Qualified Human Containment Report

It looks quite interesting. I feel like it would be better if the rhythm could be better controlled. I will follow it up.

Isn't this the current social concept written about? They just turned capital into a monster and did exactly the same thing.

Thank you all for reading. The first volume is basically finished, I hope everyone will give it a chance; the data is a bit pitiful, so please read and interact here. If you have any interesting ghost stories, settings or book suggestions, you can mention them here. Bow.

The first thing a web article should be is for readers to understand, but the author's writing technique makes it really difficult for people to understand what happened to which character in which scene.

It's a bit too stream of consciousness, I don't understand a lot of things in it

Because some book friends have raised questions and discussions about the plot, so that everyone can understand it more easily, I have compiled some early worldviews. 1. Division of forces: The world where the protagonist lives is a world in competition. It is currently mainly divided between two forces. One is the force behind the university, and the other is the official. It can be simply understood that behind the university is a group of weirdos, and the resource they value most is people; the government controls most of the world's rules and values ​​the world itself. There is conflict between the two but they barely coexist. 2. 'Pleasing the regulator' involves two points.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Weird Fang's attitude towards human beings - 'raised livestock'. The second is related to the ability system. The initial maturity of weirdos is to eat humans who still have hope at the moment of despair. The greater the 'gap', the greater the feedback and future potential that weirdos can get. The purpose of universities is a minor foreshadowing. They educate both weirdos and humans at the same time. The weirdos must be the ones with the highest authority, and the most elite and outstanding students, the 'social elites', can strive to participate in the operation of society with their own will. 3. World: The inner and outer world of the general background actually draws on the concepts of Silent Hill, Back Room, etc., And can be called the 'interlayer'.         '' Let's just talk about this unfolding part, the 'main world' in which the protagonist is currently active: Reality, the surface world, and the inner world together constitute the main world, and both the outer and inner worlds may have more than one level. Reality, easy to understand, an area where human beings generally live. (People are disciplined by the prescribed 'indifference' and no longer trust each other. Most people have even seen the existence of 'ghosts'. However, due to the control of the forces behind the university, the whole is still maintained at the lower standards of a 'civilized society'.) Table world, abnormal transitional layer. (Exhibited as all the special places that people who can discover the truth come into contact with. Such as universities, places where weirdos and weirdos are frequently seen are the surface world. It can support those monsters to show their abilities, but does not support their complete arrival. It can be understood as a transition layer.) The inner world is equivalent to the core of the truly crazy world. (The main position that can manifest in the world, here you can get a glimpse of their whole picture. Of course, what you see may be just what they want you to see [laughs].) 4. World evolution: penetration, destruction, rebirth:. The 'interlayer' is not absolutely stable, it is falling.          If the film between the surface world and reality, or even the inner world and reality, is broken, the fallen part will form a 'penetration event'. If it collapses completely, the entire layer will be destroyed, leaving only the unsurvivable 'skeleton'. High-level forces all have their own escape plans, but rules that are top-secret, costly, and used at high levels are almost impossible to replicate. 5. There are more world views, concepts and foreshadowings. I won't go into details here and will reveal them one by one in the following chapters. After being put on the shelves, they will also be sorted out again.

I read a few chapters and found it very interesting. I found a treasure in the introduction. The last few lines of the introduction seemed a bit boring and I almost didn't click in.

Will there be a female protagonist? Single and more than nothing?

It looks good, come on author🎁

I think it's quite good-looking. There are three main points: the concept is novel, the visual transition is smooth (but not too many in each chapter), and the writing is OK.

Although the writing feels a bit stream-of-consciousness, and some scenes and descriptions can be a bit confusing, the setting is very interesting! I hope the timeline, scenes, etc. Can be marked more clearly, or the perspective can be clearly marked when changing the perspective of description (for example: go forward in time, Pangguan's side... Similar description) (My 🈚 experience, purely personal feelings)

The plot is very innovative, but I don't seem to understand the main plot. The outside world and the inner world are the background, and the protagonist enrolls in school to please the supervisor. Do people living outside the world know about the alienation of the world? How does society operate? Is studying in college a way to further one's personal abilities? I really can't figure out the specific settings. I hope the author can briefly sort out his ideas in this chapter 😢

Why? If you charge like a knight, you will be easily swallowed. At least bring a bomb with you.

It's finally on the shelves, good luck to the author🌹

Introduction: Is this an irony of the present moment?

I would like to make a suggestion. The perspective changes too quickly. Maybe the author thinks this can better describe things clearly, but it makes it very difficult to read. At least I feel that it is very difficult to read. I suggest that it is better to write through the separate perspective of the protagonist.

It's quite interesting. I feel like the author is expected to produce a high-quality product How many words did the author sign for?

It was quite interesting to read some of the settings, but the plot at the beginning was a bit confusing🤔