If I Stop Pretending, I Will Be the Immortal King Reborn

It starts with a divine book, but then there are more and more bad plot designs. I was originally prepared to welcome the birth of the divine book, but unfortunately the book becomes less and less thoughtful later on. If it hadn't been written well in the early stages, I wouldn't have read the latest chapter. If it continues to be like this in the future, this book will have no value in reading. Author, please take a break and don't get carried away. It's better to stop and think about it if it goes on like this.

Can you write another unlimited flow novel? What I like the most is the description of the protagonist in the midst of panic and boiling. The book is good at coping, struggling, surviving, and sacrificing.

Three recommendation votes a day, come on Hongdou!

Lu Anzhi: "I have been thinking about my soul in the jar for so long, and why don't you show it to me?" Xiangsi Xihongdou: "You are pretending to be happy, and then what? Then what?" "Keep pretending, the Immortal King is reborn, will he still be an Immortal King without a slap in the face?" Lu Anzhi looked contemptuous. "Aren't you afraid that your parents will get tired of watching it? The plot, the exciting plot, is not a slap in the face." He scratched his messy hair, Xiangsi washed Hongdou's face, and sat at the desk in confusion to meditate. "Spread flowers, spread monthly tickets, give me some encouragement. Come on ＾0＾~" The parents of Clothes and Food touched the author's head with the tickets in hand, "Don't worry, the great masters squeeze out toothpaste one chapter a day, you can do it." "I I want new skills, new toys, new routines, such as Gundam..." Lu Anzhi looked at Da Da cutely, "I also want to be a maid, well, that is, I can give Da Da a squeeze on the shoulders, rub the legs, sing a song, dance, and serve tea..."

It's so little, let's keep it for a few months before looking at it 😁😁

It started off quite interestingly, but unfortunately, things started to go wrong later on. 1. The question that everyone criticizes is why we have to work so hard to join this sect that specializes in cultivating "immortal emperors" but it will be exterminated after a hundred or so years, and the strongest one is a golden elixir. 2. The portrayal of the senior sister is very poor. It is forgivable that she has no strategy after rebirth. After all, she just reborn and can't figure out the situation. She likes to retreat when encountering problems. In fact, she is an ostrich. But since I agree with 37 in my heart, what I think of is not to win over or improve my favor in advance (this is easy, after all, my identity is there). Instead, I thought about waiting for my brother to comfort someone after they died. 3. The protagonist is too "junk". Needless to say, his talent is set up for the so-called pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. But looking at it now, it is obvious that he is pretending to be a pig. He has no ability at all, his tone is louder than anyone else, and his way of doing things is not as good as that of a child. He has lived in modern times for twenty years and lived in the world of immortality for more than ten years. The Gouzi incident was solved by accident, otherwise it would be trouble again, and then the revenge incident was courageous and cunning, forcibly leading out the senior brother. The end of the senior brother incident was an anticlimactic headline. The reader thought it would be satisfying, but ended up feeling sullen. 4. There are too many so-called reborn children of destiny. In fact, even the original fairy king does not need to appear. As long as the protagonist thinks he is the fairy king and then keeps pretending or leading out various stories according to the so-called hundred wishes. Now this will make people feel complicated. 5. There are also various associations from the past, such as puppet masters making dolls, T1000 robots, etc. Until now, cultivating immortals is not like cultivating immortals, and teasing Biwen is not like teasing Biwen.

After reading the introduction, I feel like you won't be able to survive if you get something that doesn't belong to you and at the same time offend a powerful reincarnation, right?

I don't know why the protagonist never practices and just does something random all day long. And the writing is really embarrassing. It makes me feel bad all over.

What's wrong with Qidian? All the people recommended to me were The Eunuch, and I saw four or five of them in a short time.

The beginning is good, the setting is okay, but it's too long-winded. The protagonist has no purpose in doing things. He just comes out as he thinks. He is a useless person with no ability to protect himself. He shows off when he gets something. He brags everywhere that he is the rebirth of an immortal king. He doesn't practice the skills after he gets it. He doesn't look for your list of opportunities. If you act like this, let alone the immortal king, you will not be the ghost king.

Chapter 128 ended because the Immortal King found out that he couldn't kill the protagonist but could he kill the author? The subject matter is originally good, but the content can suddenly make a big fuss💩, will it not be used by the genuine Immortal King Ten Thousand Realms? 😡😡😡

Emm,,, it's already 110,000 words, the protagonist and his sister are still mortals,,,, emm,,,,, this rhythm,,,,

Good guy, I can't bear it anymore in Chapter 7. Is this the writing style of a master? Awesome 😒

I won't explain it here even if I open a new book. It's okay to talk about eunuchs

This is the only book I'm happy about because of the eunuch. I'm finally back on the journey against the Silver Trojan. Oh yeah

I will reward you with a starting point of 100 coins, and I will support you in the future.

It's okay to rewrite the book, Infinite Flow has a good idea

A good book, but there are too few updates. I thought it was not on the shelves 5 monthly passes are provided. I am surprised that the results of this book are average. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write more

I'm going to be circumcised soon. Before I leave, I have one wish: I hope the author will update it ten times a day.

I don't have much money, but I will reward you with 100 starting coins first. I will subscribe to them all in the future. If you have a monthly ticket, I will definitely support it.

I thought it would be twice as happy if I opened it twice, but then I opened it and saw (I was raising books before), what a guy! No updates for a month

I still wanted to gain weight and look again, but it turned out that it was gone.

Damselfly has opened a new book, welcome everyone to global gamification: god-level beta players

Wouldn't it be nice to write it directly as a refreshing article? Anyway, the first few books have already started, why not do it this time without stopping, the writing style, the characters, the refreshing article, tm is not a refreshing batch

I haven't read it yet. I just read the introduction and I want to ask if this turtle can look at the sky.

Recommended novel Chang'an Pictures, a wonderful historical novel