The Evil Lord Is Going Crazy

Readers who want to read this book can read my review first, and I hope the author can troubleshoot it I really like this book. When it didn't have 300 favorites, I clicked in and read it. I also wrote a comment saying that the content was too profound and difficult to understand, but I still wanted to read it. Now that it has reached 200,000 words and is about to be released, I decided to write a longer review. Overall comment: This is not a farming story at all, this is a character story. The farming content is so-so, and the character description is at its peak. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. I like to talk about the shortcomings first. The biggest problem with this book is that the author seems to be too deliberate when writing the world view and environment settings. The most obvious one is that the protagonist, a duke, is the weakest in terms of setting, but he is so weak that he has almost no power in the territory, which is abstract enough. Of course, the early stage is relatively weak, and there is a feeling of a desperate comeback. This cannot be said to be a problem 🙂🙂 Another shortcoming is that the people in the mercenary group seem to be less intelligent in the early stage of the maid line, but it will get better later. Let's talk about the features. This book is very slow to read, even slower than ordinary farming articles. But this slow heat is not hydrology. This is a very strange point. It's obviously very enjoyable and interesting to read, and the characters' personalities are also very vivid and distinct, but when you look back, you see that it's just a conversation between the protagonist and this person about work, and you wrote tens of thousands of words without realizing it. Although I like this style very much, and the author's writing is indeed very enjoyable, some people may feel that the progress is too slow. Another characteristic is profundity. Since I'm quite sensitive, I won't say anything about it. Advantages. The demons outside the territory are so terrifying. Some extraterrestrial demons rely on their imagination, their gimmicks, and their ability to write about snow. As an extraterrestrial demon, this author relies on his hard power in writing characters. I recommend that readers experience this when reading the book. I will only say two points: First, writing about feelings, not only love, but also the admiration of friendship and subordinates and the fear of the lower class people towards their lords, etc., Is very natural and not embarrassing. Too many people find it extremely embarrassing to write about their feelings. Second, the heroine. You know that when the heroine is set to be a violent person, she would actually apologize sincerely. I have read too many dog-licking stories with fake arrogant female protagonists, and there are also naughty little junior sisters, cold and arrogant senior sisters who are so disgusted that they cry at every turn, or they obviously like to be tough and refuse to admit it, or they suppress the protagonist miserably and then reverse it and say that she likes the protagonist. This disgusting plot 🔪 The female characters in this book are actually able to seriously examine their own problems, which is rare. The biggest advantage is the male protagonist. Needless to say, I guess the only reason I can continue to read this is because of the male protagonist, who is basically my mouthpiece. Needless to say, God, while being righteous, never spoils anyone. To summarize, if you are a reader who likes to focus on details and setting logic, proceed with caution. Small problems are no big deal. The male and female protagonists are likable, the plot is not boring, and the supporting cast has many scenes.

A unique lord novel. It is not so much a Western fantasy lord as it is a non-mainstream online novel with too high aspirations and difficult to comment on. The biggest problem is that some places are written too well, and writing too well is also a problem. I can't figure out how to continue writing with such philosophical depth of 100,000 words at the beginning. The writing power required is simply not something that ordinary authors can have. (The following contains some spoilers) First: the golden finger that is not helpful in farming. In fact, the protagonist Golden Finger is not only not helpful for farming, but also not very helpful for the overall situation, which is almost non-existent. In a low-demon world, reforming a territory from scratch, without relying on the assistance of intelligence systems such as those common in other lord stories, I can't figure out how to win. Second: Character, extreme personality. Extreme characters usually bring better emotional impact, but they also bring extremely high writing difficulty. The male protagonist is a paranoid man with moral obsessiveness, the female protagonist is a super-sex-loving person, the maid looks like a yandere, and the guys in the mercenary group have their own agendas and only have interests in mind. As for the elf girl who I always found unpleasant in the comment section, I think she is the only normal one among this group of people. Third: The world difficulty is too high. Without the help of Golden Finger, including the high-end combat power of the entire city used by the male protagonist, it is not as good as five people in the mercenary group. I don't know how to win against the attack of the southern lords. I can see that the author wants the male protagonist to rely on his own personality charm to convince the five members of the mercenary group, but as mentioned before, this requires extremely high writing power. I read the part about convincing the heroine several times and thought it was so well written, but is it possible to use a method once and use it four times? If you can write it down, I can only say that you are awesome. Of course, I am not saying that this book is not well written, but it is clearly biased. The author goes too far in writing about emotional lines, friendship lines or analyzing human nature, but other aspects are average in comparison. Of course it's just in comparison. Also, if the analysis of human nature is overdone, it will appear very depressing. Although sometimes this is not a bad thing. (100,000 words review)

Reason: The author of the latest chapter wants to know the highlights of this book Result: Share it. The character of the protagonist is the biggest bonus in the book. A persistent, unique character who never hits a wall or looks back brings a unique charm. What makes these chapters different from other novels is that they give the protagonist a very reasonable environment to express his feelings and ideals. Essentially, the protagonist is a typical horse-like succubus. He reaches out to others and cannot refuse. Even just looking at him makes you want to get closer to him. This is very vividly written. At present, the positioning of this book is not quite like a farming novel, because the conflict in the book's plot is not the contradiction between advanced productivity and backward reality (for example, I have to be technologically advanced to defeat foreign enemies), but a contradiction between advanced ideals and conservative ideological trends (only the protagonist is moving towards the goal, but there are only people following but no one walking with him). Although he has achieved some initial results in his farming, the main theme is that he is overcoming the most difficult level: developing some people who can be called comrades through communication. This is also the reason why I don't think it is a farming novel at the moment. This is also the biggest highlight of the current chapter of this book: a person with ability, means, ideas and ideals is slowly breaking away from the environment of working alone in this other world, by telling this ideal to thousands of people. There are also some reasons why it is not in the farming stage: the protagonist does practical things but does not have the productivity leap of traditional farming novels. The protagonist is still involved in some kind of adventure story instead of wholeheartedly promoting the progress of productivity. The protagonist does not see any production goals such as a five-year plan for his farming. The main source of resistance is not the contradiction caused by the development of productivity. On the other hand, although the main theme is obviously not farming now, this may not necessarily be the case in the following chapters. The protagonist can make good personnel preparations before doing things, first cultivate loyalty among those who can do things, infect loyal people with ideals, gather or spread out people with ideals, and prepare in advance to cultivate a team for the rush to be had after the explosion of farming productivity in the next stage. Strictly speaking, this is also part of farming, and the transition will be smoother. Let me sort out the next development that I personally can foresee or expect: the protagonist successfully unites the people around him and solves the dangers brought by the adventure stories. After these adventure stories come to an end, there is a precious window period before the next foreseeable danger comes one after another. The protagonist uses the personnel training that has been done previously to develop himself, strengthen his strength, and perfectly reaches a new level of strength, ready to face the new big crisis. During the window period, some new dangers, large and small, may have laid new foreshadowings. Repeat this. It is a cycle of breaking the situation - taking risks - crisis - farming - breaking the situation. Of course, I also hope that the author will have better ideas. After all, I am not here to teach people to write books. Let's talk about group portraits again. The author doesn't understand why his book is called a group portrait article. It's very simple: just compare it with other books. Other books will not describe them unless necessary. The character that appears in the text is essentially a tool to influence the protagonist or reader. For example, if the author needs a character to bully the protagonist, or a character to show the contrast between life before and after, just create it once. What if it's not necessary? He is a transparent person. As long as more than a certain number of characters leave the category of tools and are portrayed with a heart or actions that only the protagonist can have, this is a group portrait article. Because the protagonist is not the only person who is beyond this world/etiquette/rules/framework. A simple example, if a kidnapper kidnaps a child and gives the mother a ransom for option a and a vote for option b, and the mother chooses option c to trust the police and calmly wait for rescue, her role is like a character in a group drama. In other words: If you don't do mindless things and spend more time with pen and ink, you will be a member of the group. In general, what the author has written so far is still very good. In my prediction, this is a stage of accumulation. At most, the two parents-in-law are a bit mother-in-law and a bit weak. The strengths are obviously in character creation and writing skills. The current plot rhythm is also very well arranged. To put it bluntly, the many good reviews in the book review section are just kidding you.

. . . . It's so over the top that it doesn't fit in with the other books on the new book list. It feels like it's not on the same level at all, or the concept is not on the same level at all, it's too popular and too righteous It's rare that when reading a book, I feel that it's too profound to understand and too well-written at the same time I feel that the author has tried hard to write more plainly, but I still can't understand it, but I still can't help reading. Like the female protagonist, I feel confused and the male protagonist is awesome Also, the yandere is a bit scary.

A bunch of pseudo-eunuch authors created a small account and used the pseudo-human protagonists in their pseudo-human works to dominate the new book list. Do you know the joy you feel when you finally find a normal human protagonist after digging through a lot of shit? Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The shortcomings of this book are obvious. In order to deliberately increase the difficulty of the world, there are slight flaws in some aspects of the worldview structure. This book is not a complete farming article, and many parts cannot be explained in a self-explanatory manner. However, the author's touching characters and in-depth plot make up for this. Almost every character, including the supporting characters, has a complete personality. I thought that except for the heroine, the few people in the mercenary group were just soy sauce, but the author gave everyone a lot of interesting psychological descriptions. I have read more than forty chapters, except for Cassandra, who has not written much. The characters of the mercenary group are very different, but they coincide in some places. There are too many characters and they are too complicated. This may be the reason why this book is difficult to read. It is not suitable for everyone, but it is very interesting for an old bookworm like me. The inferior male protagonist convinces the supporting characters, the average male protagonist convinces the supporting characters, and the superior male protagonist convinces the readers. I don't know how other readers feel. I originally thought that seeking liberation and equality through martial arts in the supernatural world would be a dead end, but I was convinced by the male protagonist. Moreover, the super contrasting personalities of the male and female protagonists make me look forward to their emotional line. I don't know if there are multiple female protagonists or single female protagonist. Also update quickly

I want to write some comments again. I usually use this account to scan the charts and read books, but I can't sign contracts for my own novels. As a result, this book gave me a lot of inspiration, let me tell you my opinion The function of this golden finger is completely different from its superficial function. I see that the file loading and archiving mechanism has not been used once. Its function is to give the protagonist the confidence to do things, so the protagonist can radically reform and be brave and not afraid of death. It is very refreshing, but the operability is a bit small. Although it doesn't seem to require any action. I read other people's comments saying that this book is not a farming article at all, and I totally agree. The highlight of this book is that the male protagonist impresses others with his super succubus attributes and super debating skills, not the farming itself. Readers who are entangled in the world view or the motivational logic and setting of decision-making behavior will probably find it difficult to read, because the author obviously regards all the above as a tool to serve the character, which sometimes seems unreasonable. All plots serve the writer rather than people acting in the plot. There is no distinction between these two writing methods, they just have their own characteristics and different audiences. It depends on which one you can accept. I don't care. Another highlight is the killing of the villains by the decent characters. Here we name the dwarf brother and the heroine Bianca. How on earth did you come up with such a genius idea of ​​smashing a goblin into a potted plant with two hands and two legs? The heroine also has a morbid obsession with whipping corpses. Even if she dies, she has to whip the corpse crazily to prevent resurrection, which is a bit fun to watch.

I really like the characters of the male protagonist, female protagonist and other characters, such as the elf girl's growth, it's very touching. The contradictions of the little characters are also highlighted and obvious. What attracts me most in the follow-up is the friction between the male and female protagonists and the two extreme people in their relationship. I hope such good characters will not be wasted.

1. The writing is smooth, the characters are plump, the plot is reasonable, and the framework is complete. 2. The story is interesting and not boring. 3. Added my favorite private goods, I am here just for this bit of jealousy! What a bullshit lord, what a bullshit bloodline, what a bullshit magic! We want communism!

The writing is really good, and the rhythm of the plot is well controlled. Even the long debates in the article will not make people feel boring (it would be better if Jasmine had more roles)

Chapters 84 to 86 spend about 15,000 words on the ideological collision between Knight and Andrew. Interestingly, this paragraph is different from the previous debate between Knight and Paul. When Nate and Paul argued in the orphanage, it was obvious that Nate won. Paul believed that Nate's double-standard motives were untenable. But in my opinion, the debate between Knight and Andrew was a tie. Essentially, the two people seemed to be discussing the definition of high-value people and low-value people, and discussing things like the trolley problem. But in fact, in the final analysis, the two people discussed the issue of fairness and unfairness in the distribution of social resources. Andrew's point of view is very simple. Andrew is an elitist and holds a heroic view of history. He believes that Knight should spend all his resources on recruiting magicians, knights and other professionals to develop top combat capabilities, instead of spending all his energy on things like liberating serfs through technology. He believes that doing so is meaningless and is essentially social Darwinism. Andrew felt that the alpha wolf should get the most meat. This idea was correct in a short period of time. In a sense, although the pattern was small, it was indeed useful. Knight's view is exactly the opposite. Knight believes that the power of the collective can be overwhelming, even in the supernatural world. Knight is a super collectivist and idealist. From a macro perspective, Knight regards his territory as a person to cultivate, rather than a group of divided individuals such as serfs and civilians. Knight believes that collectives are fault-tolerant. When a strong professional dies, he is dead and will not be resurrected. However, after a collective loses a corner, it can quickly recover with its superb productivity. Nate wants to alienate the group into a huge, absolutely rational creature, but Andrew thinks this is impossible. In fact, it is impossible to say otherwise, but neither party is convinced by the other's point of view. Finally, when Andrew drove the carriage away, he also said that he would wait and see, but Knight did not make much rebuttal. Compared with Paul's accusations, Andrew's accusations are more pragmatic. The individual differences between tall workers and small workers on the construction site prove to some extent that what Andrew said is true, but the water conservancy machinery invented by Knight himself can smooth out the differences between individuals to a large extent. Knight does not disrespect the independence of each person. On the contrary, Knight regards serfs and professionals as creatures of equal value. This is the greatest respect, and it is also something that Andrew's point of view cannot do. Another interesting point is that European and American countries basically follow the so-called elitist education model, but that is modern times after all, and in the extraordinary medieval era of the novel, magic is the privilege of a few people after all. Collectivism is far superior to what elitism can bring in terms of quickly building territory and developing productivity. Andrew and Knight each have their own merits. The attitudes of the other three people are also very interesting. When faced with the tram problem, Bianca is a fun person, Jasmine is a utilitarian, and Paul has a typical scholar's mentality. The author has profound skills in grasping the character. It can only be said that the ideological depth of this book is unmatched by most online literature on the market, but it is a pity that not many people read it. "Miracles cannot be copied, but order can be mass-produced"        —Knight

Don't hesitate to comment on some of these comments. Although this book doesn't focus on farming, doesn't the male protagonist do a lot of practical things? What I have an impression of includes agricultural reforms, the implementation of crop rotation, the establishment of handicraft gatherings to manufacture farm tools, the establishment of septic tanks to collect fertilizers, the establishment of waterwheels, water-powered sawmills and blast furnaces for iron-making. Through incentive policies, farmers are encouraged to register their households and arrange for them to transport labor to various construction sites. The sizes and specifications of carriage parts are unified and centralized production is carried out, and the family crest is engraved on all produced outward transport carriages for commercial advertising. Taking back the power of the guilds, they can only set standards, but not the prices of products... It's a bit nonsense to say that he doesn't do practical things 😥😥 Moreover, many reforms are carried out as pilot studies first.

First of all, I must praise the author. The character design is really strong. It can even be said that "creating a character is as simple as breathing." Both the protagonist and the supporting characters are very brilliant, and the debates between the characters in some chapters are even more eye-catching. It is strongly recommended that new readers first read the debate in the two free chapters, Chapters 52 and 54. The debates in the subsequent paid chapters, Chapters 84-86, are also very exciting. If you are interested, you can subscribe first. Then, as the title says, although the book is good, it is on the wrong track. If this were an adventure novel, the author's extremely excellent characters would be a perfect match. Unfortunately, this is a farming novel, and the excellent characters have taken over the main role, so that I felt a sense of fragmentation while reading it. Excellent characters are not strictly necessary for farming stories. In my opinion, the most important part of farming stories should be "how much food the family has, and how many swords and guns they have in their hands." Unfortunately, until Chapter 86 of my current subscription, there are very few plots that should be focused on in these farming stories. A large amount or an excessive amount of ink is used to describe the characters themselves. There are many more chapters about people than about farming, and the storyline is therefore very slow. Based on the chapter 86 that I have subscribed to so far, the protagonist's city is actually not very different from that in Chapter 1. Although people's livelihood has been greatly improved and technology has gradually developed, the force level is still as weak as paper. In Chapter 1, even if you include the male protagonist himself, there are only two first-level ones. It is rare among rare things for the majestic Northern Duke to be so supportive. By Chapter 86, in addition to the five new mercenaries, the male protagonist still only has two first-level mercenaries. Those five mercenaries have only won over two, and the remaining three mercenaries still have 0 favorability. The cultist trading scene around Chapter 70 still requires four or five first-level people to solve it. I think it is really difficult to deal with it. I don't know if it will get better in the future and the description of farming will be added. I don't plan to continue to subscribe. As of Chapter 86, overall it is still a good review. After all, the characters in this book are really great. If the author plans to write an adventure novel in the next book, I will definitely support it.

It's too idealistic and can't even be realized in the novel's reality.

There are many discussions about systems and ideas, but too little content is implemented in specific production and affairs management. We cannot just give a blueprint and grow freely. Against this background, those debates seem too empty - Is there a shortage of civil servants? Is there anyone at the local level monitoring corruption issues (wage theft)? Has the industrial sector been sidelined by the dwarves and created a dependency problem? Are there any difficulties in material development? Are there shortages of industrial raw materials? Is there a lack of market for the product? Is there a hollowing out problem in agriculture? If a worker becomes disabled due to work, are there any relevant procedures for handling it? ... And in terms of system construction, no matter how Lao Nai wants to build it in the future, the current situation is - the Philosopher King. The plot of asking Jasmine to be tried by a jury and insisting on upholding the law gave me a very uncomfortable feeling. It must be understood that the law is the expression of the overall will of the ruling class. However, the current ruling class seems to be only included in the prison. If those people in the mercenary group, as well as the butlers, knights and other old subordinates want to include the citizens, have you heard from them in advance? Is it possible that someone is working in tandem to make a "secret report"? Is it possible that they want to rewrite the law? Is it possible that they privatize the factory? Is it possible that they want to form a political "jury"? Now you show an attitude of respecting the law and public opinion. If they suddenly attack, how should you respond? What would you do if someone tried to mobilize public opinion, raise wages, and distribute free goods to workers? The current Northern Territory regime described by the author is entirely maintained by Laonai's personal prestige. What preparations did Laonai make in advance if he wanted to promote democracy? Are you relying on your personal prestige to forcefully implement a system that the people don't understand well? Are there any learning institutions such as party schools, universities, and cadre training institutes to cultivate talents, unify thinking, and establish the worldview and methodology you need for bureaucrats? I guess there is nothing prepared. After all, the problems with Frank and the maid can be dragged on until the thunderstorm. The main force left without leaving Lei with a back-up to deal with it (I completely don't understand that Frank is obviously spreading unknown adverse effects to female students. Scar, as the power of Xiante's integration, can't handle it, so he just waits for Lei to explode)

Jasmine is not lovable, Bianca, let's see what happens next. Those two elf slaves are really disgusting. If that was the purpose of shaping, you succeeded.

The style of my book writing may involve one person speaking a long paragraph. At this time, you need to break a paragraph into several natural paragraphs to write it more clearly. "xxx" "xxx" "xxx" This kind of three paragraphs are spoken by different people "xxx "xxx "xxx" This kind of thing is the same paragraph spoken by the same person, divided into three natural paragraphs x "xx" means what the character is thinking [xxx] means proper nouns or text In addition, if you have any questions about the plot of this book, you can post it in this comment, I will read it and answer it In addition, I will insist on it 10,000 updates per day

Have you ever been a lord? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

The writing is a bit verbose, not water, but verbose... The first thirty or forty chapters are not bad, although they are routines but very intuitive, and then the chapters after the dwarves appear, it becomes more and more verbose... The protagonist almost does not appear in the scenes, almost all the scenes of the mercenary group... It is very baffling... Note, once again, the author should have no hydrology, and the chapters must have been written seriously without using AI. He is just simply very verbose. .

This book is good. The beginning of the book is a game changer. Nowadays, the protagonists of many novels are so crazy that they are still walking on thin ice under the rules set by others. I am speechless -_-||

Is the novel meant to be so depressing?

The AI ​​drawing may be a bit strange

The title is completely inconsistent with the plot. This is clearly the template of a saint.

There are no absolute good guys and bad guys in the book, only people you like and people you don't like. Just like I don't believe there are people who hate Mother Teresa, and I don't believe there are people who like the early-stage elf Seren. Those who like the early-stage elf Seren can be canonized.

It's almost 200 chapters, and there's still no progress in Jasmine's line. At least let Nate know. Isn't it strange that the head maid is gone, or the servants are reporting it? It's like having a land mine next to you.

It's very well written, but no one has read it.

It's burned out. Can you give me some semen?

People in the other world are like idiots who don't know how to convert magical power into productivity. Every lord only exploits ordinary people, while magicians can squander money and resources without doing anything. The top leaders of the country seem to be in the same class as all those with extraordinary power, and they also engage in feudalism 😰

It's not a farming novel, it's a legendary novel

Looks good, come on, the characters are great

The people around the protagonist are very extreme in temperament, as if they are standing on the threshold of the protagonist. If they are not extreme, they are not worthy of being close to them, and then they will be educated? I didn't look at the back, so I don't know clearly. The first time I read this kind of novel, I felt like I was reading a fake person.