From Martial Arts Sect to Immortal Sect

Seeing more than two hundred Zhao Zhen's calamity there. It was very, very deliberate, and it made me feel as if I had a fish bone stuck in my meal. The supporting characters and protagonists all seem to have their brains 💩, and they don't use any logic just to engage in this doomed plot. . Abandoned😓

Shit, the protagonist lies down every day waiting for someone to knock on the door.

I am ready to book it all. There is no weak point in this book, and the main character's IQ is online. I really like reading novels about cultivation, management, and invincibility. The scenes and descriptions of the supporting characters are also good. I think it can be ranked in the top ten in the monthly ticket list. There is no good book in the top ten in the monthly ticket list. The Decaying World is good, and it is okay to become a saint in the martial arts world. Apart from these few books, the books on the monthly ticket list are simply amazing!

Don't look at it. The early writing was okay, but after it was put on the shelves, it became more and more disgusting. There was no logic in what he did. He suddenly went to kill the emperor with passion, and then left his things to his grandfather who had a good reputation and asked him to go back, so he gave it a few injections. It's starting to look like AI (he's still seriously injured). Even if you don't know about loyalty, it's probably very simple to take a dying old man back to live in his old age. Letting him go back by himself made me laugh angrily, and he even left his money behind. It simply goes against the traditional virtues of the Chinese nation, and I'm getting angrier every time I see it. Don't fall into the trap!

Well, I haven't read a novel about cultivating immortals for a long time. I have read more than 330 chapters so far. Let me share your thoughts! I think this novel about cultivating immortals is an all-round growth-oriented genre, including invincible flow, collection, cultivation, and farming. It seems more enjoyable and less poisonous. The protagonist has an online IQ, decisive killing, reasonable plot, clear logic, and no obvious pitfalls. It is worth recommending! I have read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals before, such as genius flow, mortal cultivating immortals, and family cultivating immortals. I feel that I have read too many, and the plots are old-fashioned and the settings are all similar. Basically, after one or two chapters, it is no longer interesting. After that, I will read Urban Almighty, Doomsday Survival, and High Martial Fantasy... Recently, there is a shortage of books. I turned to the immortal cultivating section and found this one with about 1 million words. I became addicted after trying it. I finished it in 5 days and I still have more to say! This book mainly tells the story of 7 orphans who founded a sect after being abandoned by their master. Senior Brother King obtained the golden finger of the sect (completion of sect achievements can copy the destiny talents of other outstanding disciples, and can obtain immortality inheritance and resources out of thin air). After that, he led several bronze junior brothers and sisters to continuously recruit apprentices and develop the sect. Apprentice training, farming development and staged powerful enemies run through the entire story. I thought it was a group portrait before, but after seeing it, I feel that it is just a single protagonist! There are several famous scenes in the book, one of which is killing the boss of the martial arts demon sect who has been in power for decades with one move, which surprised the world! One is the scene where the martial arts swordsman comes to duel and is pointed at by the one-trick swordsman Wanjian Guizong. There are many more exciting points! From the martial arts to the cultivation sect, it has become more and more mature. Now I have left the novice village to contact the cultivation sect to start the hegemony route... I hope the author can be more creative and exciting! As for the emotional line, which is relatively light, I only found brother-sister love, teacher-student love, and sibling love. There is no love. I don't know if it is a no-heroine route! The progress of this update is pretty good now. Come on, author!

It is a medium readable level. It does not describe the special functions of various characters' power systems. For example, the sword cultivator is supposed to be extremely destructive, but it is written by the author in a mediocre way. It has no feeling. It is written purely for the sake of sword cultivation. For example, the thunder spirit root of the first disciple does not describe the power of thunder and the restraint of thunder on ghosts. The third junior disciple Jiang Zhixia, who is supposed to be the strongest sword cultivator, is not as good as the first disciple of thunder spirit root. I don't understand!

This author's work literally touches my G-spot. It's very enjoyable to read, but it's a pity that there aren't enough words!

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Read two hundred chapters in a row and make a brief review. This book can be read. The author will read book reviews, correct any mistakes, and patch any loopholes. The status is extremely obvious. When it is good, the plot design is good and the character arc description is also good. When it is bad, the old routine repeats itself and the water floods the golden mountain. Suitable for reading dozens of chapters together, but not suitable for following through. The author is extremely good at matryoshka dolls. If divided into levels it should be the early stage of matryoshka dolls now. You can still see new things and new designs every few dozen chapters. The overall evaluation is: There are constant small poisons, but no big poisons. After being reminded by book friends, I will take the initiative to find patches to detoxify. Medium grain. Change the old routine and have better food and grass. Changing the nesting dolls, hydrology, and becoming a fairy grass is not a problem.

The updates are getting more and more popular like this. It's almost boring to watch. It's hard to vote for a monthly vote

This protagonist feels like he's lying flat and can't do anything.

This is really disgusting. If you have the ability to calm down the world, you don't do it. You have to make so many people homeless and have their families destroyed. It's really disgusting. You have to do something selfish. If you want to calm down the world as soon as possible, you can have better development. You have to live and die to disgust people. It's just a rotten fish and a rotten shrimp. It's nothing but chicken feathers.

The protagonist is not powerful enough to overpower the author, which reveals that the author is a mess in writing fight scenes. Various psychological descriptions are exactly the same. XX is full of fear, XX is shocked in his heart, and he is exhausted. In terms of plot, there are endless matryoshka dolls, the apprentice gets into trouble, the master shows himself in front of others, the master surrenders to the strong, the apprentice guesses the strength, XX is shocked in the heart, the apprentice is guided by the strong, Li Qingqiu is happy, the apprentice becomes stronger and gets into trouble. The main theme of the whole text summarizes "How strong is Li Qingqiu?"

When you are short of books, you can read it, just half of it. The author sets the protagonist not to take the initiative to cause trouble, but the author also sets the world background to be in troubled times, and the Qingxiao Gate where the protagonist lives is full of dolls. The master who is best at controlling rivers and lakes abandons the protagonist and the others to explore immortality at the beginning. Every time the enemy reaches the door, the protagonist then takes the initiative to attack the door. The opponent in front is obviously hostile, and the protagonist does not use his own advantages to understand the enemy and ambush. There is always only one set to strengthen the self-defense of the mountain gate. At this stage, the protagonist group has not yet developed a defensive or offensive mountain gate formation. It just increases the number of defense teams, commonly known as patrols. Inaction does not mean doing nothing. Today's novels always misunderstand Laozi's inaction. This book has only one major bummer (for me). As the background is set in troubled times, the protagonist is not proactive and suffers this loss all the time. The author does not change the protagonist's mind. That is, the troubled times set by the author will not allow the protagonist to be one of the few. The most exaggerated one is that the protagonist knew that the "Ancient God" was going to destroy the Qingxiao Sect, but the protagonist still defended himself, causing the "Ancient God" to directly send clones to kill the Qingxiao Sect, resulting in the death of many disciples in the sect. The protagonist then directly brought a sword god to kill the Qingxiao Sect and destroy the opponent. It's because the protagonist, as a modern person, has a golden finger and only defends his own mountain gate so many times, but still gets killed and doesn't change his mind... It's really the author who forces the protagonist to suppress, and then constantly uses this conflict to continue writing.

It feels quite awkward. You can say that you are aloof and yet you are worldly, and you can say that you are worldly and yet you are pretending to be aloof. Passively take a beating and then fight back. Is this considered an anti-armor attack?

This kind of thing can be considered a master, so I really have to write it 😁

I can't continue after reading Chapter 368. The pace becomes more and more messy as I write, and there's that cloud. It's the first time in so many years of reading novels that I've seen such a disgusting character. If you want to write a heroine, write it well. When you're rescued, you'll give a shitty description. As soon as you get started with the show "The Gift of Destiny", you fall in love with the hero and start pursuing her. I asked you, what's your face? Then until I watched 368, this character had no personal plot development at all. Her function was to use the two fate pendants installed by the author. When she appeared, she was either writing about how awesome these two fortunes were, or she was trying to show off her presence in front of the male protagonist. The male protagonist also looked like he doted on her and did not dare to speak loudly. I thought I was reading a third-rate female channel novel. "I was imprisoned by the magic sect at the beginning and was rescued by the best master in the world. I used my super talent to capture his attention and succeeded in becoming the sect master's wife." It's true that I recognized the many plots in your book that I thought of all the time. I also recognized the routines that were repeated over and over again. However, the description of such a disgusting character and the continuous addition of scenes are really unbearable.

As the leader, Li Qingqiu is basically a puppet master, caring about everything big and small. As small as the practice of each disciple, the family is short-lived; as big as the general situation of the world, the world is in chaos. We have also set up two intelligence systems, overt and covert, so that the emperor is not busy. Regarding the sect's contribution system, the leader Li Qingqiu didn't care at all and directly brought him to his side to train him. You must know that your golden finger is mainly to copy the fate of Qingxiao Sect disciples. If someone has good talent, you can just copy it and cultivate it according to the sect's rules. In a few years, he will be able to come to you, and all the top sect members will use the back door. More realistic than reality. In fact, the beginning of the book is very attractive. I initially thought that the protagonist used the golden finger to obtain skills, opportunities, blessings, etc. To train several junior brothers and sisters, grow up with them, use them to develop the plot, develop the sect, and the leader is responsible for the secret. In the end, they all became slightly more important minor roles. The way the plot unfolds is for each entry disciple. So far, it has more than 600,000 words, and each of the hundreds of disciples of the small Qingxiao Sect has names and plots. My memory is really confused. Does anyone still remember who was the first person to join the sect? (Stop flipping through the book, I see you). One thing that makes people speechless is that the fate of the third junior brother is basically the same as that of the Sword God. The sword god was still a challenger who came to seize the sword. After being defeated, he entered the sect. Not only did he describe more than the third junior brother, he also created a sword cultivation system. There was even a "Mrs. Emperor" who came out, and the "Mother Emperor" didn't come back. I won't wait for him to come, I'll rebel and leave first

I can write a lot of boring nonsense. The fight was passed off in one stroke. I can't believe that this is a great writer.

A dozen chapters ago, the Demon King of the Three Souls Sea Realm had been arrogant for tens of thousands of years and could even threaten the Azure Dragon Realm. As a result, it is now discovered that there are more Shenyin True Heaven Realms in Qinglong Domain than dogs. In their eyes, the Demon King is just an ant. I was jumping around for so long!

Every time an enemy comes, just write a bunch of useless dialogue and you'll get a lot of trouble. The so-called Tianjue Ranking has no gold content. Even the tenth Dragon Warrior cannot beat this one and is afraid of that one. What kind of top masters are like cabbage, popping up every three days?

The author has no life left, and now it's just a routine. It was okay at the beginning, but the more he started to accept disciples, the more he wrote, the more he wrote, the more he wrote, especially the combat power. In order to prevent the Qingxiao Sect from being too strong, he started to keep bringing out patches with higher combat power Before killing the emperor, it was quite interesting, but after the emperor was killed, there was no life left. Even a guy like Xuan Gong had to be whitewashed and used?

Author, you really made me laugh. Are you a cultivating sect or a local competition for hegemony? When it comes to local hegemony, you set up a secret hall to gather information. I won't say anything. For the Immortal Cultivation Sect, take a look at which Cultivation Sect needs a secret hall? I have become an immortal, but I still want to get information. I wish your works will get better and better. I will delete them first!

Why do we say open high and go low? The whole story is mainly about the management of the sect. The author had the idea of ​​making a group portrait from the very beginning. The characters and development routes of each character were conceived, and it was not completely facialized. I think this is very good and eye-catching. However, as the story develops, it changes a bit. The first thing that bears the brunt is that I don't dare to write an exit. There are obviously many characters with reckless personalities and impulsive backgrounds. The world in the novel is not a peaceful and prosperous age, but one of the main supporting characters is immortal? There are destined to be more and more roles. The stage is so big and if you all play, a bunch of people are destined to be marginalized and become more and more useless. I don't understand why the author dare not write an exit. Another thing is that the plot conflicts are becoming more and more formalized. The villains are like running water, leaving no impression at all. They just repeat the same process: appearing without any foreshadowing, being beaten to death by the protagonist or being treated as a dog. No, is this the only type of villain?

I really can't stand it any longer, so I'll stop reading it for the time being and come back to read it when it's finished The same old template matryoshka routine, nothing new Let's talk about the problem The focus of this book is [Fate] I can barely accept other fates, but there is a fate in it called [Hundred Refined Demonic Body] I remember it was the physique cultivated by the first-level monks. Its function is a hundred times the vitality, and as the level increases, it will always be a hundred times, and other routes can be developed The invincible physique developed by the first-level monks is amazing, kids Not only that, but also the exercises, spells, and refining. Dan array, weapon refining, talismans, etc. These are all created casually by the first-level monks There is basically no explanation for cultivating immortals. At most, it is just a brief introduction without any details The plot is to create a sect in Kyushu, activate the golden finger and then the surrounding They are all enemies, and the story of a matryoshka doll begins The sect is not like a sect, but more like a martial arts hall Mortals can enter and visit, and the elders' meetings are also very rough It doesn't feel as serious as the cultivating sect It's like playing house and drinking, and the realm is also casual. Broken At first, when I saw that there was a thunder tribulation in the second realm, I thought that the cultivation level would not depreciate so quickly. However, I still underestimated the author, and he was still the same as before After that, there was something like Suzaku blood that can change the qualifications This Suzaku blood is a treasure created by the secular martial arts family using the first-order auspiciousness br>After taking it, the qualifications of the monks will be greatly improved. It's so awesome that I can't say anything about it The plot is basically like nesting dolls, with dangers coming one after another It will be boring if you watch it too much, I can't stand it anymore A book about cultivating immortals, the depreciation of cultivation, magical skills, magical powers, and a comprehensive account of cultivating immortals. Passed through The destiny is innate, and the destiny will not change after the day after tomorrow. Geniuses appear together. As long as they encounter villains and the like, they will be accepted into the sect, and they will basically have a destiny that is loyal or good at teaching others. Then they start to lose their wits and become the absolute supporter of the protagonist. As soon as they come to the protagonist's shabby sect, they will Attracted by its vitality, no matter whether they are hundreds of years old monsters, they will all be impressed by the powerful charm of the protagonist Then continue a new round of matryoshka dolls Compared with the previous one, the speed of matryoshka dolls is slower, this is the difference Others, there is no big difference The current progress is 367 chapters

I'm really speechless. The master can be traced. Why don't you go and see the master? It's obviously written with such respect, and I know that the master is seeking revenge for the sake of revenge. Going to see the master is not a provocation. Why don't you send someone to have a look? I'm really speechless. I have no outline at all. Now I'm getting more and more brainless.

After reading Chapter 300, I am still in the novice village. Still with cheats, my level is 2 small levels higher than that of my apprentice. I am still a master at this. It is really hard to suppress.

Yuncai, what you wrote is disgusting. If Yuncai had not been saved by Li Qingqiu, it would be okay for you to write like this. But after Yuncai was saved by Li Qingqiu, it would be really disgusting for you to write like this.

My blood vessels are about to burst when I watch it. I came here because of the fame, but I ended up being angry. Because of my trust, I subscribed too much at once. I know my blood vessels will be broken when I watch it. If I don't watch it, I will feel aggrieved because I have spent money on it.

I have read a lot of chapters. How can I put it? The creativity is very good, but the writing is too poor. Often the words are inconsistent. The idioms added are often completely opposite to the atmosphere. The character's personality is confused. How can I say it is confused? The character's personality is basically determined when he appears, and the protagonist system can also see the character's behavior. But as I write, this character, like all characters, cannot be distinguished through the dialogue in my head. There is even more nonsense. I didn't want to read it, but I subscribed. I'm very worried about spending money to feel uncomfortable.