On the Night of the Death of My Entire Family, My Yi Jin Sutra Has Been Completed!

I read two hundred chapters The writing is smooth, the plot progresses smoothly, there are occasional small demotions, and there are small strategies to adjust the rhythm. As an invincible style, it is already a masterpiece. 0 But there are two points that I have to complain about First, this is not martial arts at all. It is closer to the fantasy martial arts like Fengyun. Ordinary martial arts people smash a big rock with one palm and are already famous masters in the world. However, top masters can shatter a building with their inner strength revealed when they are angry. The gap is too big to give the town a middle score with one stroke The second and most serious point is that I am too bad at mathematics. I don't want to say that those everywhere are top masters who can easily defeat everyone in the world, but they have to be sewer rats and don't know where the resources are to support their subordinates. The most egregious thing is that a mysterious organization, and it's an assassin organization, has pulled 4,000 people across a region and carried out covert operations to assassinate the protagonist. Who has so many assassins? What conditions do you have to raise 4,000 off-duty martial arts assassins? How can you 4,000 people operate in secret? Whose assassins form a group of 4,000 people? Do you know that 4,000 people can stand in a football field even if they stand in a square formation? Do you have any mathematical knowledge?

After reading more than fifty chapters, the protagonist's martial arts skills are quite strong, but what about the realm of this book? I don't even know what I'm looking at

It's so cool to hit someone when you see them

The heroine has to be followed wherever he goes. Several of the books are conjoined twins from beginning to end. To put it bluntly, your character creation is mediocre and the heroine you create is a beauty. In addition, the things you write are so watery. The heroine follows the protagonist every day and is just a tool of hydrology. When I read this book, I thought the heroine could finally be a flower vase at the base camp, but in the end she had to keep up with the protagonist. Can you write a more free-spirited protagonist? He has to take his family with him wherever he goes, so he doesn't feel like he's carefree.

If I write about the female protagonist, a bunch of unknown creatures threaten to abandon the book. I haven't won the classic vote, I haven't lost with my voice, and I love all the war cries and threats on the Internet.

This book is not too outrageous. I will read the whole book 🤫

Invincible at the start, how to create an entry point? Come on, the author will teach you, if you get to know a woman, her troubles will become your troubles, her family's troubles will also become your troubles, and even her school's troubles will also become your troubles. OK, now that we have solved it, what's the next entry point? It's okay, let's meet someone else

The emotional scenes are written like 💩, and you keep writing about the female supporting characters flirting with the protagonist. The writing is so bad, the supporting characters are also bad, and you keep writing. What are you showing off? Are you afraid that others don't know that you are writing 💩? Your strength is the invincible exhilaration of the protagonist. From Su Mo's book to now, your emotional scenes have not improved at all, and you are still showing off your shitty emotional scenes. You really want to persuade people to quit.

I heard that I have subscribed, so I came to read it. I have read fifty chapters so far. I feel that the writing is quite average. There are also many flaws, such as falling off a cliff and never dying. It's quite scary to have thousands of orders.

A sect that is not very powerful in the Central Region dares to look down on a person who has penetrated several rivers and lakes? The Eastern Region can be said to be a small fight, the Northern Region, the East China Sea, etc., You can tell that they are not ordinary people. They just wiped out all the Southern Territory gates. Is the delivery of information so bad? Having killed a large number of people several times, doesn't it mean that there is no point in having more people? Even if you don't know that it can absorb internal force, you can still tell that the battery life is very strong. Although it has been stated early on that people in the Central Region look down on people from other places, it is really speechless to be able to say "You should kill yourself". Not to mention being prepared, at least try to kill them with a large number of elites. What a young boy, he only has an appearance, what sentence he said, I forgot it for a while, it can be said that I have to mention it every time. Probably because he may be just showing off. It's just semi-invincible. You are invincible, but others always look down upon you. At least that's how it was expressed in words at first. Can't you change it? Or is this all you have in your vocabulary? If it hadn't been for a really horizontal push, I would have stopped watching it.

Dear young readers, think about it in your mind, how can a great person only have one woman. Let alone the martial arts world, in the real world, it is unreasonable for any awesome character to have only one woman.

Basically, it's an invincible script of killing people with sparks and lightning. The protagonist follows the mission to kill a group here and a group there. It's a bit like the mindless monster-killing mission in the Yamaguchi Mountains. I'll give you a background and you go kill people. Except for the few women around the protagonist, there are no good people in the whole world. They all need to be killed. Anyway, there is some reason. Apart from the protagonist upgrading his martial arts to kill people, I don't know what else to watch.

Can you change the second chapter? They blasted the windows but no sound was heard. What are these people trying to protect? The guard was still chatting regardless of the noise, just pretending to be a game NPC?

Read Chapter 36. Four people fell off the cliff, and none of them died. 666

I've already reached the full level of Yi Jin Jing at the beginning, but I need to get better at martial arts later on. Hong Kong comics' Legend of the Emperor, Mysterious Weapons, The Storm Trilogy, Dragon and Tiger Gate, Chinese Heroes, Thunderbolt in Puppet Show, and Golden Light can all be used as sources of material.

The poison was gone after only ten chapters. It's a pointless, dark, and dark story.

AI ran one

It seems very strange recently. For example, the rewarded marksmanship has not shown a devastating effect against the enemy. The single battle has always been the Four Seas Dragon Fist or the Sea-Shaking God Fist. The group has the Great Black Sky Palm, and the Plum Blossom Sanshou from the beginning to the present... You might as well merge it into one and get it with just one palm skill Then home The nine-qi magical skill of the clan, 9 times the power of 256 times, is not reflected at all. It still requires two or three punches to fight against the enemy. Before and after practice, it has no effect. It should be devastating, and the feeling is very low. , It turns out that you have to chase with a long stride, and you have to chase with a long stride after the divine step, and you may lose it..., Brother, don't give me rewards "Invincible Text", it should be to destroy all enemies and push all enemies, instead of just three melons and two dates, you have to fight against the enemy three or five times, chase and escape for five or six chapters, and finally fight against the dragon gate, with full firepower. It's almost 50-50, and you have to hammer it down many times before you die. That's not how the invincible text is written... The other martial arts skills given are the same. The golden bell is not opened every time, and you fight hand-to-hand with others, and blood is splashed all over you. The four images of God's will are also given, they are pure decorations, hanging on the back, the God of Wind can control the wind, and the result is that the protagonist will be thrown from a cliff to death, the God of Vulcan can breathe fire, but the result is that he will not be burned to ashes when facing a villain with high resilience, the God of Thunder can control electricity, and there is no magnetic field rotation. , Or paralysis, etc., The effect is very little, not as refreshing as the first Yi Jin Jing's ability to destroy the enemy The latest one has given the power of Donkey Kong, but the expressiveness is still poor, and the stacking of martial arts really does not improve the protagonist's expressiveness. In addition, the performance in group battles is not good. It still covers seven or eight people with one move, killing three or five people and running away four or five.

The sudden need to accept a disciple is inexplicable. Why do you need to accept a disciple? The protagonist obviously wants to explore a higher level, so he is considering inheritance at such an early age, which is funny. It's quite a poisonous point

But the obvious difference is that the first one is very straightforward, while the author is very conflicted.

Rather than doing addition, I recommend doing subtraction. Let the protagonist do unlimited things with limited resources (types of martial arts).

After catching up with the latest chapter, it is understandable that the numerical value will be inflated, but I am afraid that the routine will be watered down. The protagonist has penetrated the southeast, northwest and northwest. Then in the middle area, the clown taunts the protagonist one after another. The protagonist has to go through the level to meet the boss like Mario, and then listen to the boss's words. This is disgusting. You should bring your relatives and friends and let the Tongtenkaku Golden Bell Tower be electrified throughout the area. The evil god will come directly to the door on a certain day of a certain year, month and day, and blow up the mountain top of the city of the most powerful holy land with one blow, establishing his power first.

I thought you were already a model of homogeneity, and the more you wrote, the less attractive you became. I didn't expect that the dating system next door would make me even more knowledgeable. There was no main line and the male protagonist was too tea-like. This world is full of capable people.

In the beginning, in the Northern and Eastern Regions, there was no problem in describing him this way. After all, he was just starting out and others didn't know the Demon God Brother's strength. Now that we have penetrated the Southern Territory of the East China Sea, we still engage in this kind of plot. It makes me feel sick to watch it. Since the Southern Territory, there have been more and more Chi Chi. I got it once or twice. Don't be too outrageous by writing about Chi Chi all the time.

The author should take a good look at what you wrote. Chapter 400 Chapter 403 Author, please take a good look at what you wrote. In the previous chapter, when Pinjiange's minions encountered the protagonist being so arrogant, he asked the protagonist to commit suicide when he opened his mouth. Later, it was written that the leader of Pinjiange had to be cowardly when he encountered Wentian Mansion. Inconsistent and confusing logic.

The back part is not so good, there is a common contempt in urban literature - slap in the face - shock. This method has been used too many times.

Fang Shuwen killed all Ye Yulou in the Central Region and then penetrated the Jianghu of the Three Regions. Now people in the Central Region still think that the Demonic God's disciples have a false reputation.

After all, other people's Shuangwen upgrades to unfamiliar maps, which will be somewhat new. It's better for you. You don't have to upgrade much, just wandering around in a world. The beginning is really cool, but the rest is not even stupid. You killed through the Northern Territory, the Southern Territory, and the East China Sea. No matter how arrogant or brainless the people in your Central Domain are, they cannot look down on him. Is it possible that everyone in the Central Domain can penetrate other domains? A cool article is a cool article, but you penetrated one place and then another, at least give others some IQ😥😥😥

Write more plots about the protagonist's sister, preferably every three to five, and the results will be absolutely amazing. It's not like we grew up together, so the trivial blood relationship can make the protagonist get close to each other like a clown. When I listened to the book and heard this plot, I was disgusted. In other plots, the protagonist has monogamy in mind, but he insists on having a romantic partner and shows no mercy at all. The protagonist and the author are really contradictory. What's more, the entire plot is just a variety of martial arts plots that can be transformed into the plot of this book with a few magical changes. You can guess the subsequent plot from every opening chapter. The portrayal of the protagonist is really awkward and awkward.

The author has an old problem, that is, the protagonist's combat power is one level higher than the final villain's strength, and then the other people in the protagonist's camp are one level weaker than the villain. As a result, the supporting characters, let alone helping, are considered good if they are not a hindrance. Moreover, the villain is very strict with the rules and never wants to touch the people around the protagonist.