Rebirth at the Doomsday: the Beginning of Prison Is Just to Change Your Fate Against the Will of Heaven

[A book review from a colleague] Writing suggestions: 1. After reading a few chapters of Goldfinger, which is so big at the beginning, I really can't stand it. It is a black card that has the best combat power in the world at the beginning and has more than 200,000 cards. What else to write after? All good novels are about not going too fast. You are not even considered a good novel. You don't dare to write a good novel so fast! 2. Mainstream readers are basically unable to relate to cards. When writing a book for the first time, you must be down-to-earth and creative and add ideas to the mainstream. 3. Rebirth flow can suggest writing about rebirth at the end of the world. Your writing is not bad, control the rhythm, and use pathos in the early stage. Tragic experiences pave the way for the artistic conception. The chance of rebirth in the apocalypse is probably not at an end. It is best to use evolutionary powers instead, and don't have too many social interactions, drags, or relatives. The mainstream of the apocalypse is the lone wolf. One person is lonely in the apocalypse and has future memories to be reborn to change something! 4. You can even take a few more classic apocalyptic novels to learn from tailoring!

Slip away, speechless, I don't know how to use such a huge advantage and so many resources, just stay in the ring! I know the end of the world in advance, I have collected so many cards, I even have the highest level of power, and I have thousands of blue and purple talent skills and weapons. From what you wrote, blue and purple should be considered relatively good, and they are considered above average. Moreover, the cards that everyone can use are limited, and I can't use them myself. I still keep saying that I want to build a force! You have to consider whether to save your life even if the person who saved your life in the past life is not a cunning and repetitive person, but is relatively talented. You even had a one-night stand in the previous life. If you can save your life, you will not accept it, and you will not accept it. Then you keep talking about building a power in the future, which is nonsense! You don't need any subordinates to fight as workers. When you are reborn and you get the most advanced power calculation, you don't have to take care of your own power. You collect so many cards and don't let your subordinates develop. It's useless to wait for you to develop alone. Even if you develop, you won't be able to survive alone without your subordinates. Individuals can't compare to a group. If you collect so many cards, you will probably have many people who are more likely to die than in the previous life. If everyone is dead, what will you use to build your influence? How to expand if you don't have a foundation! ? Even if you don't use the resources, it's not like you don't have the resources. Are hundreds of thousands of cards sitting in a ring waiting to get moldy? Even if you say you want to develop, wouldn't it be faster to take over your subordinates and give them cards to cultivate a top team? Running alone, speechless😅

It's a bit inconsistent, think about it more when writing.

I really don't understand, what do some people want to see? If they want to see something novel, go to Platinum Master. What are they doing to find fault with a newcomer? They are not watching the awesome setting of Lord of Mysteries. Anyway, after following the first chapter, it can't be said to be a particularly awesome doomsday article, but it doesn't have any poisonous points. At least for me, the content is above average so far. Anyway, I quite like it, just leave it to the author.

Although there are flaws, there is no need to spray it like this.

That's stupid, the card was in a public place, probably a prank. But randomly appearing in a prison out of thin air, is this still a prank? When this happens, the official people are still idiots. For more than two months, such bizarre incidents have been happening all over the world. I want to say that you are insulting the intelligence of the entire human race.

After reading more than 20 chapters, it's not as bad as you said. If you say that the plot is cliche, please write one yourself or recommend an apocalyptic novel that is not cliché. If the system beeps, you don't call it cliché. What do you call cliché? I've read it and I think it's okay

The second volume is coming soon, and many readers reported that the card appearance rate was too low. The author admitted his mistake and stood up to be scolded. So the author will work hard on this next and try to write more fun cards to add interest. If readers have any good ideas, they are welcome to submit them. (I really don't know how to thank you, so if I can use it, I will thank the reader ID separately in the article)

I can only say that what I wrote is not in line with the current situation, so just treat it as a practice.

The protagonist's physical attributes increased by one-tenth during the two weeks of the apocalypse. This is still a warrior who has been reborn in the apocalypse. So I want to ask, how did Hu Xiu become such a warrior? You can increase the value by a hundred times. The physical attributes of the protagonist are increased by ten times. This is only reasonable.

Introduction: What is the operation of hiding in prison? If you have the attribute of a prophet, don't you have to move freely? It's unthinkable to go to jail for a stunt. .

I can only say it's too good. The black card does not have any top-notch concepts!

I was a turtle in my previous life. After my rebirth, I became a new person and became omnipotent. Do you believe the author? And he always talks coldly, which makes me want to laugh.

I quite like it. It's not too toxic. The comments above don't agree with it. Sometimes simplicity is good. If you insist on innovation, nine out of ten people will die on the road.

After collecting so many cards, I just worked hard for the early stage.

The writing style is so familiar. Are you Zhengyi Di, the LV5 writer from Qidian?

Does the end of the world need emotional drama? Is the author emotional? Can you write a decent emotional line? So it's better to stop writing emotional dramas and just explore and survive on your own 😅

Update quickly, two chapters a day are not enough

Zika gets wolf blood, it's too crotch-inducing

I'm always thinking about helping this and that, and other people have written so many plots that I feel visually exhausted and speechless.

There was some constipation in the front but getting better

How many rules and morals will be left in a civilized society at the end of the world? They have been suppressed by civilization for so long. Once they are separated from civilization, the evil in 90% of people's hearts will be infinitely magnified, and things that a civilized society would not dare to do will be released. Humans are inherently advanced animals. Once they are not civilized, they become the law of the jungle and become wild animals. The apocalypse is originally a dark article, written with a close focus on the theme.