Let Us Remain Loyal to Humanity

No, buddy, your grades in the marginal alliance are not good, and a new account opens, and your buddy follows you, and then you have good grades in Gunfire, but you get sick and your grades drop, so you become a eunuch and change back to this account? Is your jumping back and forth worthy of those of us who are patiently waiting? 😡

The plot is good, but the main character looks like a shark.

Druid was a great success, and then he opened his own palace. To be honest, I have no confidence in you.

Why not write about Marvel anymore? I don't think I've seen any Marvel stories about magic other than the magic in Harry Potter. Also, could you write a book about the cane?

No, you said you'd come back to update your Mountain Eagle novel after it was on hiatus, then updated it for a few days, and then went on hiatus again to work on this one?

At least I'll write a fanfic to protect myself and then start working on my original work.

To be honest, chapters 79 and 80 had no titles, which made me very worried that they might be canceled.

Go write Marvel stories instead. You're not suited for original fiction; your fanfiction is much better. 😰 I still want to see your fanfiction.

The writing is good, and the premise is interesting, but the plot is too drawn out, prone to rambling and digressions, and updates are infrequent, making it difficult for readers to keep up.

If you cut it, just say so; don't ignore it.