The Goddesses' White Moonlight

As you can see from the introduction, you have to twist, struggle, and escape, but you also have to show off, pretending to be someone else, claiming that you want to be an ordinary person, but in the end you still fell in love with 🙂

It's out of step with the times, it's too literary. If it were ten years ago, if you had written about traveling back to 1997 and engaged in this kind of literary youth, there would still be many fans willing to watch music. You may think that fans are young and can easily relate to them. In fact, children born in 2010 will turn 16 in two months. Anyway, I found this novel incomprehensible. It cannot keep up with the development of the times. It is better than the previous one. This novel is all about dreams and the music world. The setting of 1997 can be called a period novel, but the novel does not have the sense of picture that a period novel should have at all, and it only makes people feel that it is full of literary youth. I don't understand it. I think it would take a middle-aged man in his forties to understand it. But how could a man in his forties watch such a literary and youth theme? The reality has long made them breathless. This type of article is suitable for young people, but here comes the problem again. Young people in their twenties have not experienced these things and will only find them baffling. Do you intend to let a young reader in the 21st century in reality understand the concepts of young people in the 20th century in the novel? Don't make me laugh. In real life, there is a generation gap even if you are five years older than your brother 🙂 I am not a black man. Although I usually lose half of Lao Ma's books, I can read them in the early stage, but this one is really not interesting at all.

Depressed! When people reopen, they still have the mentality of small people, and they muddle along in confusion. This is very true! But it's too literary and youthful, so I don't like it! I'm going to leave now, and I'll come back to read the article later. One more thing, the literary youth is incompatible with the present. This is to persuade them to retreat.

This book gives people the feeling of "the great god is paralyzed, and the illiterate wife is trying to write a book using AI to maintain this account."

I only have one request: open a harem! ! ! Don't think of the previous book as dull and passive! Get fucked up! Without entertainment and literature, the harem is like walking in brocade at night😡😡😡

I thought your writing would get better and better, but I didn't expect that you would still insist on writing the tedious literary youth disease, crazy piles of vocabulary, and the proper rhythm. Throw away all your brains and just pave the way for the protagonist? Everyone is passionate and focused, but the protagonist is calm? Everything and any condition is building a bridge for the protagonist. What about dreams? You wouldn't dare to do this in your dreams. Do you want to do this? Dreaming is about logic, you are so illogical? Painter? I can understand being a chef if there is a book, but what about painter? You clearly know that the main line of your story is actors, screenwriters and singers, why do you insist on forcing this unrelated profession? You are a street singer, use painter, and write about literary youth for the sake of literary youth. More than 30 chapters can be described in two words, hard praise. All the characters who appear are begging for the protagonist? What is the golden finger? It is the memory of the previous life. When the protagonist walks on the street, people come to him to film, so why does he want the golden finger? There is a sentence engraved on the piano, good guy, concert He has to be the one, don't you think it's outrageous? And the damn pacing, it's exactly the same problem as the previous book. Are you writing a novel or a short play? Can't you put some thought into thinking about the logic of people's communication? Just like the previous book, you can't wait to finish it within 100 chapters. The whole story? In the past, your novels were usually five to six hundred chapters, and you fell into a boring cycle where you had nothing to write, so you could only write about business wars, or make movies. But what do you do now? Crazy concentration, condense all the early climaxes into thirty or forty chapters, and then fall directly into it. The cycle of development, I can only say, if you don't want to write, just stop writing. Are you torturing others or torturing yourself? Not for the public, just to satisfy yourself? Haha, give it up One book is not as good as the other, the writing and emotion are all very good, but the rhythm is like shit

Every book is like this, first fight against capital at home and then go abroad to win awards and fight against foreign capital, reject all company cooperation conditions, everyone is a bad guy, only those who follow him from the beginning are good people, the protagonist turns ordinary people around him into powerful directors, singers, actors and businessmen, it is too idealistic

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I kept emphasizing that I am a bricklayer and a 30-year-old middle-aged man with an honest character. Then you have traveled through time. I came here to read the refreshing article. I felt aggrieved after reading it.

I watched a few pictures and felt I could bear it, then I watched a few more and thought about it before giving it a chance, but finally I couldn't bear it after watching a few. If you want to say that you want to be a literary youth, then you have to express it. However, the protagonist is a time traveler, and he is indeed not a literary youth. What you express cannot be expressed by his identity as a carrier. If you want to be cool, you don't even know how to play the guitar, but you can reach the top rock scene level after practicing for 20 minutes on stage. You may think this is cool, but trust me, buddy, for the situation in the book, being taken away by the original owner cannot explain the plot you wrote. The original owner only learned guitar for half a year. This guitar level that comes out of thin air is neither hard work nor talent, this is Fengling Yueying! The wrong note played by the protagonist was not actually played wrong, but the sound indicating the activation of Fengling Yueying!

Face is more important than anything else. If I get good grades, I am a great person. If I do not do well, it means I want to write something different. If I don't do well, I know it in advance but I just don't change it. I used to be awesome. Now, if I don't do well, it's because the environment is not good and people don't like the slow pace anymore. Is that so? Wenqing means I admit that I am a Wenqing, you just have to endure it I will tear my face off 🙂