The Ranger’s Journey Begins When He Sees Monster Health Bars

In reality, the weight of adult pigs ranges from 180 to 400 kilograms. How can they feel any vibration when they step on the ground? The weight of an elephant is more than 2 tons, and there is no vibration when stepping on the ground. And in 2006, Yao Ming weighed 306 pounds.

The writing is okay, and the character of the protagonist is a bit similar to that of Goblin Slayer, not outstanding but not wrong. But the pace is a bit too slow. The first skill has not been released for more than ten chapters. The plot is about repeated attempts and failure every time. The strategy of suppressing first and then promoting is no longer working. It gave me such a strong sense of frustration in the early stage. If it doesn't feel better, no one will watch it.

There are hooks but not many. If the complete skill system cannot be written in 300,000 words, this book will basically be useless. Physical archers rely on instinct in the fantasy world.

I have read the latest 24 chapters so far. The first chapter is a bit vague. Is this an indigenous person or a time traveler?

It is a book with very obvious advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the characters are well drawn, and the writing is detailed and has a western fantasy feel. The disadvantage is that the writing is too detailed. The protagonist's role in the Chamber of Commerce is less than one-tenth, and he does not appear in more than 20 chapters. The destruction of the caravan and the investigation have nothing to do with the protagonist.

Originally using the low-level adventurers to develop slowly to hypnotize themselves. But then you did something like the Water Drop Realm or the Water Lake Realm, and suddenly a fantasy flavor came over. And it's too slow. If you're a low-level magician, you won't say anything. A president of a chamber of commerce has more than 400 health points, and a commander of the 62nd Division in a city has 900 health points. There is also a city priest who seems to be better than them. And the protagonist's one million words has not yet exceeded 100 Hard water! Some of it is true, and many places are quite true. Not every opportunity is prepared for the protagonist, not that disaster will happen wherever the protagonist goes, and not every key to defeating the enemy lies with the protagonist. It's just that the protagonist's status is not that central to the world. He is just a low-level adventurer who is a bit uninterested.      ，，… ，， There are gods The feeling of separation is too strong

It's hard to comment. From chapter 19 to today's chapter 45, the protagonist has not participated in any battles. Judging from the plot development, there will be no such thing in the next few scenes. Is this rhythm really written by the old author...

In the past, when I was reading a book, I often encountered the author who was full of ideas, but couldn't write them down. He couldn't control the speed and scrawled through the plot. Today's authors don't have much plot ideas, but they can expand the little bit of content into dozens of chapters without breaking it down. It seemed fine and smooth, but after watching it I couldn't remember what I watched.

Completely off track. In fact, the original Holy Light Ranger is ridiculous. You are not writing a mystery novel and you can let the readers know more information, such as the possible future development of the protagonist as you envision it. Now the protagonist's golden finger is based on the blood bar, his occupation is Ranger, and his skills are Holy Light Enchantment (you don't need it in every fight anyway, either it's too late or you forget it), and the Magic Berry Technique (the protagonist acts like he has never seen money, he must sell the Magic Berry every day before going out. You risk it, even if you keep a few of them) ? You can replenish your physical strength without using it for treatment. No, the meaning of the magic berry technique to the protagonist is to sell money), rapid shooting (you are not playing a turn-based game, one move per turn, instead of choosing something with high damage, you choose to draw a continuously, I really don't know why you choose that). Forget about the protagonist's construction, anyway, you won't be going to heaven and earth when you cheat him. But your hydrology can't be so watery, right? You can use two days of real time to prepare for the next chapter, but there is absolutely no content about the protagonist in the 6 chapters to prepare for the next chapter? Even if your teammates gain new abilities, you have to spend 6 chapters writing about a small theater. My friend, you are not writing a group portrait, everything must serve the protagonist. This is too watery. I really can't stand it anymore, it's 700,000 words long, and I'm talking about hydrology two days a week. When the main character appears and fights, I can't finish it in one day. I have to go through 3 or 4 chapters, and then 6 chapters of hydrology. The problem is that the protagonist of Chapter 6 Hydrology didn't get any serious rest at all. That shield brother hasn't recovered from his injuries since he came back. He just goes out every day and gets more seriously injured, then comes back to take medicine and then continues to go out for adventures. If the doctor tells you to rest for three days and not go out, you must go out. You can postpone the plot and let them recover before going out, right? Now I can't bear it anymore and write a recovery talent for Brother Shield, fearing that he will die without time to recover from his injuries, but Brother Dao hasn't recovered from his injuries either? The protagonist is against the sky and is the Holy Light (you have recovery skills, but you don't hit your teammates, and you don't feed your teammates with magic berries, so you drag the injured teammate back to see a doctor. This is really not an ordinary teammate who is against the sky. You are really blessed to be your teammate), it is a quick rest, and it is long-range. (I still don't know what the melee hunting knife is for. Should I get it in the summer? The protagonist also considered melee skills or displacement, but was given a Holy Light Bullet. I really don't understand why a ranger would learn Holy Light Bullet from a distance.)

It's chapter 33, I don't have any skills yet, the pace is too slow, I gave up.