Swallowed Star: Becoming a God Through a Hundred Lifetimes of Talent

To be honest, the plot is a bit funny. It's just a giant golden-horned beast that can still be related to the mountain guest. Even his disciple Bodhi doesn't care about some planet-level ones. Those who haven't practiced Nine Tribulations don't deserve to be looked at. Luo Feng was arranged by his boss to be the master of the Star Tower.

I have a question. We all know that the earth will start and the results will not be very good if there are few readers. Why are we so determined to write about it one by one? Reincarnation of hundreds of generations, if you write about the early days of the original universe, the period of the original ancestors, or before the rise of the original ancestors, isn't it all a gimmick? I have known the original Lord of the Universe since he was a child. How interesting. The idea of ​​this book is very good. If you write about the early stage or before the rise of Yuan, your results will be very good, and you may even compare it with the book on becoming a god. The timeline is too late. They are all plots that I know from the original work, and they are not interesting at all.

The first author didn't remember that spiritual masters could fly at all, and the second golden-horned giant beast became the handiwork of a mountain guest. If you don't practice the Nine Tribulations Secret Code, the mountain guest won't bother to care about you. If you don't recognize the Lord Star Tower, the mountain guest will not accept disciples. There is no realm in the third space, or in other words, the realm of space laws is only available to the venerable universe. Those below immortality can directly understand the laws of space. Many fan authors make this mistake. You

I was so angry that I couldn't defeat the golden-horned giant beast, so I suspected it was a trick of the mountain guest. It really made me laugh. I really thought that the earth was something great.

After hundreds of reincarnations, each life is stronger than the last, but the timeline you chose is not good. It should not start from the same era as Luo Feng. It should start from the era of the original ancestor. By the time of Luo Feng, you are at least a true god, or the Lord of the Universe who takes the divine route. You start in the same era as Luo Feng. You and I can't keep up with Luo Chengzhu's footsteps. Every step of your life The next reincarnation is to start over, not to inherit. Even if the talent is enhanced, the training time is too short. How can you keep up with City Lord Luo? Also, in your second life, you have a good relationship with City Lord Luo and form a master-disciple relationship. As a result, your planet died in battle. In the third life, Luo Feng became the strong man you looked up to. Does this benefit you? Is it good for your reincarnation? Does Luo Feng know you? It's better to tell Luo Feng that you can be reincarnated for hundreds of lives. I was your teacher in the previous life. You have to help me until you die in this life, the fourth, fifth, and sixth reincarnation... Does Luo Feng know you? Who are you?

The cool thing about the theme of Baishi is that each life is stronger than the last, and the starting point and end of the next life are stronger than the previous one. As a result, you, Luo Feng's master, came up with a conspiracy theory and a mountain guest to test the asteroid-level reinforced golden-horned giant beast. Let's kill... Then Luo Feng soared into the sky, and you turned into an irrelevant little Karami. I feel so aggrieved at this point... This kind of reincarnation in disguised form is better than being able to use this golden finger on the spot when you got achievement points in your previous life.

Has the author seen Swallowed Starry Sky? The Lord of Flintstone is the Lord of the alien universe in Hongmeng. You are still jealous of the giant ax that gave the protagonist a treasure (although he didn't give it to him). The Lord of Flintstone also summoned the Lord of the human universe to hold a giant ax meeting. Does he have that ability? An alien universe master convened the highest giant ax meeting of the human race. Are you sure there is no problem?

I think I have watched too many short plays by the author. The descriptions are obviously very embarrassing, but he also looks calm and relaxed, which makes him look like a strong man. Secondly, opening a martial arts gym really made me laugh. Is it the Ultimate Martial Arts Gym or the Thunder and Lightning Martial Arts Gym? It's still free. I forgot exactly how old you are, but it must be at least before the end of high school. Why do people come to the Meng Family Martial Arts Gym that your brother-in-law invested tens of millions in?

This guy didn't even know that a telepathic master could fly. I couldn't stand it when I watched the protagonist, a god-of-war telepathic master, use his physical skills to get two legs to escape in the rat tide after covering the retreat of others.

It's getting worse and worse. Starting from that time in the Holy Land, I really don't understand what you are writing. The more you write, the worse it gets. I wrote so well in the front, but I don't know what's going on behind you. Boundary Lord, it's understandable that you are stuck in your cultivation, you have to understand the law! The secret method is already at level 678910, but you are still stuck in immortality, venerable? Then he also said how many resources are needed to improve genes. Can't we directly break through the Lord of the Universe? Immortal, Venerable, the Lord of the Universe comprehends the laws at the same speed, and his breakthrough power is a hundred times stronger. Do you have to suppress the Venerable and beat the Lord of the Universe, the strongest person? Forcibly suppress and not break through, just show off. Writing like this will not make you feel awesome, it will only make readers feel really bad. The most important point is that in The Devouring Book, I have always only seen the end of the original universe, and reincarnation is the finale for me, no matter how beautiful the subsequent writing is. I don't know how many people have the same opinion as me. Suggestion: Your book is suitable for writing about the early days of the primitive universe, when the universe first opened. I also feel that you have nothing written in the original universe now.