I Write a Diary in a Strange World

After escaping, you still have to go to work even though you saw scales. Are you not alert at all? Shouldn't a normal person run for his life immediately? Let's not talk about how it will develop later. The most basic behavioral logic must be reasonable

Again, I saw big flaws in the first 2 chapters.

It is estimated that only old bookworms with special tastes will understand your writing style. The beginning of the article is confusing.

After reading it, some people didn't understand it. The protagonist ran away on his own, which means there must be something wrong. No one went to catch him. There are no other problems. Then, I don't know if it is a double protagonist or a single protagonist?

A book club group has been set up. You can come in to discuss the plot, make suggestions or ask for vests. The group number is: 53480373. I'll pass it when I see it. I'm not interested in naming names. If you want your vest to appear in the book, you can tell me and I will provide several character choices. If you don't understand something about the plot or think it's better, you can discuss it and I will adopt it in time. The outline has already been decided at the beginning of the book. If any book friends can guess the ending, I will change it. Writing a book for the first time, I should be gentle. If I don't have a strong heart, I might be too lazy to write a few sentences on a two- to three-million-word outline. I hope I can make infinite progress and share good stories with everyone.

I feel that the main plot is not clear, the plot is not sophisticated, and the sense of substitution is not enough, making it a bit difficult to read.

The writing at the beginning is a bit messy, but the subject matter is very attractive to me, but the character of the protagonist is a bit unlikable. I will give it a try first. Come on, author. Not many newcomers are willing to write suspense.

The writing is messy. Even 15-year-old readers can't understand it

Although my head is messed up when I look at it, it's still delicious. Come on