Dao Ghost Plague

A very excellent group portrait article, with good writing style, good atmosphere, and not too many problems with the character logic. It is rare to write the first chapter so well. I don't know how long it took me to write it. There are also some shortcomings. The protagonist's presence is too low. I can't even tell who the protagonist is after reading two or three chapters. For me personally, due to the way the group portrait is written, a chapter is a bit too long and a bit delayed.

It's okay. It would be great if someone made it into a short drama.

I read 7 chapters in one go and felt that the writing was very good. From the writing style, the character names are listed first, which may be a habit developed over many years of writing scripts, but it doesn't matter and has little impact. Coupled with the unique style and rich plot, the group scenes are particularly outstanding, the characters have distinct personalities and sophistication is revealed between the lines. In short, I did a very good job. I hope the author can continue to write, follow this idea, and ignore other people's words. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot👍👍👍

I read four chapters in one go. The writing style creates a sophisticated atmosphere quite well. It feels more like published books or early online articles, which is incompatible with today's fast-paced online writing. However, good books will not be buried in the end. I think this book has a high chance of success. The author does not have to worry about those who want you to change the style. Speech, because personal style is difficult to change, hard modification is difficult to be effective, and will lose its own characteristics. Although group portraits are relatively niche, as long as they are well written, they can still achieve results. This book is guaranteed to be a high-quality product. It is not difficult to become a large-scale high-quality product or get thousands of orders after a little hard work.

It is very important to follow up on the new book issue. I beg you to read it every day. In addition, if you have any ghost epidemic settings that you think are good, you can also help to mention them. The best ones involve folk customs. The characteristics of the ghost plague are a source of infection (anything, such as items, text messages, actions, etc.), Killing methods, and characteristics of ghosts. In addition, for the horror style, try to choose some relatively traditional horror images. Everyone is welcome to provide suggestions and ideas. Thank you everyone!

The first ghost is very atmospheric and nice at the beginning, but it feels a bit smelly and long at the end. It should be written more neatly. It doesn't have to be to solve the ghost directly. It can be written that the protagonist leads people to run away.

I have already read more than ten new books 😂😂😂

The writing is quite good, even the first plot should be over, it's already hundreds of thousands of words

Yes, just follow this line of thinking and don't always think about other people's opinions. They are all laymen and don't understand. Look more at the background data. If the data drops seriously, there may be something wrong with the plot and it needs to be changed.

The first story shouldn't be so complicated. Readers are not familiar with the characters yet and cannot remember so many people. It is estimated that many readers will be discouraged

According to the way you write it, there are no dynasties. It would be good if the human race is not extinct.

It's pretty good, but as the author himself said, it's too fragmented. People are here to read the novel, not to puzzle it out. It jumps between several perspectives, making it tiring and uncomfortable to watch. Of course I don't read much suspense novels, character reasoning and the like, so I don't quite understand the content. If the suspense zone novels all have this rhythm, then think of me as farting.

The writing and character creation are good, but the plot is a bit cumbersome (detail-lovers may like it), and the reading experience is too poor. For a new writer without a fan base, this style of writing is easy to die. I suggest the author speed up the plot and give the protagonist some highlights, at least to retain the readers. There are more than 60 chapters, and even the character card of the protagonist is not created

There is something wrong with the author's writing. He has written more than 500,000 words, and has not changed the copy. He has only written the first copy. The main line is not clear at all. If the main line is clear, readers will follow it more steadily. Those who can feel the main story and are still following it will probably continue to do so, and changing copies will not have much impact. There are many books where the first few chapters or the first story are exciting, but the subsequent content drops off a cliff. Old bookworms who have experienced this too often will not like this kind of book Exchanging copies is inevitable, and it is easy to overturn. I don't change copies all the time, which makes people feel unstable.

I thought I would finish writing the first copy before putting it on the shelves

At present, the overall design of the story is actually quite good, but the core problem is still due to the problem of multiple perspectives. Since multiple perspectives are used at the beginning and a lot of foreshadowing is used, it is actually a bit difficult to read in the early stage, which will dissuade many people who are looking for books quickly. Therefore, you need to immediately bring the main perspective of the story back to the protagonist, so that there will be a better transition in the early stage of the story, and then slowly add multiple perspectives, which will be easier for reading.

The story is pretty good, keep it up

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I think the writing is quite good. I don't agree with what some book friends said about writing more about the protagonist's perspective. I hope the author can maintain his own style 🙂

The author writes that a ghost epidemic broke out at the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty. Later, it was written that the ghost-possessed Lao Zhou said that he was a citizen of the Ming Dynasty. It is a bit unreasonable to assume that the background is set in the late Ming Dynasty. It has been thousands of years since human beings died and they have not yet found a way to restrain ghosts. Since there is a supernatural power, it must be captured and studied. Those ambitious people who want an immortal emperor and alchemists, why not capture some demons to make elixirs? Moreover, major events involving the survival of the race cannot be covered up, no matter in ancient times or modern times. The children of the rich clan who are currently on the scene do not know about the existence of the ghost epidemic. This is illogical.

It's so stupid, it's still being updated at 3 a. M.

The title of your book seems a bit unclear. How about changing the name to Ghost Plague Resurrection 🙂, which might attract more readers.

Damn it, how long did it last before it was gone? The finale? Is this just a copy? ? ? ? ? ?

The plot of this book is worse than most new books, but the popularity is not as good. Is it too serious? Or is it a group of characters and insufficient characterization?

This first copy is probably too long, and it's not even in the stage yet.

I suggest the author streamline the plot. The first story of more than 500,000 words has not been finished yet. It is easy to discourage new readers. I wonder if they will have to follow it for several more months to see the ending?

Learn the mysterious resuscitation to improve the feeling of pleasure and make the rhythm faster. The results should be much better

The first copy of grain and grass level 😍😍

I can only say that the author is awesome, but this is a bit demanding for readers. I can only go back and read it once before reading the new one.

It's very well written. Don't give up. I will always support you.

The content is very good, the writing is fluent and not pretentious, the characters are solid and not too intellectual, and it is very comfortable to watch. But is the author the reincarnation of an old person, and the writing is not at the level of a newcomer? Or is it that the author has worked as a screenwriter before and has more experience in writing stories?