Swallowed Star: Becoming a God Through a Hundred Lifetimes of Talent

To be honest, the plot is a bit ridiculous. It's just a Golden Horned Beast, yet it's connected to the Mountain-Sitting Guest. Even his disciple, Bodhi, wouldn't care about some planetary-level beings. Without cultivating to the Ninth Tribulation, they don't even deserve a glance. Luo Feng was arranged by the Old Master to become the master of the Star Tower before and after.

One question is, since everyone knows that starting with Earth means fewer readers and less success, why do they all stubbornly choose to write it? The whole "hundred lifetimes of reincarnation" thing—writing about the early universe, the primordial era, or before the rise of the primordial beings—isn't it all just hype? Knowing the earliest cosmic ruler in his childhood? How interesting!

The first author completely forgets that mentalists can fly; the second, the Golden Horned Beast, is a creation of the Mountain-Sitting Guest; the Mountain-Sitting Guest won't bother with you if you don't cultivate the Nine Tribulations Secret Scripture, and won't accept disciples if you don't acknowledge the Star Tower as your master.

That's so petty. They couldn't defeat the Golden Horned Beast, so they suspected it was a trick by the Mountain Dwellers. It really made me laugh. They really think Earth is something amazing.

You've reincarnated a hundred times, each life stronger than the last, but your chosen timeline is flawed. You shouldn't have started in the same era as Luo Feng; you should have begun in the Primordial Era. By the time of Luo Feng, he would at least be a True God or a Universe Lord who followed the path of divine power. Starting in the same era as Luo Feng means you can't keep up with his pace.

The appeal of a "hundred lifetimes" storyline lies in the fact that each lifetime is stronger than the last, with the starting and ending points of each new life surpassing the previous one. But then, in this supposedly perfect situation, Luo Feng's master gets a forced conspiracy where the Mountain-Sitting Guest tests a lowly planetary-level being enhanced by a Golden Horned Beast and is…

Author, have you even read Swallowed Star? The Lord of Flint is the alien universe lord of Hongmeng, and you're still jealous that Giant Axe gave the protagonist a treasure (even though he didn't). The Lord of Flint even summoned the human universe lord to hold the Giant Axe Conference. Does he even have that ability? An alien universe lord holding the highest Giant Axe Conference of the human race, are you sure there's no problem with that?

My assessment is that the author has watched too many short dramas. The writing is clearly awkward, yet the author acts nonchalant, trying to project an image of a powerful figure. Secondly, the part about opening a martial arts school genuinely made me laugh. Is the Limit Martial Arts School bad, or the Thunder Martial Arts School bad?

This guy didn't even know that psychic telekinetics could fly. I couldn't believe that the protagonist, a god-level psychic, could use his movement skills to escape through the swarm of rats after covering everyone's retreat.

It's getting worse and worse. Starting from that time in the Holy Land, I really don't understand what you're writing. It's getting worse and worse. The beginning was so well written, I don't understand what happened later. Realm Lord, I can understand your cultivation level being restricted; it's about comprehending the laws!