Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei, the Great Alchemist

Is the literary youth of the Dragon Clan a must-have?

Roy's spiritual spirit is "Jun Yan", the great president's spiritual spirit is "Time Zero", and Edward's spiritual spirit is "Heaven and Earth are a furnace"😃😃😃

I couldn't stand seeing the clan envoys. The dragon clan and Harry Potter settings are all about special groups hiding in the real world. Young people in Jiangnan are ignorant, and they are messing around in the Three Gorges. You are even more ignorant, and ordinary people can be killed at will. What about the hidden consensus in the mixed race world? If there really is such an awesome clan, either the country is controlled by the clan, or the country is completely unaware of it. Obviously neither is possible. So is such a powerful clan waiting for the army to fight terrorism and clear its territory?

Aren't the domestic mixed races in the Dragon Clan under the control of orthodoxy? If you dare to openly engage in the clan's special envoys, aren't you afraid that the Zhou family will carry the Broken Dragon Platform?

Good second grade, it seems like a fanfic written by my junior high school classmate. The writing style is a bit too strong. I will persist.

Lu Mingfei in Dragon Clan actually doesn't care so much about Hui Liyi

Humanity has developed less than one percent of Lu Mingfei

Also, I found that there seems to be some problem with the combat power. Is Xia Mi described as a little too weak? She can't even beat an Odin puppet. Although everyone laughs and calls her the next-generation species, she is still a first-generation species. Don't tell me that Odin can mass-produce first-generation species.

There are a lot of typos, but the flaws are not hidden, and it is still good-looking. However, there is a plot in the middle that makes me feel like I have eaten shit-flavored chocolate. It describes a long plot between Lu Mingfei and Xia Mi, and then ends hastily with a sworn knot. It does not mean that relationships must end with love, but are you a bit too hasty? Moreover, I subjectively like Xia Mi very much, so I still feel a little uncomfortable. I hope that when the author writes the next Dragon Clan, he can write Xia Mi as the heroine.

The female channel's style is too heavy and there are too many commas