Exorcist Priest, Your Tentacles Are Exposed

People control ecstasy externally. This book feels like a comic that is updated quarterly. The appearances and settings of the characters are also very charming and attractive in a comic sense. Although the world view and plot are common elements that have been established in other works, it is easier to accept them as classics and templates. This is something the author has surprisingly good control over. The symbiosis between the red tentacles and the male protagonist is so cute. They are friendly units that act with instinct and inhuman minds. This is the huge cuteness of the parasitic humanoid! Cute! Point! I wish the author success in completing this book.

It can be said that the polishing of the plot and character design can be seen with great care, but unfortunately the control of the fun points and plot development is not good. At present, the overall plot is developing steadily in a somewhat depressing direction. As a result, the writing mode of using the protagonist's perspective to unfold the plot will not give people a particularly good reading experience for the time being. My suggestion is to try to determine the overall plot context and figure out what role the filler subplots should play in the overall plot. If a book wants to give readers a good reading experience, it must at least have some ups and downs in the plot, rather than arranging a depressing plot all at once, and deliberately creating the biggest explosive and exciting point. Of course, this is just a suggestion based on my own reading experience. It would be best for new authors to stick to their own ideas and then summarize after they have achieved results.

Edward Byrne, alchemist and bearer of the stigmata.

Thank you all book friends for your collection, reading, comments, recommendation votes, rewards and monthly votes. In the name of the seven archangels, I wish to express my most sincere gratitude. 😍😍😍

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Father Anderson, reminds me of the one from Hell Song.

Moran Anderson, the young priest of Sainte-Chapelle, the tentacle-parasitic exorcist, the breeder of the children of hell

Faz, the vain duke from hell

I feel like the plot is a bit depressing, and the protagonist's hard power doesn't increase much.

Evelyn Drake, half-blood, exorcist

Lucifer, the arrogant Duke from Hell

The classic misunderstanding is that the Hebrew word helel means morning star, which is not the name of an angel at all. Lucifer is the Latin transliteration of Jerome, lux (light) + ferre (bring), the thing that brings light. Even Jesus was called Lucifer The meaningful affix is ​​not fel but el, ~ God's, Hebrew, michael = mi (who) + cha (such) + el (god) = Michael - who is like God? -Godlike person, raphael=rafa (healing)+el (god's)=god's healing=healing angel, Israel=yisra (wrestling/fighting/ruling)+el (god)=a place to fight with gods/a place to rule for gods, Israel The term Lucifel is most likely brought by Japan, although they should not have this problem locally, because they fight hard Lucifer is a ルシフェルr and an l is not distinguished. It was passed from second hand to third hand to China, and it became a well-known saying when it was spread on the Internet. He was originally Lucifer before he fell into the sky Is it necessary to break down hell? Is it hel～el? The prefix is hell and the suffix is god, but hel is a Germanic root and Hebrew is not from the same period and language family. It is impossible to write "Microwave Suitable" on the bottom of porcelain in the Qing Dynasty.

To mediocre people, we are mysterious and unpredictable. Fallen. Decay. It's chilling. You cannot understand where we came from or why we are what we are... Until you realize that we have not fallen, but have ascended. "

The author is a novice, and the early pace of writing unsystematic may be a little slow. Currently, the outline of the first volume has been written, and the detailed outline is still being optimized and revised. The general direction is determined, and I strive to present you with an interesting and rich story of angels and demons with a bit of black humor. ✊ I hope that all friends who keep books can slide the content to the last page when updating. Reading is really the lifeblood of a new book! It would be better if you have extra monthly tickets 😭 Thank you for your support! I wish all my friends good health and all the best! 🤓

Generally speaking, it's pretty good, but some aspects of the ability system and plot are not very detailed. The author's current fast-paced writing and battles are very interesting, but the transition between some events, the portrayal of characters such as the God of Vanity, and St. Paul are still a little lacking. The battles between them and the protagonist are almost life-and-death battles. There is no sense of importance and crisis, and there is a sense of fragmentation.

Fantasy food, I hope the author can write a long one

We are not very educated people, so just write whatever you want. First of all, congratulations on the release. As long as it can be updated daily, I will continue to read it. It is always like this when a newcomer writes his first book. It is impossible to make a lot of money and then make money; but again, finishing the book is also an explanation to oneself, and it is done. Now I still hope to round out the rest of the story. Personally, I feel that since I became a servant of God, my interest in reading has not been so high. The main line and center are not clear and the writing is relatively "scattered". You can sort out the outline before continuing to write and strive for a smooth landing. Looking forward to the next new book.

Will there be a female protagonist? Single and more than nothing?

I hope the author will write about the entanglement between the Holy War Blood Tribe Royal Court and Demon Angels.

It's well-written, and it's a rare Western fantasy with a compact plot and reasonable development. It's worth a read.

Write quickly, and you will be rewarded if you write big.