An Anything Door from the Start

It's not good. There are so many two-dimensional worlds and the plug-ins are so good. Just stare at this Hokage and play Tsunade? Goddess of Heaven, Winged Bud Goddess, Violet, there are so many women in the world, there are always beautiful ones, all of them are obedient, and can help the protagonist, but it's really not possible, go to Bilan, etc. You can build it yourself, you are the second dimension gate, the second dimension is so big, open your eyes, what's the use of staring at this Hokage

So far, it's okay. YY Shuangwen is okay, mainly as long as it has basic logic and can be justified. If it's just a self-orgasm that's mindless and illogical, it feels like a disaster. Keep it in mind

The latest chapter as of Chapter 81 Existing the following ingredients Shuangwen; The theory of the Naruto world from the author's perspective; The author will explain the things in the original work based on the principles from his own perspective

To be honest, there is no need to focus on Naruto in the comprehensive manga. It has been written badly in the early stage, and in some anime with extraordinary powers, Naruto is a good floor tile, and the upper limit is too low. Might as well write something else, such as the Japanese manga Devil High School, Dragon Ball, Holy Grail, Saint Seiya, Hakoba and his ilk, Chinese manga One Person, Demon Fox Matchmaker, Qin Shi Mingyue, Painting Rivers and Lakes, Corpse Brother... Etc. These anime are classic enough, the world view is big enough, the time span is long enough, the power system is high enough, bring water... Bah, it is enough to write the plot. Even if you only write twenty or thirty chapters for one anime, you can write thousands of chapters!

What is this novel about? I can't understand what the protagonist wants to do. There is no purpose at all. What is the meaning of writing the apocalypse of the academy? Why do you want to be Tsunade's teacher? I feel that the plot is confusing. The author wrote whatever he thought of. I felt very uncomfortable reading it.

The writing is a bit bland. I got 10,000 individual items in just ten chapters of attributes, but I went to be Tsunade's apprentice. His strength and mentality are not in line with the series.

There are a lot of unreasonable cheats in the second dimension. I don't understand why they are wasted in Naruto. Eternal life, magic source, force value, etc., Naruto has them all but they are not the best choice. Also, there are really a lot of people who write Naruto books, and the male protagonists also have some double standards, are wise, and their character is not well established. I can only say that it is watchable but not particularly beautiful. I hope I can write better in the future, after all, this kind of subject matter is quite rare these days.

Chapter 283 Why is it stated that Ikaruga married someone else and got someone else pregnant twice? ? Isn't she the woman that the protagonist earned, strengthened, and took her through time travel to join the protagonist's Sword Princess Pirates (Grand Harem)? Why send a girl? If you can't get a close and intimate female partner, then you can give it to someone else, right? So poisonous!

What's there to write about in Sea of ​​Death The God of Death is based on bloodline theory, and the protagonist relies on the power of bloodline to survive every day. Naruto is about blood. Without good blood, he will be mediocre all his life and will never be able to be among the strong. Although the protagonist has good blood, he is deeply cursed by fate. Pirates are also based on blood. Although the Devil Fruit can change one's destiny, without a good blood, he is still a mediocre fish.

You are an Infinite stream that travels at will. Those who cannot defeat pirates can travel to other stronger worlds to learn and strengthen. You marry women, make marriages, and suppress various forces in pirates. What's the use of it? Improving your strength after working for a long time might not be as good as eating a few meals at a gourmet restaurant.