The Football God Starts with Passive Skills

In the author's writing, the protagonist is nothing but hot-blooded enthusiasm. There's no tactical positioning from the coach, no on-field command, and no adaptability from the protagonist. Both the protagonist and supporting characters are stereotypical. I even suspect the author doesn't know how to play football at all and has zero understanding of football tactics!

Are you desperate for money? Charging for 30 chapters at this level? Who gave you the audacity? 😅

First, there are only twelve in total. They keep emphasizing that your physical condition is not good enough. If you save up your physical talent, you won't be able to draw it? The others are all at the regional or national level. Secondly, being able to study abroad is already the best thing. How can someone with so much talent end up being treated like a useless person?

I admire the author's writing skills; from its initial naivety to its current immaturity, the improvement is negligible.

I suggest the author start writing from 1998. The golden age of football is from 1998 to 2016; the stars after that period have all fallen short due to excessive marketing and a mismatch between talent and ability. The author's current protagonist is only missing a midfielder with a Ruud Gullit-esque style; they're all forwards.

Name: Wang Shuo Nationality: China Age: 22 (born in 1990) Location: CF/ST/CAM Realm: Early stage of Legendary Realm (Ten domains + one halo, successfully entered the Legendary Realm) (Cultivators are prohibited from participating in mortal activities) Career trajectory: Mainz --- Borussia Dortmund (€20 million) --- Arsenal (€60 million) --- Real Madrid (€200 million)

Why do sports novel authors burden the protagonist with so much—a football academy, rural parents, aunts and cousins, and later the national team? Do you have to be a literary youth to enjoy a sports novel with a satisfying plot? And why does the protagonist only encounter good people? He always performs exceptionally well but never seeks personal gain. Should the author change the title to "The Saint of Chinese Football"?

How many of these famous models and hostesses have good private lives? Author, do you really like these kinds of models and hostesses that much?

Writing a wish-fulfillment novel and still getting all sentimental? If you're so idealistic, why write a wish-fulfillment novel? Just write what you want to write, like leading the Chinese national football team to victory in the World Cup and making the protagonist lose dozens of matches. You want to make money off your readers, and you also want your literary youth to act crazy. You want everything, but your face is too big to be true.

The writing style is problematic. It constantly depicts how hard the protagonist works and how he helps Klopp turn the tide, over and over again. It's become unbearable to read; it's too repetitive. It should focus more on the players' daily lives and interactions. Constantly writing about matches and comebacks is too formulaic.