A Ninja in the World of Detective Conan

At first, I seemed to enjoy it, sweet love + life development, and kept subscribing. Suddenly, a protagonist came to me to marry Maori, and he wanted to change his surname to Maori, and call him Maori Longyi. Oh my God, are you a female author? As a man, to me, this is equivalent to my girlfriend being pregnant with Huang Mao's child. I say that I will support him and change my surname to the child's surname. It's not like the protagonist is incompetent, so why does he want to get married and change his surname? You can quibble and say that the child Maoli will conceive later is the male protagonist's and not the yellow one's. The situation is different. But for a man like me, this is as disgusting as changing your surname to Huang Mao🤢, and you took the initiative to ask for a marriage to change your surname.

It looks like it was invaded by a female channel that couldn't keep up.

It's good. Originally, it seemed unreliable for the protagonist to take down Lan Xin. It's not that Lan Xin can't be taken down, but that most of the plots that take this step are a bit forced by deus ex machina. The protagonist's operation is very good, taking the route of Kogoro and Fei Yingli, and finally letting Xiaolan let go willingly. It's just that Shinichi's handling was a little too forceful. Yukiko may indeed have the intention of riding a donkey to find a horse, but the things like the division of property in divorce are too much. The original work can at least show that these characters still have a background of truth, goodness and beauty, and they don't really take money too seriously. Don't say what it would be like if it were reality. If it were reality, all the inexplicable criminal psychology and motivations in Little Gotham would not exist. Since the setting of the original work is established, it would be better to give priority to the original work rather than making drastic changes. Moreover, Xinyi's operation after the breakup was also very confusing. He knew where he lost and admitted that he couldn't do it in this regard. But his first reaction was not to find a way to fight for the relationship that occupied most of Xinyi's life, but to find a better one and make Xiaolan regret it. There is no thought of trying to save it, this is completely inconsistent with Shinichi's character Now the protagonist's character is established, capable, intelligent, proficient in human nature and social rules, and accepts the dark side of human nature. It is very unconventional among the Ke Xue fans. The current main line Mao Lilan's strategy has been completed, and I am looking forward to the new story. Moreover, Xiaolan has confirmed her relationship with the protagonist. Even if Shinichi becomes smaller, the protagonist cannot let him stay at Mouri's house. So how will the storyline of the entire world be advanced? Looking forward to the author's performance

Author, you are so excited that you have written an explanatory text. When persuading people, do you have to follow the theory of three wins and three losses? Talk about my feelings after reading this book, The first ten chapters: The author writes well and analyzes it well. Although it is a bit complicated, except for why he likes Xiaolan, which is not explained clearly, everything else is clearly written. Chapter 10-25: Why are there so many conversations in this trench? Ah? Is this a memory piece? But why did it end without explaining clearly why he likes Xiaolan? So what exactly are you doing? Chapter 26-40: Nearly 30 chapters have been written, and suddenly there is a situation where Xiaolan has to choose one of the two in advance due to a public opinion crisis to speed up the plot, but it is still a crazy dialogue. I haven't read it yet, but I don't know what this book will be like as I write it down. It would be normal to streamline the content of the first forty chapters to about 20 chapters. There is also the character design of the protagonist, explaining the background of the ordinary people in the first life, the elite in the second life, the leader of the Demon Slayer Squad in the third life, and the super successful person behind Conan in the fourth life (future vision + solipsism) What should such a protagonist look like? I think it is at least: absolute confidence and calmness (corresponding to the future vision of the Conan world + solipsism), absolute planning and taking action (corresponding to the basic life, cautious words and deeds) and fatherly language art (corresponding to the leader of the Demon Slayer Squad) Look at what the protagonist has shown now, he has the ability to plan and act, and he has confidence, but he lacks that sense of calmness and fatherly language art, don't use your expository language. The above is my current viewing experience of this book.

Brothers, the single heroine can retreat. I will retreat too. I need to make corrections.

Where is the ninja? It's all about love.

It's quite good. Although snatching Xiaolan is a bit uncomfortable for me as a New Lan party. But the current 50 chapters can be said to be a good book. But Xiaolan is so good, why not give her a boyfriend who dotes on Xiaolan? It's well written.

First, look at the competition. This entry point is refreshing for me. I have watched Conan fandoms like Snake Spirit Disease, Swallow Twin Eagles, Shikigami Youkai, Consortium Young Master, Female Wear and Gin H. No matter it is red square or black square, this is the first time I see the protagonist fighting for love with a sword, and the minotaur is ecstatic. Is it called a tauren to snatch the heroine? That's why beauty is only worthy of the strong. Second, look at ninjutsu. The author has not started writing about this yet, but you can look forward to it. If the behind-the-scenes writing is good, fans of both Naruto and Conan will be able to win over. I hope that the martial arts will be used as a supplement to the drama, and there will be no plot of fighting for world supremacy. Third, look at the slap in the face. I'm tired of punching the villain in the face, now it's time to punch the original protagonist in the face. There is a saying about Feng Shui designation in Xiaozhi. The animation protagonist is more or less faulty. In a royal plot, it may not be too faulty, but in reality, it deviates somewhat from the core values. Welcome to add the rest in the comment area!

It's not licking in the ordinary sense, it's too much "respect" for the female character. It's not a harem story. I suspect it may be a witch in disguise. The tribunal will keep an eye on it 🤫

At the beginning, I thought I was going to write my own story. What the hell have I been writing these past few days? Isn't it embarrassing to rely on someone else's Conan case to show off and pretend to reason on my own?