The Ranger Starts by Seeing the Monster's Health Bar

In reality, the weight of adult pigs ranges from 180 to 400 kilograms. How can they feel any vibration when they step on the ground? The weight of an elephant is more than 2 tons, and there is no vibration when stepping on the ground. And in 2006, Yao Ming weighed 306 pounds.

The writing is okay, and the character of the protagonist is a bit similar to that of Goblin Slayer, not outstanding but not wrong. But the pace is a bit too slow. The first skill has not been released for more than ten chapters. The plot is about repeated attempts and failure every time. The strategy of suppressing first and then promoting is no longer working. It gave me such a strong sense of frustration in the early stage. If it doesn't feel better, no one will watch it.

There are hooks but not many. If the complete skill system cannot be written in 300,000 words, this book will basically be useless. Physical archers rely on instinct in the fantasy world.

I have read the latest 24 chapters so far. The first chapter is a bit vague. Is this an indigenous person or a time traveler?

It is a book with very obvious advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that the characters are well drawn, and the writing is detailed and has a western fantasy feel. The disadvantage is that the writing is too detailed. The protagonist's role in the Chamber of Commerce is less than one-tenth, and he does not appear in more than 20 chapters. The destruction of the caravan and the investigation have nothing to do with the protagonist.

Originally using the low-level adventurers to develop slowly to hypnotize themselves. But then you did something like the Water Drop Realm or the Water Lake Realm, and suddenly a fantasy flavor came over. And it's too slow. If you're a low-level magician, you won't say anything. A president of a chamber of commerce has more than 400 health points, and a commander of the 62nd Division in a city has 900 health points. There is also a city priest who seems to be better than them. And the protagonist's one million words has not yet exceeded 100 Hard water! Some of it is true, and many places are quite true. Not every opportunity is prepared for the protagonist, not that disaster will happen wherever the protagonist goes, and not every key to defeating the enemy lies with the protagonist. It's just that the protagonist's status is not that central to the world. He is just a low-level adventurer who is a bit uninterested.      ，，…… ，， There are gods The feeling of separation is too strong

It's hard to comment. From chapter 19 to today's chapter 45, the protagonist has not participated in any battles. Judging from the plot development, there will be no such thing in the next few scenes. Is this rhythm really written by the old author...

In the past, when I was reading a book, I often encountered the author who was full of ideas, but couldn't write them down. He couldn't control the speed and scrawled through the plot. Today's authors don't have much plot ideas, but they can expand the little bit of content into dozens of chapters without breaking it down. It seemed fine and smooth, but after watching it I couldn't remember what I watched.

It's chapter 33, I don't have any skills yet, the pace is too slow, I gave up.

Completely off track. In fact, the original Holy Light Ranger is ridiculous. You are not writing a mystery novel and you can let the readers know more information, such as the possible future development of the protagonist as you envision it. Now the protagonist's golden finger is based on the blood bar, his occupation is Ranger, and his skills are Holy Light Enchantment (you don't need it in every fight anyway, either it's too late or you forget it), and the Magic Berry Technique (the protagonist acts like he has never seen money, he must sell the Magic Berry every day before going out. You risk it, even if you keep a few of them) ? You can replenish your physical strength without using it for treatment. No, the meaning of the magic berry technique to the protagonist is to sell money), rapid shooting (you are not playing a turn-based game, one move per turn, instead of choosing something with high damage, you choose to draw a continuously, I really don't know why you choose that). Forget about the protagonist's construction, anyway, you won't be going to heaven and earth when you cheat him. But your hydrology can't be so watery, right? You can use two days of real time to prepare for the next chapter, but there is absolutely no content about the protagonist in the 6 chapters to prepare for the next chapter? Even if your teammates gain new abilities, you have to spend 6 chapters writing about a small theater. My friend, you are not writing a group portrait, everything must serve the protagonist. This is too watery. I really can't stand it anymore, it's 700,000 words long, and I'm talking about hydrology two days a week. When the main character appears and fights, I can't finish it in one day. I have to go through 3 or 4 chapters, and then 6 chapters of hydrology. The problem is that the protagonist of Chapter 6 Hydrology didn't get any serious rest at all. That shield brother hasn't recovered from his injuries since he came back. He just goes out every day and gets more seriously injured, then comes back to take medicine and then continues to go out for adventures. If the doctor tells you to rest for three days and not go out, you must go out. You can postpone the plot and let them recover before going out, right? Now I can't bear it anymore and write a recovery talent for Brother Shield, fearing that he will die without time to recover from his injuries, but Brother Dao hasn't recovered from his injuries either? The protagonist is against the sky and is the Holy Light (you have recovery skills, but you don't hit your teammates, and you don't feed your teammates with magic berries, so you drag the injured teammate back to see a doctor. This is really not an ordinary teammate who is against the sky. You are really blessed to be your teammate), it is a quick rest, and it is long-range. (I still don't know what the melee hunting knife is for. Should I get it in the summer? The protagonist also considered melee skills or displacement, but was given a Holy Light Bullet. I really don't understand why a ranger would learn Holy Light Bullet from a distance.)

A ranger awakens and chirps for dozens of chapters.

The performance of this book is very poor. I subscribed to one chapter and contributed to the first few hundred. The author wrote the book to entertain himself, but he was not too harsh. I will just talk about a few points that I feel are very problematic. 1. The division of realms is too abstract. All the levels in this book are outrageous and the design is very unreasonable. The author uses fog → drop → lake → solid to divide the levels, and then it takes more than ten levels to jump to a new form. After writing more than 400 chapters, the protagonist barely breaks through the water drop barrier. I originally thought that the sealed president was very powerful, but someone like the teacher with 900 health appeared. Anyway, the author does not say in the book whether levels will extend lifespan. The default is not to extend lifespan. Humans are also short-lived. The protagonist is in his twenties. It takes weeks and months to upgrade a little level each time. Either other high-level characters who appear in the game upgrade quickly, or the protagonist does not have any talent at all. I can't understand at all why there are a bunch of low-level adventurers and protagonists in their twenties, and then there are a bunch of high-level seniors in their fifties, sixties, and seventies. Is it possible that humans are advancing by leaps and bounds at the old level? 2. The golden finger is dispensable. At first glance, you can see the health bar and the status, but writing so many words is of no essential use. The plot is very, very slow, and there are often a lot of stories about supporting characters. The protagonist is still in the novice village after more than 400 chapters. This golden finger can't even let him change the map? It's enough to get some silver coins with cheat fingers every day. Then there are a few hidden enemies to deal with in the plot. So far, the saint and the dragon in the introduction have not been included. 3. The plot is bland. It can be said that the protagonist has not experienced any events that can be remembered by readers. There are many meaningless plots, that is, the protagonist is idle. It can be understood that the author does not know how to write, so he uses some dispensable plots to mess up the plot. He recruits a team to help the friends write dozens of chapters, the friends' emotional lines write dozens of chapters, and the team earns money to write dozens of chapters. It is just like the protagonist's goal at the beginning, to save some money to develop skills and storage. After finishing the bag, it immediately lost its purpose and started to rot. Ninety-nine percent of the plots in this book are invalid plots, including a lot of underground worms that exploded and a bunch of gems appeared. The protagonist picked up the biggest red one. He originally thought it was some kind of treasure, but he took it out to the treasure appraiser later. It turned out to be garbage. I don't know if there was any foreshadowing behind it. Anyway, after describing it for a long time, it turned out to be worthless garbage. I can only think that the author was cheating on the word count. After reading this book, I just felt that my time was wasted. There is nothing in the 400 chapters. The protagonist is still rolling happily in Novice Village. All the characters with 900 HP have appeared. The protagonist still has more than 40 HP. Blackwater City has come out. Then the protagonist is still in the village and town, and starts to study the plot of the marriage of two friends. I really don't know what these plots are for. No one is reading it. It's just to catch those readers who have subscribed and go crazy. More than four hundred chapters are still rolling around in Novice Village. In fact, many minor problems are nothing, but no matter how long it is, it is unforgivable that the protagonist is still in the novice village in the novice village with more than one million words and four hundred chapters. I have also read serial novels with tens of millions of words, and there is really no one with one million words that is still in the novice village. The main plot of the gang leader lifting the seal is introduced, and then the lich is inexplicably resurrected and killed, and then the protagonist lingers for seventy or eighty chapters, and finally is still in the novice village. If I were to evaluate the protagonist, he is the purest adventurer in a small village. He earns some living expenses every day, then squanders it, and then makes money again. The whole novel is the same plot. No matter whether the equipment is upgraded or skills are learned, it does not affect the protagonist still wallowing in the small village. The number of words is ≠ delicate. If you really want to read this book until you die, pretend I didn't say it, but this is a serial novel. It is a mediocre "adventure novel" with more than 1 million words and 400 chapters. It is really difficult to understand why it is still in Novice Village.

There is a logical error in this book, that is, President Long's investment or show of kindness towards the protagonist. There is no love without reason in the world, and there is no hatred without reason. Everything has a reason, and everything is based on interests. If the president secretly likes the potential of the protagonist, then when the protagonist becomes a professional, it is already obvious. The result is that the two of them pretend to be confused. Are they sick? My angel investor doesn't ask for anything in return? If you take advantage of others, why don't you give something in return? But the plot continues with the two having fun, which is actually unnecessary. Maybe the author wants to play a foreshadowing, but the story is that the big guy made a little investment in the little guy, and the little guy grows up with nothing in return. This is not logical.

As for the chapter about finding goblins, the standard of one kilometer in the forest is a bit hard for me. There is also the quantity. This plug-in has no distance?

I have completed millions of books, and my character can be learned from all over the world, so read with confidence.

Although, the million-word level is indeed a real result that has been tested by the market This week's strong recommendations and real results, we still have to trust the results

The chapters before and after charging are getting more and more boring and unexciting. It is hard to imagine the plot development in the future. I rely on selling magic berries every day to earn income. The key is that the magic berries are not a product that can be stored for a long time, and they can be sold out every day. Career awakening is the same as nothing. It is not dangerous at all. Why would you write an adventure article if you don't take risks? I switched to writing daily articles. After awakening, you still have to do the work of copper coins. The first thing you can see in this book is that you sell magic berries every day to make a living, and then go fight snakes, tease scorpions, and occasionally do small daily tasks. How can you upgrade a Western fantasy adventure novel without fighting? Will it still be good for a long time? What do you like? The awakening profession was a little hot-blooded before, but then nothing happened. How to upgrade without killing monsters, how to awaken skills, should you rely on meditation every day to develop skills, then what kind of combat profession did you write? If you live by selling things, is it a life profession? Can't you tell the difference?😅😅😅

What are you describing now? The ability system is messy and the plot is off topic

Author, is it possible that the reason why you are not popular is because your writing is too detailed?

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