Fish and Hunt to Survive in the New World

Is there any mysterious element? A weak one is fine. Otherwise, ordinary people can survive for a few days in the primeval forest and rely on hunting and gathering. It feels like they can't survive for a year. Look at De Ye's desert island. If it weren't for urgent help, he would really die on that island. Food, clothing, housing and ability can be taken care of. Diseases are purely luck. There is no mystery. It's too realistic and it's not easy to survive.

Don't write anything about superpowers or anything like that.

Why does it feel a bit perfunctory? Many plots are passed over in passing with almost no details. Even some stories can be omitted as much as possible. This is a survival novel, not a novel about cultivating immortality. Many plots cannot be skimmed over. Since arriving at the gathering point, the plot feels very weak. It lacks the caution and thrills of the past and even the coherence of the story has become worse. Keep up the good work, it's not easy to find a book you love to read.

Starting from the settlement, the entire rhythm, content, and center are different The name of your book is Survival I came to see you fight for survival To watch you fight with the sky, the earth, and the beasts Not to watch you fight in the palace, fight within, and then play intrigues Otherwise, you just took the name of your survival Otherwise, what are you trying to survive for? Survive in primitive clan society?

It's very well written and has been recommended repeatedly in the group. It's so strange that it's so deserted.

Damn you, you traveled through time! But there is no mysterious element at all! Can everyone feel a sense of involvement? You just arrange a proficiency panel for the protagonist! Using the three elements of spirit, energy and spirit, skills are sublimated into techniques, and techniques are summarized into professions, allowing him to transcend from scratch! According to the current pace, if it is not popular, there will definitely be no problem with the food and clothing of the niche! ! !

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The author is good, write well and have a beginning and an end. Just practice for more than 1 million, and you will definitely be better in the next article if you master the skills.

I have been wandering without a base.

At least write down the characters, place, and background of the story. For example, what is the world background for farming: feudal world, medieval world, modern times, outer space, primitive world, fairy tales, fantasy, etc. At least some background elements should be given. Just writing about fishing and hunting tribal farming is too general, and I don't even have the desire to click on it There is also a storyline: farming lord, or tribal hegemony, or individual development and survival. There is not a single story, and it is not attractive at all.

After reading books for so many years, I seldom speak. I am not sure whether the certificate is well written or not. But, I love watching it. So I would like to make a few suggestions: First, it is recommended to add a very professional but flawed character. For example one masters biochemistry, metallurgy or architecture. But such a character has a physical disability. Or paralysis. Now the team's configuration, survivability and combat effectiveness are already very strong. So it needs to be restricted. The second is now considered a safari. Then the game gradually shifted from hunting to farming or hunting. There is a limit to the pure safari population.

An old author who doesn't know where he comes from pretends to be a newcomer. This writing style is amazing.

Although I understand that the author is setting up the plot. But from the beginning I was very wary when I saw strangers, and now I don't try to test them when I meet them. Furthermore, if you are camping in the wild without keeping vigil, shouldn't you set up an early warning system, such as a bell?

Will it enter the sea? Will there be a big ship? The kind that can be upgraded

I still haven't figured out what I'm going to write in the back of this book, so I keep running around?

The author's writing is good, and it's very exciting to read.

Why do we have to cross the plateau and Gobi desert...

If you don't have any pictures, why don't you upload some AI pictures?

Brother, if you don't know how to write, just finish it early and start a new book.

Looks good, so easy