The Goddesses' White Moonlight

Just from the synopsis, you can tell it's all about inner conflict, struggle, and escapism, yet also about putting on a show. It's a classic case of false advertising—claiming to want to be an ordinary person, but ultimately ending up on 🙂.

That's outdated, too artsy. If it were ten years ago, if you wrote about traveling back to 1997 and did that kind of artsy stuff, you'd probably have a lot of fans willing to watch. You might think that the fans are young and easy to relate to. In fact, children born in 2010 will be 16 years old in two months. Anyway, I found this novel incomprehensible and out of touch with the times.

Depressing! The petty bourgeoisie are back to their old ways, still clinging to their petty bourgeoisie mentality—lost, drifting along, just getting by. It's so realistic! But too pretentious, I don't like it! I'm leaving now, I'll come back for a more exciting story later. One more thing, pretentious writing is out of touch with reality, this is a turn-off.

This book gives the impression that "the author has crashed, and his illiterate wife is trying to use AI to write a book to maintain the account."

I only have one request: a harem!!! Don't be like that previous book, so wooden and passive! Make it serious! An entertainment novel without a harem is like wearing fine clothes in the dark. 😡😡😡

I thought you'd get better and better at writing, but I didn't expect you to still be so fixated on that tedious, pretentious writing style, frantically piling up vocabulary, neglecting pacing, throwing away all your brainpower, and just focusing on paving the way for the protagonist? Everyone else is fired up, but the protagonist remains calm?

Every book is like this: first, the protagonist fights against capital domestically, then goes abroad to win awards and fight against foreign capital. He rejects all company cooperation offers, portraying everyone as evil except those who initially stayed by his side. The protagonist transforms ordinary people around him into successful directors, singers, actors, and businessmen—it's overly idealistic.

After reading over ten chapters, all he talks about is being a bricklayer, a 30-year-old honest man—what the hell is this about? I came here for a satisfying read, and it's frustrating.

After looking at a few pictures, I felt I could tolerate them. After looking at a few more, I thought I'd give them another chance. But after looking at a few more, I couldn't stand them anymore. If you want to be a literary youth, then you have to express it. However, the protagonist is a time traveler, and he is not a literary youth.

Face is more important than anything else. Good grades make you a genius, bad grades mean I want to write something different. I knew in advance that my grades would be bad, but I just didn't change. I used to be awesome, but now my grades are bad because the environment is bad and people don't like a slow pace anymore. Is that right? I admit I'm a literary youth, so you can just accept it. The limited-time free offer has completely exposed their true colors. 🙂