I Will Become an Immortal in This World

My words only represent my personal feelings after reading the latest chapter (a brief review after reading Chapter 12).        ，，，，，，，，，（）？ Won't others find it strange? In other words, everyone is well-informed. And we have been laying the groundwork, thinking that the protagonist will have a strong level, but in the end it turns out to be an extremely poor one, which is really shocking to the people in the book, but for me, it is an expected thing, and it is not much different from other good books. And if it is really a bad level later, I personally feel that it is not that good, and it really feels like it is a waste of food and a pity to abandon. But I think the subsequent plot should not develop like this, otherwise it would be a bit boring, and when will she be able to break away from the reborn person? She feels that she is not a demon cultivator, or the definition of a demon cultivator in this article is different, so there is a top ascension demon cultivator who is so easy to talk to.        ，，，，，，，                                                                 The reborn person gave me the feeling that without the protagonist, she would be overturned. Anyone who can survive to her level will not be so brainless. There is no strategy, only poison is useful. She used mortal poison at the beginning to poison a lowly immortal cultivator. Is this the source of her confidence?        ，，，，，，       Another reason is why the protagonist wants to show his talent (plug-in) in front of the demon cultivator (not sure if it is), so he is so confident that he will not kill him. It's a bit unreasonable for a great demon cultivator. Also, is there any conspiracy behind the demon cultivator's rebirth? The protagonist's talent (as they mistakenly thought) is not a shock to the reborn person. Doesn't being a Duxianzun mean that she has high qualifications, understanding and luck? Then she said that she had seen someone with a better understanding than the protagonist! She has been practicing for decades, and the protagonist has only been practicing for a few years and is already higher than her (the level of the technique can be seen a little bit) (a few months in the eyes of outsiders), so shouldn't the one she met before be already invincible? By relying on personal comparisons, in her eyes, this is just a genius, and he is much more evil than the protagonist. A few days ago, the reborn person said that all the resources in the world of immortality were controlled by large sects. How did she become an immortal in her previous life? Finally, I hope there will be no brainless pretense and slaps in the face in the sect.

The more I write, the more useless it becomes, the fighting power is messed up, and the heroine Zhou Xuecheng becomes soy sauce.

🐶Save your life, just make a joke The Immortal Lord is about the same as building the foundation, isn't there a saying, the founder of the foundation, the Taoist friend of Jindan, Yuanying Xiaoxiu, the transformed ant

Reading this novel still gives me a feeling of the past. I can only say that it is worthy of Mr. Ren. Even if it is a combat novel, it still has a strong atmosphere of Gou Dao.

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It's quite nice, a cool type of writing. It's just that the updates are a little slow.

Same as Mr. Ren

The content is directly confusing, and the barrage is very joyful.

Continuing to greet the author through the previous book Today is the thirty-fifth day

I have a question🙋If we give him math books and physics textbooks, can the protagonist also cultivate to Dzogchen?

This is the third book by the author that I have read. I have read both Top Luck and Down the Mountain, but I gradually lost interest in them after reaching about 2 million words. In the end, I never finished them. I hope this sticks. To be honest, Ren Dashen's books are actually very good among the starting authors. Every book can feel that it is still improving and maintaining the standard. It is not like many authors who just have a good book and then go straight to the next one. The advantage of Ren Dashen's book is that it is very refreshing and pretentious, but the disadvantage is that the matryoshka dolls in the back are too serious, which leads to aesthetic fatigue and cannot be read. I would like to give you a suggestion for the reference of the masters. Can you increase the suspense of the plot a little, weaken the cheats a little and make them more restrictive, have less matryoshka dolls, and have more adventure, conspiracy and other elements. I hope the master will continue his efforts and bring us more good works.

I can't stand it anymore after five chapters. What's wrong with this novel? When the Demonic Immortal Zongzong was born, the whole world started shouting that he would be exterminated, and then he muttered to himself that he had leaked the news about his rebirth? Does this immortal have any brains? And let the male protagonist hear it. . The demon cultivator didn't just want to silence him, but he actually explained everything about his rebirth? Even if the immortal can't defeat the most powerful cultivator in seven days, even if he knows that the whole clan has been killed, he doesn't tell the clansmen to evacuate quickly, but the whole clan stays and confronts the cultivator head-on? How? Can you eliminate the danger of annihilation by adding a garbage immortal who can't defeat the most powerful cultivator after being reborn for 7 days? He keeps saying that this is not possible and that is not possible. He picked up a popular swordsmanship book and always said that the male protagonist cannot practice it. Isn't it embarrassing? How can the male protagonist have the nerve to question others when he eavesdropped and didn't notice it? The male protagonist is also the best. He is in danger of annihilation, so he holds back his strength. Even if it adds some credibility to the danger of annihilation, he should show it a little bit. He insists on pretending. The enemy is not there, so I hold it in. The whole clan is desperate. The audience is in place. You can pretend to compete. What the hell?

The black gourd I want, why did AI send me such a weird dx🥺, but the human-sized one is still fine.

I'm ready to abandon the book. I'm annoyed when I see these books about either fighting monsters or fighting monsters. They are the same old routines from 20 years ago without any new ideas. They talk about good and evil, are full of benevolence, righteousness and morality, but are full of male thieves and female prostitutes! Why do we have to have monsters and monsters to fight? We can't just fight for territory and kill each other for personal gain. And Zhou Xue also started to feel a little disgusted.

Good article, Chapter 1 persuaded me to quit. Immortal Lord cannot save a mortal in 7 days. As long as you set up a foundation-building pill, I will accept it. This is an Immortal Lord. After all, he has an immortal character. He has cultivated to the level of Immortal Lord. I don't know any way to increase his strength explosively, and I can't practice Qi for 7 days to save it. People who are important to you need to have qualifications or not (not to mention the 7-day golden elixir, you can't even practice qi in 7 days?), Understanding but not understanding, wisdom but not wisdom (another person who already knows that someone wants to destroy the ax and still has the aura of cultivating immortals dares to mutter to himself) How did you become an immortal? 😥

It's a mindless novel. The whole family got wiped out after a bad start, but in the end the enemies didn't do anything and the protagonist was still running around. He really wasn't afraid at all that his family would be wiped out when he came back.

The fairy in the first two chapters looked silly to me. I couldn't bear to highlight the supporting characters at all. In the end, the protagonist must be the one to wrap up the story and make the heroine, the reborn fairy, really 🤡. If you don't want to highlight the supporting characters, don't give them high status. This is really a drama.

It's a bad ending, it's a bad ending... I thought Zhou Xue's role was quite sufficient, but I didn't expect that from the moment Fang Wang became an immortal, Zhou Xue turned into soy sauce. The feeling fell apart inexplicably, and the entire later plot was just a mess... It was forcibly unfinished. I think you might as well not write it, start with Fang Wang becoming an immortal, and go straight to eunuch, which is better than ending it badly.

Ordinary people are reborn calm and composed. Immortals respect life. Incoherent. The face is bigger than the butt

I'm sorry, but Golden Chapter 3 successfully sent me away. The enemy is killing my family at high speed. While saying that my family is good to me, I'm also wasting time by pretending. Wouldn't it be nice to kill the enemy with the time of pretending? I want my family to die so that I can cut off the cause and effect and cultivate immortality.

To be honest, I couldn't stand the first chapter, and the future of Qidian Xianxia is worrying. . .

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Cool white text, you can't read it with your brain👀

The most destructive point of this book is Fang Xue's setting of the Immortal Lord. The setting for the Immortal Lord is too high, but the actual setting is very useless. It doesn't have the feeling of being an Immortal Lord. It gives people the feeling of a female channel being an Immortal Lord for one year and then falling in love.

Although your other books are also good, the plot is also advanced through small supporting characters. There are many small characters with distinctive personalities, and the protagonist is always a dimension-reducing strike-like existence, which is invisible. But the protagonist in this book is at the forefront. In order to let the environment keep up with the protagonist, you desperately raised the upper limit to increase the strength of the protagonist and villain. Not only did the steps go too far, but the other supporting characters were not developed at all. The plot is even worse now. There is basically no difference between reading and not reading. . .

I laughed out loud in the first chapter, is this the Immortal Lord?

It's too serious to eat books. You write them randomly without any outline at all. You write whatever comes to mind. How dare you ask for a monthly pass?

If you want to read this book, you have to lower your IQ, pinch your nose, and frown before you can read it.

Damn it, why did I fall into this book right away? I always felt that the writing style seemed familiar. I have already ordered both Top Luck and Immortals. I am an old acquaintance (｡• 👅 •｡｀)

Get up and code and let me laugh. You can't waste your youth. Coding a lot is what you should do most!