Runaway Evolution

The technology tree is so crooked. It's not that biological modification of humans is not possible, but it feels very inefficient. It requires medicine to numb the body's reaction every day, and it also requires special pipelines and dormant warehouses. It only works for 13 hours, and you can rest at other times. Unless the basic materials are already very scarce, the cost will be very high, but judging from the plot, basic materials like rocks and metals are not particularly scarce. Furthermore, the protagonist has a complete brain structure and clear cognition, but it is blocked under the influence of anesthetics. Preserving the brain is undoubtedly a very costly failed design. It seems that most of the plastic people have retained their intact brain structures. The cost is too high, and this senseless loss is completely unnecessary.

The setting is interesting, but why does a clothes hanger need to be made by someone? The cost is too high, it requires pipelines and chemicals. This is best explained later. I remember reading a book in which people were transformed into various tools by aliens in order to punish those who resisted.

The cultivation is okay, but the metaphor of AI is abstract and has no sense of picture. It would be better to use more action descriptions to highlight the sense of power and images. Now the author really needs to use AI to write, alas~

Contempt? Flesh punk has also begun to revive

It's interesting, although I don't really like it, but it's quite novel It gives me a feeling that I'm either a little famous or no one cares about me.

All tomorrows? Or an angel at dusk?

Get something special for the protagonist, otherwise the protagonist will be like a shield soldier in the era of hot weapons. Every time he goes to fight, he will deploy his bone shield first. He will be very frustrated when he is beaten, and the sense of substitution is very poor. You may think that your background setting is awesome and imaginative, but if you don't write it, the protagonist will have a growth ability. If you want to improve the content, your novel will only become a type of martial arts fighting in a strange world. There are many authors who engage in martial arts in a strange world, but there are only a few who stand out. Remember, in a strange world, the protagonist must be a mage, and don't always write about shield warriors. Typical For example, Terror Resurrection, the protagonist is the mage side, the Lord of Mysteries, the protagonist is the mage side, the mysterious fairy, the protagonist is the mage side,, The main character on the mage side does not mean to use elemental magic to fight from the beginning, but perception, very good at escaping, and has attributes such as controlled stun and slowdown, which are also on the mage side, >For example, your perception is awesome, you can spot the enemy in advance, and run away quickly, instead of being passively beaten in 9 out of 10 chapters like you. You keep writing like this, which will only use rubbish combat settings to destroy your imagination. To be honest, even if you write that spitting can stun the enemy, it is better than being beaten by your shield soldier.

This is the only one I've seen that writes about carbon-based technology trees, and that's enough for me to read on.

Good inspiration, pretty hardcore writing. The imagination in the first chapter is still a bit amazing, and it feels like watching the difference engine for the first time. I personally can give it a 7/10. The AI ​​is a flaw, and the writing and rhythm also need to be improved. If it is purely handwritten and the writing style is better, you can increase it by 0.5 To 1.5 Points.

I still like this style very much.

I really like the author's style. Come on

The writing is good, but it doesn't feel immersive at all. . . .

Monthly passes and follow-up reading of the new book are so important. This is the first time for a newcomer to write a soft science novel. Once it is successfully released, there will definitely be more updates. Thank you all in advance.

The first few chapters are not easy to get started with. There is no background and world view, and the story is told directly. However, when you enter the rules, you can see a little meaning. Compared with escalating destruction, or the author wants to write a revolution, of course, it needs to be slowly unfolded. The era, conservative and radical, governance and resistance, blind obedience and innovation, ha, in the end, you have to follow your own path, which is not bad.

A great book, mixed with early revolutionary ideas and the conflicts and divisions among its internal members, with the romance of the idealists at that time I hope the author can finish this good book. I personally think it is a good book. I will support you when it is released in the future. Come on 😡😡

I don't know if it's the theme or the author's desire to create this flavor. It has a strong AI flavor, like a short-sentence fairy tale.

No update today? A eunuch or what?