Liver Experience Begins with American Fear

So far, the writing is okay, but the sense of justice is a bit strong, which doesn't quite fit the current starting point atmosphere. The two of them don't have any clear goals and are a bit happy-go-lucky. The same goes for liver skills and skill-finding. It feels like they don't have a high priority in the protagonist's heart.

I'm very curious about how the author plans to write about ghosts and humans. In this series, both the protagonist and the ghost are very strong. He has a chainsaw in one hand and a short troll in the other. I am the hero of the demon world. Remember 😁. Moreover, each part of the old trilogy is quite fragmented, not to mention the TV series and the new version of the reboot. However, in the new version of the reboot, Ash is gone, so it's okay not to write. By the way, Ash also has comics and is running in the Marvel Zombie Universe.

I feel like the protagonist is too righteous and there is no benefit at all from being involved in various supernatural events! On the contrary, there are all kinds of disadvantages. After a narrow escape, what you will face is not promotion, salary increase, various honors and wealth, but first proving that you are acting in legal self-defense and facing various investigations! The protagonist is a time traveler and an Asian! Do you have feelings for this world? The protagonist doesn't seem to be uncomfortable at all. As soon as he comes over, he directly accepts and immediately throws himself into various thankless events. If there is no system to get benefits, the protagonist will die! Moreover, the protagonist has no purpose and has been led by the cult. After dealing with it for a long time, it is just a small experiment of the cult! What makes me most unhappy is that none of the upper-level law enforcement forces can handle supernatural beings. Currently, the only one who can handle supernatural beings is the protagonist, but the protagonist is in trouble even if he wants to get some weapon support! With all his hands tied, why does the protagonist continue to do things without fear of death?

There is no obvious goal. How to obtain skills and how to improve them are not shown. I am completely pushed around. It's weird.

It's normal to have a small number of people, and it can't catch readers' hobbies. This book belongs to a niche, so you have to add some Hollywood beauties and the like to attract readers. There is also such a golden finger protagonist that you have to actively collect and try various mysterious powers, classics and the like. After all, of course you like gods when you read beauty horror. There are a lot of people on the secret side, so don't sharpen your skills in battle. If you don't encounter a mystery, it's like you don't have a golden finger. The protagonist is too single and has bad reviews. Also, the protagonist is written as American, so don't be too kind and too lawful. What is the goal of the protagonist? The theme is unclear. Will the protagonist really benefit the United States when he travels through time?

I'm a bit nervous. I have a strong sense of justice but I'm not a "Holy Mother". There are a lot of books about the starting point and no bottom line. Is it hyw to come here to vent my anger? The writing is okay, but the combat power is a bit problematic, but this is an American horror, so it's very reasonable😋

This book should be called Supernatural Police. It was submitted to the wrong category. It should have been submitted to American Police.

How should I put it? To be honest, overall it is pretty good. Even if I am picky, I think this book is at the level of food. However, there are some problems that limit the development of the book. The protagonist's skill extraction mechanism is very confusing. In addition, it actually gave me an awkward feeling. Maybe I am too sensitive and have a bit too fragile national pride, but the book did give me a feeling: "The passionate young people of Chinese descent shed their blood for the interests of American imperialism and the common people of American imperialism..." I don't know how other people feel, but I feel this awkward anyway.

Thanks to Shennong

The biggest problem for me is that the protagonist's actions have no clear purpose, as if he just walks and fights monsters all the way. Although the villain of the cult has been buried, there has been too little interaction with the protagonist so far to give readers like me a sense of expectation: "This cult is so bad, I want to see the protagonist kill them."

There should be some erotic elements added. There are many beauties. Watching homophobia is because you like horror movies, and the heroine is good-looking. The hero saves the beauty and accepts the heroine of the horror movie.

The writing is too messy. It starts with several horror movies mixed together, with no sense of hierarchy at all.

👍Is there a female protagonist?

The main character's plug-in is not big at all, and it's uncomfortable to watch.

Alien monsters must be liked. If you write about kicking me, put it here 👀

It doesn't look good, the main character is not very likable

It's quite interesting, and the protagonist's character is quite decisive, which is good for this kind of book. I would like to give you a small suggestion. You can add some rest time between events (such as Miami and Crystal Lake) to allow the protagonist to upgrade and save weapons. Otherwise, it will appear to be rushed. In the future, when the protagonist becomes stronger, he can take the initiative to solve the incident, so as to avoid being bored by the incident.

America's real beauty, so beautiful

I feel that the author did not check the information and relied on Internet jokes (which are superficial and tasteless) to write the novel, and the words are very dramatic. I feel that it is not good to substitute them. From time to time, the idioms of foreigners on the roadside are used to make it more interesting.

No goals, no motivation, just relying on encounters

It's very well written. It's best to include Superman. There are many monsters in Superman, as well as the resurrection of the Scarecrow, the Evil Spirit Demon, and the Ghost Pirate Ship.

It looks cool, I'll support it with a monthly pass

The main character's character is not strong enough. I remember there is one in the American comics that can cause damage by rebounding. For example, if you eat other people's clothes or things on their clothes, you can enter other people's world and do whatever you want It can also cause damage and rebound.

The evil power depends on who uses it. The evil power is generally very powerful and has side effects. The protagonist can withstand the temptation

America shows scarier than horror movies

There are three levels of werewolves in it, and it also comes with contact lenses. It is also a campus with many monsters. It feels very suitable for American horror.

The New Year is over, why haven't you written yet?