
The Ordinary World Enlightens Me, I Use Mediocrity to Become an Immortal
凡尘悟道,我以平庸证仙
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 88k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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36Chapters
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I've read quite a few books, so I'll give them an evaluation.
It's too strong, all the descriptions are too deliberate, and it feels like it's too much, and the male protagonist's hatred for immortal cultivators is completely unreasonable. At least it should be about an immortal cultivator fighting with a monster and accidentally injuring the male protagonist's sister. It's unreasonable to say that mortals are not worthy of cultivating immortals and have such hatred. , The goal of the male protagonist to become stronger must at least be to kill all the monsters, or resurrect his sister, the writing is okay, but the details are not good (the characters' emotions should be more reasonable), I want to write a story about a mortal cultivating immortality with a more open mind, and make the male protagonist a time traveler, so that the perspective of the male protagonist can be easily understood by new writers.
The chivalry is quite good, but the characters are too stiff. I suggest you improve the character design.
It's pretty smooth, and the layout is pretty good, so it doesn't tire your eyes The plot is pretty smooth, come on! I like you!