Swallowed Star: Refreshing My Character in the Myriad Worlds

Has Panlong World forgotten that Hongmeng, the powerful being, has always been watching over the beings he created?

It has many flaws and a strong "Dragon Overlord" vibe; if it's not changed, this book won't go far.

It takes thousands of times the genetic multiplier to break through to the first level of planetary rank! Even with Panlong's dual-elemental godhood enlightenment and his bloodline with thousands of times the genetic multiplier, he only touched the edge of the domain. No matter how difficult the domain is, it can't be this level, right?

I couldn't continue reading the Panlong chapter because of so many basic plot holes! First, the protagonist didn't even know it was about the Devouring World, and even knowing it was about the Devouring Star, he was still talking to himself—was he afraid of being exposed? Since he knew he was a character in the script, why didn't he think he was being monitored?

Can't we take our insights about the regulations with us? 🤔

Write more side stories. This kind of hellish, realistic start is toxic no matter how you write it, unless the protagonist continuously accumulates resources, breaks through to the Realm Lord level in one go, and then takes or destroys the planet. Otherwise, I can't think of a better ending.

What kind of stuff is Battle Through the Heavens? Flying combat skills are special combat skills that seal the wings of magical beasts and can only be used by one person. Rather than calling flying combat skills, it's more like calling them props. You're treating flying combat skills as cultivation skills? Please stick to the original setting, okay?

The escape was too crude; the spaceship must have had protection, identification, and positioning systems.

This book will involve many different worlds, which I believe are all familiar to you. I've read all of these books, but some of them were read quite a while ago, so I don't remember the details perfectly. If you find any errors or mistakes in the writing, or if you have any better ideas, please feel free to discuss them! Let's work together to make this story even better. 😆

I stopped reading the Battle Through the Heavens arc. The protagonist was constantly entangled with an original female character. It wasn't engaging at all. Fan fiction should focus as much as possible on the interactions between the main character and important characters who appeared in the original work. Otherwise, why bother writing fan fiction at all?