Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei, the Great Alchemist

Is the literary and artistic side of the Dragon Clan an indispensable part of the experience?

Roy's Word of Power is "King's Flame," the Führer's Word of Power is "Time Zero," and Edward's Word of Power is "Heaven and Earth as Furnace." 😃😃😃

Seeing the clan envoy's outburst, I realized that the settings of Dragon Clan and Harry Potter both involve special groups hiding in the real world. Jiangnan, young and naive, wrote nonsense in the Three Gorges area; you're even more naive, killing ordinary people at will. What about the consensus on the hidden existence of hybrid races?

Aren't the domestic hybrids in the Dragon Clan under the direct control of the orthodox lineage? Aren't they afraid that openly appointing a clan envoy will provoke the Zhou family to take them to the Dragon-Slaying Platform?

So cringey! It sounds like a fanfiction written by one of my middle school classmates. The writing style is a bit too over-the-top. I'll try to stick with it.

Lu Mingfei in Dragon Raja wasn't actually that concerned about Erii.

Humans have only developed less than one percent of Lu Mingfei's potential.

I also noticed a problem with her combat power. Is Xia Mi portrayed as a bit too weak? She can't even defeat an Odin puppet. Although everyone jokingly calls her a second-generation Great Perfection, she's still a first-generation being, right? Don't tell me Odin can mass-produce first-generation puppets.

There are many typos, but the flaws don't detract from the overall enjoyment; it's still a good read. However, there's a part of the story that felt like eating a piece of chocolate that tasted like shit. It depicted a large part of Lu Mingfei and Xia Mi's relationship, and then ended with a hasty sworn brotherhood.

The female-oriented style is too strong, and commas are used too much.