The Wandering Immortal

This is my first time signing a contract with Qidian, so pure and adorable! I have read online articles for many years and am also a paying reader of Qidian. Once you start writing, you will realize that everything is difficult. There are immature parts, I hope all book friends will understand. If you want to smash it with recommendation votes and monthly tickets, Bronze has no choice but to take it. Thank you very much!

I thought it was someone writing "The Wandering Immortal" that combines Western fantasy and immortality. It turned out to be Journey to the West. I blame myself for reading it wrong.

The level of force written by Tianting is too low, and it feels like ascending is the same as not ascending.

This Tianting and Taibaijinxing are too good. I couldn't stand it from the beginning.

I think it's okay, but if I write about the protagonist taking his young wife Qinghe to practice immortality together, I hope I can write about more cute things about Qinghe.

The writing is very good, but the beginning is a bit long. It would be better to start directly from the lower world. I don't think there are any recommendations for food, and the number of people reading novels overall has decreased.