. I really don't know how he went on to write it down. 😅

Might as well change the title of the book to: I was nailed to the bridge by a flying sword

I feel like you are the kind of person who keeps telling the story, who is slow to increase his combat power, and suddenly explodes when the climax of the decisive battle is reached, and who likes to write the history of high dimensions attacking low dimensions.

Sister Yan's books feel like they are screening Shen Nong Except for Purgatory Artist, which does not use poison in the early stage, every book uses poison in the early stage. It is only after walking out of Novice Village that I suddenly become enlightened. Is there a possibility that Doomsday Online, the famous work, made Sister Yan path-dependent, and found that poisoning people in the early stage is more popular than poisoning people (ps: Is Gu Xi like this)? So readers who are accustomed to being brainless will learn to think in the middle and later stages, and improve their poison resistance in the next book. Those with high poison resistance will become Shennong and discover food and grass, and those with low poison resistance will leave. We all have a bright future. There may be new readers who don't understand why they are still reading it after being so addicted in the early stage. Everything is possible starting from the extraordinary imagination shown to us by the author in Doomsday Online. Maybe I just like this feeling of saving the world briskly. (I definitely don't like Akaashi)

It's poison at the beginning. What kind of darts are hiding grenades? Are those grenades throwing cannons? How big of a dart do you need to hide a grenade?

When I came in, I looked at the more than 800 posts in the book review section. I didn't even look at them and just clicked Watch Now. Maggots swam wildly in the sea of ​​feces for more than an hour, and Akaashi Aka was sweating profusely. I really couldn't swallow anymore. I came in to see if everyone was scolding me. Could you please stop drinking?

I have endured it to chapter 44, where is the ancient god🤔? ? ?

After reading Chapter 74, I couldn't stand it anymore. The overall plot of this book is actually good, the characters are interesting, and it has a lot of potential. However, the logic is too poor, there is obviously no outline at all, and the setting is too basic. You can't see ghosts when you write about them, so no one notices them. This reason is so fucked up. You treat everyone as idiots. You can't find them if you can't see them? Is an invisible enemy something so unimaginable? This is a world of spiritual cultivation, and there are a lot of people who can become invisible. It's so funny that you set up such an apocalyptic setting. The world has been destroyed several times, and there are a lot of ruins, but the results are not recorded? Writing about the emperor and the top leaders of the human race is too idiotic. If you don't have the ability to write detective novels, you shouldn't design these things.

I'm tired of reading. The book is very good. I read almost 700,000 words without skipping chapters. First: The progress of the main plot is too slow. The senior year of high school is almost over. I have just finished writing 700,000 words for the early admission exam. I have gone through the game copy and training copy over and over again. Even writing a copy 100 times is not enough. I am tired of reading it. Second: Various Riddlers. This kind of writing is not pleasing to me anyway, but others may like it. Moreover, I wrote two sets of systems. I thought the protagonist was the only ancient god (immortal species), but it turned out that the same kind of characters were always here and there to play the protagonist. I don't know what significance it has in promoting the plot. I was tired of watching it. Third: 700,000 words, still on the 5th level of Qi Refining. The guards with swords all start with Jin Dan. The little maids are all foundation builders. A Qi Refiner does all kinds of jumping. It is right for the eldest prince to be unhappy with the protagonist. I would be annoyed if it were me. I am both a royal family and a Jin Dan. A commoner doing Qi Refining jumps around every day. If not, who are you annoying? It is better to change to a mysterious system, with sequences from one to nine, or any realm from one to nine. It is reasonable for the protagonist to keep bouncing around on the third, fourth and fifth levels. In any case, he is the backbone of the battle force. But in a system where the golden elixir is everywhere and the Nascent Soul is not as good as a dog, a broken qi refining has a relationship with the prince, and is entangled with the princess, the legitimate daughter of a noble family, and a childhood sweetheart, all based on the cultivation of the fifth level of qi refining? Invincible fighting power through refining qi? In the eyes of normal people, I can't even defeat a maid. I don't know what the mentality of you readers is. Anyway, I feel that if I am a normal person in the book and my potential is not converted into strength for a day, this Qi-refining commoner is not worthy of such a jump.

Looking at Xu Yuan in foreign battles, Xu Yuan, the world champion on earth, urgently needs to prove himself as the champion of the three realms. Jungle: Xu Yuan, world champion, one against nine record can be checked, we are all working hard to survive. Top order: Zhao Afei, mixed martial arts is a science where you can get high points while lying down. I mixed with Brother Pheasant and Brother Haonan, and my boxing is very fierce. Mid laner: Jiang Xueyao, the midfielder and jungler are invincible in the world. If you have anything to say, talk to my magic weapon and go out with the six-god outfit. Assistant: Lu Yiyi, what my parents left for me is yours, and I am yours too. Who says money can't buy love. Shooter: Yang Xiaobing, don't wait for me to develop. The jungler will help me catch it. Come roam in the middle to help protect me. The gangsters also have to care about me. I'll ride the horse and eat, eat, eat.

Very well written, even beyond the realms of possibility at this point. I think the biggest change is that I am no longer the Riddler. Many places are clearly described. Many authors, especially those with clever ideas, are very prone to intracranial orgasms. They think a lot in their heads, but writing it down is not the same thing at all. It makes them confused and confused. This is because their hands cannot keep up with their brains. The author has this problem in his previous books. Another little question: How to solve the problem of "everyone is equal" in the extraordinary era where great power belongs to oneself. Just like the protagonist treats the people who have city defense problems. In our era, it is politically correct and objectively correct for everyone to be equal, because the gap between people is not big. I am not as smart as you and my descendants may (not rule out) be as smart as you. But the Extraordinary Era has blood, talent, and inheritance. How to solve this problem. Just like the book about abandoning a city to protect a few people, why is it wrong and why is it right. Give me a hypothesis: The reason why the human world can still exist now is because the human heart (ignore the name) is parasitic on Lu Chenzhou. Once he dies, the human world becomes the same as the underworld. Then wasn't it right to sacrifice one city to protect one person?

Sister Yan, I warn you, this book must not be less than 1,000 chapters. As long as you keep writing, I will put all my monthly votes into it. Come on, Sister Yan, don't give up. You must write as long as Doomsday Online. Don't be too hasty like the artist in purgatory. I will stick to the original version. Don't make me sad 🥵😥😭. Fight. Be youthful. Sister Yan, you are still young. You must persevere and write for a long time 😡😡😡

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Character Name: Bai Yuanze Identity/Occupation: Paladin (isn't that too conservative o. O) Character/Characteristics: Introverted, not good at words, but occasionally telling some cold jokes in a serious manner; paranoid, cold on the outside and hot on the inside, with mild symptoms of social phobia and a strong sense of responsibility. Black hair and golden eyes, he wears a brown windbreaker all year round, lined with a black combat uniform, and does not wear glasses. Highlight Moment/Ending Concept: [Dead Fire Chasing Light]: "Burn it all, you will kill with one strike" (I have a brother who is deceased). One sentence message: I have been brothers with you for generations, and I have an unfinished relationship in the world. (I turned on automatic subscription and haven't read the books yet, so I can only write a rough 0.0)