Mortal: from the Dian Shengliu Cloud Sword to the Green Bamboo Bee Cloud Sword

The protagonist was very frustrated when getting along with Han Li. It was fair game for the protagonist to have any disputes with Han Li throughout the whole process. However, when he was about to teleport and saved Nangong Wan, Han Li immediately asked Nangong Wan to kill the protagonist, but then he was seriously injured without agreeing. From this point of view, it is understandable that Han Li wanted to protect himself, but what he did seemed disgusting, and Nangong Wan was also disgusting. The protagonist, a time traveler, actually believed that Han Li was a demonic golden elixir that attacked him. Apart from anything else, it would have been impossible for Nangong Wan to reach peak combat power immediately by absorbing Han Li just after being seriously injured, and it was even more impossible for him to beat away the elixir-forming monks in an instant. As long as the protagonist has a brain, he will know that Han Li asked Nangong Wan to take action (ps: Are there any other readers here who feel the same way?). The first thing the protagonist should do after the teleportation is to forcefully kill Han Li at the risk of serious injury to take revenge, and grab the small green bottle by the way. If they were still so-called "harmful friends" before, at least Nangong Wan and Han Li were enemies to death when they attacked the protagonist together. The same is true for the author. He beat a Foundation Establishment monk until all his orifices were bleeding. Given the fragility of the human body, it was impossible to fully heal him no matter how much he nursed him. The author treated him as an ordinary injury and slowly nursed him back to health. Force the protagonist to ignore this matter? If you say that you designed the plot specifically for the follow-up, then obviously you have not grasped the scale well, because not only did you write a random thing here, but you also seriously reduced the protagonist's intelligence.

Dealing with the relationship with Han seems poisonous Writing fan fiction either treats the original protagonist as a passerby, or builds a good relationship. The most poisonous thing is to treat the original protagonist as an opponent. The protagonist has the advantage but cannot kill the original protagonist, or is plotted by the original protagonist and can only comfort himself. He dare not kill, and the licking is not in place. This kind of watching is the most frustrating

Nangong Wan almost beat the protagonist to death, but the protagonist Yuanying returned and politely said it was not intentional and you can forgive him 😅

Others are playing at the 11th and 12th levels in the Immortal Ascension Conference. If you play at 9 levels, I can't imagine winning at 9 levels.

What a mess, the protagonist is a dog licker, Han Li's dog licker, the protagonist of the chapter "Jie Ying Zhang" personally admits that the world of immortality is meaningless without Han Li as an immortal cultivator. After returning to Tiannan, he found out that Han Li plotted against the protagonist and caused him to be seriously injured. He said that he didn't care about it anymore. Hahahahaha, the more I read, the more crazy I become.

Old turtle! ! ! It looks like he is not licking, but if you think about it carefully, the licking is powerful and the licking is hidden.

I don't think the hook is big enough. Is it interesting for Han Li to be sweet every day? You want to be your own protagonist. This is a fanfic. You can't even defeat Han Li in practice.

Either don't accept it or don't write the plot about Han Li's underground palace and Nangong Wan, and then the protagonist goes to join in the fun I don't know what the bad taste is.

1. The writing is not good 2. The protagonist's character is not good 3. It's not exciting 4. Can't the plot advance without Han Li? Giving opportunities to Han Li in various ways 5. If you don't accept the purple spirit when you enter the Miaoyin Gate, why go in there?

Looking at the introduction, it is outrageous that the protagonist asks Han Li for Geng Jing. Han Li's plug-in is a small green bottle. I can understand why you ask him for spiritual grass and spiritual plants. But for Geng Jing, Han Li himself does not have a stable channel to obtain Geng Jing. If he really wants Geng Jing, he can't find a few pieces that appear in the original work. Do you have to go through Han Li's hand?

I don't even dare to cheat. The protagonist is a pure turtle man and a loser. Rather than saying that the stone is a cheat, it's better to say that the author gave the turtle hero a cultivation base to cheat 🙂

I don't want to read the anime adaptation. What the anime has changed is the audience and film and television effects. The logic is too different from the novel. The original Hongfu and Yunlu have nothing to do with each other. They don't know each other at all. Let's analyze a lot of bugs. They were modified to attract female audiences. Can the author please read the original novel carefully before writing? Otherwise, if you try writing it down, you won't be able to get around it later. The best fan fiction is mainly novels, and you've read countless fan stories. You're just getting started, so don't be stubborn!

I vomited. In order to bind to Han Liqiang, Ji Xuan's ashes were half in the teleportation array. One went to Qi Yunxiao to learn weapon refining, another went to Xin Ruyin to learn the formation, and Nangong Wan sucked Han Li dry and inexplicably caused the protagonist to be seriously injured. You might as well just accept Han Li as your father. Forced binding is disgusting.

I'm so speechless. It's true that Xiang Zhili is in the stage of becoming a god. He won't be scared to pee his pants, right? And just thinking about it makes me feel like peeing my pants. The protagonist loves to pee naturally? Cautiously, a person gets a useless fly whisk and then leaves? I feel like the protagonist really has no goals, he has sex without purpose, and his efforts are often in vain.

The writing is too incoherent. Many words are incoherent and there are too many bad sentences You can continue to ride on the popularity of mortal animation. No wonder no one is watching this level.

Damn it, when I saw the part about the Bloody Forbidden Zone in Chapter 25, where even two people from the Hidden Moon Sect didn't dare to kill two people from the Hidden Moon Sect even if they had weapons in their hands, and they were being chased like dogs, I really laughed out loud. I won't pick on you if you are a pure monk without a cheat, but you are such a coward even if you have a big killer weapon with a cheat in your hand. It's really rubbish.

This book. It's okay to watch at first. After the foundation is established, it will become pulpy. The protagonist becomes mean, despicable, shameless, and mentally retarded

Many people are debating whether to have a heroine or not and whether to have a harem. There are a lot of brats. Of course I don't want a heroine. Just have a woman. Why? Do I have to be responsible for sleeping? What kind of child psychology? I am a demonic monk, a bunch of virgin children.

Now I think the protagonist is disgusted. The author has problems with his mentality and character. From time to time, he writes too much and writes the protagonist into garbage and then comes to make up for it. Now I think the protagonist in your novel is just a bug lying on Han Li, picking up things that Han Li doesn't want and messing with him. He is a poor imitation of Han Li's acting style and contradicts his own personality.

There's nothing interesting about Goldfinger. I'll stop reading this fan fiction if Goldfinger isn't interesting.

Fortunately, I always read the comments section before reading a book🤣Otherwise, I won't even know if I've been poisoned

A top-grade magic weapon, a top-level magic weapon, requires absorbing the essence of the sun and moon for a year. . This is also called golden finger. .

I dare not watch it. Now the two are inseparable and occasionally use each other's names. I am afraid of seeing the following plot: Fairy Nangong, don't look back, I am Han Li, Siyue, don't look back, I am Lu Chen.

I'm really impressed, I spent money to see shit

I have seen a lot of nanny flow, this is the first time I have seen turtle flow.

Primary school students write whatever comes to mind

Collect recent comments from viewers. First, the current singleness of Goldfinger. Because the protagonist was not able to access the weapon refining stage at the beginning, and did not show other abilities other than strengthening the finished magic weapon, he simply overcame the difficulties in order to quickly improve the overall combat power, which led to this single occurrence. Since it is not a system flow, I am afraid that excessive display will affect the perception of the plot. This point will be discussed later on the function of weapon refining materials that can also be strengthened. Second, Goldfinger is weak. Because of the original intention of not disturbing the settings of mortals at will, Gold Finger started with it. Every weapon has a certain spirituality. No matter how weak or strong it is, it strengthens the maximum power that the magical weapon can activate. In order to pass, I considered this aspect very carefully. Therefore, it was finally decided that each magic weapon should have the maximum posture limit and an enhanced plus one setting. Why didn't you imagine a golden finger for infinitely evolving magic weapons? An ordinary magic weapon has evolved to the level of the Xuantian Spirit-Slaying Sword. This requires a point of view of one's own understanding. The reason why the Xuantian Spirit-Slaying Sword is the Xuantian Spirit-Slaying Sword is because its essence is bred from the Xuantian Immortal Vine. The reason why the Qingzhu Fengyun Sword is Qingzhu Fengyun is that its essence is made from ten thousand-year-old Golden Thunder Bamboo. In my view of the mortal world, the upper limit of all magical weapons should depend on the materials used to refine them. The set colored stone-enhanced gold fingers can upgrade the nature of the weapon material, maximize the potential of the weapon, and achieve a relatively reasonable level-hopping battle. So out of a certain degree of rigor, there is no so-called concept of infinite reinforcement. Otherwise, a sword made of ordinary iron forging materials can eventually be strengthened into a Xuantian Spirit-Slaying Sword that is comparable to the Xuantian Immortal Vine. In the ordinary view, iron objects and mysterious heaven objects each have their upper limit. It will exceed the maximum ability that the refining materials should not have, and will disturb all the underlying settings of mortals. Secondly, I complained about the resource replacement ability. Just scold me, I've been having insomnia for two or three days because of this. I have also imagined a short CD cooldown and multiple enhancements to equalize the output of small green bottle resources by selling magic weapons. But it will be ignored that the golden finger itself brings a real-time combat power improvement effect. The result of this is severe numerical inflation, and various logical collapses in order to equalize. Every time I tell myself that this is a fan of mortals and requires a certain amount of logic. Recklessly setting the hook too high will affect a lot of logic. So I was a little overly conservative at the beginning. In addition, in terms of the strengthening of the refining materials, there was no display since the official refining process had not started. Wait for two days, this will be shown again soon. ... ... In short, out of responsibility for this work, there is only so much to say about Goldfinger.

🐶💩, The protagonist is a turtle man, who is always sullen and shrinking

The author still didn't read the original work in detail and didn't understand Han Li's temperament. Little Green Bottle Nangong Wan didn't even know that Han Li would share it. Fans who wrote it would either cut off the Little Green Bottle, or their golden fingers had similar functions, or they wouldn't grab it. The results of using shared routines are very average, because this is not what Han Li would do.

Does this pig's foot have Stockholm syndrome?