Cultivation of the World of Immortality, Martial Arts Spread All over the World

There is a female protagonist chasing me 😍😍😍

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Would a young master who has never been severely beaten by society write about the Demon Sect? There is one day off every month, 100 taels for three months, and meat to eat, and private fights are prohibited? Can it also attract visitors from all over the world? Is this the magic gate described by Fu Shao? Than the leader of the righteous path?

Can't immortal cultivators fight in close combat? The body cultivation among immortal practitioners is to use the body as a magical weapon, relying on spiritual power, and purely fighting at close range with fists and feet.

It's boring. It's still a failure. When I read the introduction, I thought it was about a book where the main character develops martial arts in the face of adversity, becomes a martial ancestor, and becomes the leader of the line. After reading it, I found that he is still following the steps and practicing according to the path of his predecessors. There is nothing new. The setting of a classic sudden decline. When I read the introduction, I didn't want to see a step-by-step road to revenge, but a glorious path of creation.

Your demon sect doesn't look like a demon sect, but rather like a gangster.

Are you willing to take any risks? I feel like I am not willing to take risks at all. During the battle between two foundation-building monsters and a foundation-building monster, I ventured in to grab the treasure. It is recommended to change the name, otherwise it will be misleading.

We are still in danger, wouldn't it be good to have one more cannon fodder subordinate? On the way to escape, you were seriously injured. When you met a kitten or puppy that usually asked for happiness, you would kick it.

The more I read, the more boring I become. I am immersed in this fusion world day by day. I write a training manual every day, only two chapters. I abandon the book and prepare

Classic writing style, cliched plot, but the writing style is OK, you can read it, but the heroine is not likable

You learn to hunt, you may have an ending of 100 chapters, but it just reaches the climax of a new level and ends abruptly. How will people follow your books from now on? It's irresponsible.

If you want to write a good martial arts story, why do you have to have a female protagonist? If you haven't seen a woman before, can't you write a good book?

The routine of many books written by authors is to keep pretending and getting slapped in the face, but the routine of this book is to be constantly hunted and run away, which is not fun at all. As a bad guy, the protagonist spent tens of thousands of years and many heavenly materials and earthly treasures cultivating into a B who perfectly integrated nine kinds of skills with a golden body and combat power. It's not exciting at all, it's very depressing to watch.

Have you ever been a dog? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Why do you want to write this heroine to death? Why did you delete the comment? What this heroine wrote is disgusting to begin with.

You can still watch in the front, but there are endless matryoshka dolls in the back, which is boring.

Every time I read the strength system based on ten thousand kilograms, I want to laugh. In the middle stage of the writing, a hundred-ton king can kill him with that little strength. In the later stage of the writing, I don't know if it can withstand a small mountain. A hundred-meter-high mountain has hundreds of millions of tons.

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I only read this book at Qidian. I only had two monthly votes. I voted for them all and supported the author. Only by continuing to read three times a day can I enjoy reading it.

Any issues with smart launch? Obviously the author works very hard to update 10,000 words every day. Why do I add so little to my collection every day? That's outrageous.

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No matter how you say it, at least it has an ending, a beginning and an end.

Is this a name change? After raising it for so long, I thought it was gone. After searching for a long time, it must have been renamed. I don't remember it being this name.

With this kind of achievement, I can continue to write a million words, which is quite worthy of the readers.

It feels normal for this book not to be popular. Once you get tired of novels with this kind of theme, no one will read it. Nowadays, many authors are adding other cities and themes to the theme of cultivating immortality. Now there is a book about cultivating immortality with loans, which is quite good.

Lao Mu is also heartbroken, has no love left, and has completely stopped writing! What a pity for a good young fantasy writer! The starting point is also the end, and I will never read other online articles from Qidian...

Write a novel about cultivating immortals. Cultivating immortals can lead to immortality, while practicing martial arts can only strengthen your body.

What do you mean, author? I just added your book to my collection today and you are a eunuch. I am convinced. How can I read your book in the future?

This book is destined to be pornographic. The atmosphere is depressing from beginning to end. The setting is not valid. From the beginning, contradictions and conflicts cannot coexist between immortals and martial arts. The author is destined to be unable to continue writing.

Damn it, I actually subscribed to a lot of them. Why don't I remember this book? Has the name been changed?