The Peerless Huo Yuhao: Starting from Leaving Shrek

I ordered it all, but I wanted to give up after reading it. The reasons are as follows: 1. Typos and typos After Chapter 187, there are more typos than usual. The names are wrong, the personal pronouns are wrong, and even the names of skills that appear in the chapters are wrong 🥵 Let's just say that it is okay for the author to make money by writing books, but don't treat us like cash machines and write these to fool people. Even if I don't care about your logical structure, don't have so many typos 😰 I wanted to read some novels to relax, but when I saw so many typos, although it didn't affect the contextual logic, it was still uncomfortable to read 2. The logic is too jumpy To be honest, the appearance of the Ice God Sword Wuhun is too unbelievable. It is a second creation by a fan. I understand that the author wants to add a new plug-in for Huo But don't create it out of thin air. In that chapter, you add "When the heaven and earth changed, a sword flew and merged into Huo Yuhao." Then Yi Lao or some other opportunity explained that it would be nice to make this sword a martial spirit. If you have to make something out of nothing, how can the second martial spirit constructed by Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor and Tianmeng be It can form a sword, even if you say it is the fragment of the artifact left when the Ice God fell 😥 I don't want to type for the moment, so let's leave it like this. I hope the author can face up to his writing attitude and write a good ending for himself, the readers, and the characters

Doesn't the Ice Emperor like the Snow Emperor? Be with Tianmeng! It's not Tangshan's help! Qiankun asks for love?

Huo Yuhao's original work first moved him: he saw the appearance of the Wuhun Fusion Technique Butterfly God, or rather the appearance of Wang Dong'er when he grew up. The second love interest in Huo Yuhao's original work: the pleasure in the lake with Ma Xiaotao, lingering in Ma Xiaotao's hot body. The third temptation in Huo Yuhao's original work: having a heart-to-heart relationship with an orange and seeing the charm of its ripeness. The fourth time in Huo Yuhao's original work: I was moved by Wang Qiuer's passionate love. Result: Before the fourth temptation, Wang Donger took the initiative to expose her identity as a woman, confessed her love at Poseidon Lake and won by her appearance. At that time, Huo Yuhao thought this person was Wang Donger's sister. If Wang Qiuer had appeared half a month earlier, Wang Donger would have lost and died in the end. Tang Wutong was resurrected, and then his consciousness merged into a god and returned to the divine world. But Ma Xiaotao took the initiative to recognize her sister and became single all her life. In order to save the protagonist, Orange completely accepted becoming the empress. After stealing sperm and getting pregnant, she was threatened by Tang San (although he actually couldn't do anything). The war stopped and the protagonist chased Tang Wutong to the God Realm. Looking at it this way, Huo Yuhao is really outrageous. He just wants to become a god and then fight Di Tian.

I don't think Huo is miserable, it's just a choice he made. He and Tang San are essentially the same person, so this pair of sons-in-law must be a match made in heaven. After all, Huo learned to help Beibei cheat as soon as he joined Shrek. Except for not saying Tang San's famous saying "You already have a way to die", it can be said to be a replica of Tang San. Tang San was very kind to Huo Ke. He not only resurrected Huo Ke's mother but also married his daughter. Isn't it normal for Huo to be Tang San's loyal dog? Moreover, Huo's divine position may not be free from Tang San's calculations. Tang San disagreed. If Huo could become a god, he would have died long ago. Huo does not deserve sympathy, let alone your sympathy. Huo Ben is a hypocrite similar to Tang San. Tang San married his daughter and helped Huo resurrect his mother. He also helped him become a god. If Huo was not loyal to Tang San, what was Tang San loyal to? Tang San didn't forcefully control Huo, it was his own choice. If I were Tang San, I would have made Huo a puppet or clone, let alone using his daughter to make a nest.

I decide what things can be configured based on their current or future needs Huo Yuhao: Two God Kings, the options are biased toward Creation, Creation, and Ice (there are not many more cool names, so let's just use them, just come up with a concept and change them in the future) Yilao: God King or God King plus one or two God Kings, the options are God of the Undead, God of Death, and Black The God of Darkness, the God of Light, the God of Wisdom, and the God of Hades (for darkness and light, it is set to be the two gods King Wisdom, God of Hades, and God of Death. Wisdom may not mean much. I guess it is just an idea. It is just based on what the old man did in his previous life and the real name he left behind in this life) The above are the main characters The following are the secondary ones Tian Meng: God of Dreams, God of Spiritual Realm, God of Luck (essentially, the establishment of the direct line in the future also needs enough helpers, but because of his own personality, he can only find a way to give him a powerful, but more fishy job) Ice Emperor: It's a pity for you. The elements conflict with Huo Yuhao. I haven't thought of any suitable ones for the time being. Scorpion God, you can tell he is a second-level god. It doesn't fit in with the early work with Huo Yuhao. I forgot to leave the author a chance to think about the name of the god (meaning that he couldn't cut it and finished it smoothly) Snow Emperor: Snow God is essentially the ultimate snow, and the name does not conflict (his personal personality can also be used as a reliable helper) The heroine and other things are not considered for the time being. The author has just written dozens of pictures, and he still doesn't know what will happen in the future. Who is there? Who should be there? It's hard to say. I said there are oranges. If the author has a plot conflict later and he has to go down, what can he do? It's better to be like Meng Hongchen. As for Shrek's side, I really don't want to remember it. It's all a mess. Maybe it's a mess. Remember, you can be surnamed Emperor, you can be surnamed Silver, you can be surnamed Jin! But Only the surname cannot be Wang

In fact, Wang Dong in the original work is definitely not Huo Yuhao's Bai Yueguang or Little Sun, but he is more human than Tang Wutong. I made those few demands during the first meeting and beat them down if they didn't comply. It was obvious bullying. The fight caused Huo Yuhao to be late and was punished by Zhou. Huo Yuhao won, but Huo Yuhao still did the job alone. When he was still dressing up as a man, he secretly excluded girls who were close to Huo Yuhao. What position do you have as a man to prevent Huo Yuhao from getting close to other women? Knowing Huo Yuhao's past, he still made fun of Huo Yuhao's Oedipalism and the suffering of others.

If I just want to write something different from the original work, I might as well choose Ice and Snow Girl as the martial spirit. I don't see anything that is more special than the original work. You have a soul master who rubs his weapons with his hands and uses the entire sword as a martial spirit. The amplification to the body is not as powerful as the beast spirit, and the spirit skills must be designed to be related to the sword, otherwise it will be inexplicable. The only advantage of this weapon spirit is that when the male protagonist becomes a god in the future, he will not have to worry about not having a good weapon. If I were to write it, my first choice would be the Ice Dragon King's soul from the Two Eyes of Ice and Fire, which would be attached to the second martial soul to turn it into an Ice Dragon King. The second choice is Ice Snow Girl and Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion.

The ice sword spirit can directly poison people to death

If there are too many typos, the sentences are not fluent, and you don't even review your work twice, you won't get any results.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, Huo Yuhao, who had 0 harem elements and had memories of his previous life, did not want to help his former lover Wang Dong and Wang Qiu get rid of Tang San's plan, so he chose a shocking escape. The messy paragraphs and typos are minor problems. Every time, Huo Yuhao's psychological activities are written down into a long and smelly anecdote. Before making a decision, he always struggles with his heart. He always thinks deeply between his left and right brains. In the end, he comes to an evasive conclusion. It cost me 6 yuan in vain.

Shui, his writing is average, he likes to play awkward games

Huo Yuhao even enjoyed being a dog for Buddha. Is it necessary for you, loyal ministers and filial sons, to fight against his injustice? People are the gods of emotions. More than just feeling emotions. He also possesses god-king level spiritual power. If he doesn't want to. Who can control him. Buddha, let alone training and tying the dog on a leash. It would be useless to marry off Xiao Wu. They also traveled through Huo Yuhao one by one to resist Buddha. It's like a dog taking advantage of a mouse. And Huo Yuhao himself is not a good person. Just look at Yi Lao and Beibei. Yi Lao and Mu En gave him their inheritance. He was also given asylum. He backhandedly arranged for Beibei to use the Ten Thousand Years Heavenly Dragon Horse as his seventh spirit ring. Not to mention how top-notch the bloodline is. It's not like there aren't real dragons that are over 50,000 years old. Yalong. The seventh ring of this configuration. Really pulls the crotch. So does Eli A dream. Don't say that the kindness of a drop of water should be repaid by a spring of water. He can't even repay his kindness.

It's not even a typo, it's a typo. Many times, many words are wrong, which makes me laugh when I read them

Currently, as Huo Yuhao knows that the future has probably arrived after the sun and the moon, what he should do next is to participate in the competition according to tradition, and then hook up with the Noumenon Sect, and then carry out some plots of reversal, but to be honest, I really don't recommend writing it like this. First of all, in this aspect, in 203, 22 years ago, there were already n kinds of writing methods. At present, the one I have read is the one with thousands of chapters, which can basically write everything. The story line of Dou Er is a main line, with not many branches, and that is all that can be written. There are too many changes in the middle of level 70. That is to say, according to this timeline, there is no five-soul fusion with Wang Dong yet. Otherwise, Tang San's spiritual consciousness will enter and the plot will be useless My personal suggestion is to explain these things to Yi Lao. In Huo Yuhao's version, he is the original product and at most he knows something. If there is anything, confess it to Yi Lao immediately and tell him the future plot. I even let him read it directly. The same is true for Tianmeng. Apparently, there are two living beings living outside. One is smaller, but it already has a decent shape, which is the life carving knife, and the other is the golden hat. His excuse is relatively big. He is a 200,000-year-old luck soul beast. When he has three to five soul rings, he can build a first-hand tower. Why should he choose among these? The most important problem is that this copy is easier to use, and Tianmeng's origin can give him a year, which means that he is not given the plot of Dou San. Otherwise, if he knows that there is such a thing as Dou Kai, he should be able to figure it out. Of course, unless he demolishes a few more for Yi Lao, otherwise, Yi Lao will be exhausted. I have seen a book on my bookshelf with more than 200 chapters, and it should be close to 300 chapters now. That book was very enjoyable to write. Huo Yuhao is developing the book written by Du Kai, but it's a pity that the protagonist doesn't know about it. After all, it is an original product, and it is also a rare original product. For the demi-plane, you definitely need faith and origin. My idea for these things is to bring the underworld from the underworld, and then the Dragon Priest and Douluo The plane was taken away by force. At this time, there was a turbulence of time and space, something went wrong, and it became a private land. After all, Huo Yuhao should be regarded as the first heir of the direct line. As for reclaiming the house in the forest, if it can keep them away from the Dragon God's ring, how much is the best? I need some help. It's a pity that the Silver Dragon King, who inherited the astonishing wisdom, completely lost his godhead. Speaking of this, I remembered that I would inherit the positions of destruction and life in the future, and then I thought that the reason why destruction of life wanted to have children so much was because I saw They have children and they can't get them. Think about it, how many years has Tang San been here? Before the Golden Dragon King was released, the second one was almost coming out. This rabbit is capable of giving birth. Back to the main topic, if I can take all these things away in the future, Yuan Yu, but I haven't seen it. I have never watched the stuff behind Dou San and Dou Four, let alone Dou Wu. The requirements at the beginning of the return are to know where the knife is before the game starts, to cover oneself, and to keep it before he goes to the auction. He has a simulation to change it for himself. Appearance is not a problem. Besides, Huo Yuhao, who has the original martial soul and the ultimate martial spirit, is guaranteed to be able to reach 98 and 99. The opponent is shameless and grabs it. Unless the integrated sun and moon of the original body are standing together, it is impossible. But the sun and moon are not good things. Many people use him as an example of Japan. , Actually this is not quite right, I can't say yet, bring the gold of living creatures, this future will also be used to make weapons, let the 1st floor recover well first, after the recovery, the plot must be stabilized before telling him, otherwise, I am afraid that the already weak one will be completely destroyed, and then I can't say anything It sounds good. You are the author before the competition. Please read this paragraph of mine. You should give Huo Yuhao some ten thousand years level in the suburbs of Beijing. One of the two martial souls is the ultimate, and the other is basically the one that determines the future successor. Although it is not enough, Ningde will go and get it for him personally, but it has to be collected by him in the market. Come here and improve it. The number of years for the third or fourth soul ring to be absorbed. I forgot what level the protagonist is now. If you can't understand the wrong level, just push it back to level ten. After all, I have been chasing a lot recently. Jin came over, and then revealed the plot to Yi Lao, trying to find a way to let Yi Lao keep two. If the other side shamelessly throws them over, he can't prevent it. Souls and other things can be pushed back. Whether it is the first soul ring or the second soul ring, there is no shortage of souls. The real lack of souls will be when they fall out in the future. It comes in handy when you need help. It's hard to say whether Wang Dong will stay or not, but the Tang San in him must be taken away. Otherwise, if someone comes over, of course this is all imaginary. If the author doesn't want to write it, it's useless Oh, with Yi Lao After revealing the plot, I really don't want the protagonist to participate in this thing. At most, the audience will have to cover their faces. The ice storm technique is not necessary for the protagonist, but Meng Hongchen can use Meng Hongchen as an excuse to accept it instead of going to the Sun and Moon Royal Palace in person. Money, but because it is the original Huo Yuhao, he may not have the thought to do it. If he wants to match the original work, such as fairy grass, and the Wannian Xuanzai Ice Bed, the one from the Haotian Sect must not go. Yi Lao is not there, but he knows the plot and has gone through it completely. You should go and get it from Longmen, use the ice yourself, and use the remaining part of the ten thousand-year ice water. Whether it is to help the Far North to create the next soul beast master, you must not let Jibei's luck be scattered. If it is scattered, many things will be easily targeted in the future. In places with strong luck, I think If you take action, you must use more calculations or pure power. If pure power will not be used in a short time, then you must consider the soul bone. The turtle's soul bone can be used as an external soul bone defense system to protect the chest or near the heart. After watching the plot of Dou Er, he should You should know that the more tragic the death, the higher the explosion rate. The opposite is Huo Yuhao, so he will definitely find a way to invest. After all, there are not many plots in his original work, and his character can be modified casually The above are some small questions that I have thought about in a short period of time. I hope you can take a look at them.

I accidentally came across the tweet on Douyin, and I looked at it with the mentality of giving it a try. Generally speaking, it feels good. Except for the author's writing style, which is a bit awkward and rough in some places, it is generally passable. After all, the important thing about online articles is not the writing style, but the ability to tell stories. Of course, it will be better if the author can improve the narrative technique. Secondly, judging from the content of this book, it is relatively novel among Dou Er's fans. It is not someone else's soul traveling, nor is it Huo Yuhao's rebirth in the future. It can be seen as the will of the world helping Huo Yuhao deduce the future. It is also reasonable and reasonable. It has captured the craze of the rebirth stream without completely falling into the cliché. Based on the current plot, there are no obvious OOC characters, and the plot connection is also reasonable. I hope the author can handle the direction of the plot in the next plot, especially the ending of Wang Dong. Both Wang Dong (son) and Wang Qiu'er are flesh and blood, but what kind of roadside is Tang Wutong? I hope the author can give Wang Donger and Wang Qiuer a good ending. {"NickName":"Book Friends 20240707181711731","UserId":450321494}

I admit that I have a preference for Huo Yuhao, because I only focused on his early part. His teenage part is a tragic and determined cute boy. Whatever happens later, I can attribute it to the environment.

You say that Wang Dong is Xiao Qi whose memory has been sealed, but the problem is🍬The Buddha has decreed that neither Dong'er nor Qiu'er is Xiao Qi The real Xiao Qi has long been torn into several pieces by her father, and Wang Dong's death is just one big piece It's also outrageous to say that🍬🐶 , both Wang Dong and Rui Shou are very lovable, and the result is that Tang Wutong, a hateful stitching monster is comparable to combining two SSRs into one N card, and this N card has only one function, and that is to attack Huote

I didn't want to read it when I saw Chapter 11. First, Yuhao accepted the infusion of his future memories. In this case, the only option is "rebirth and return". As a result, you became Xiao Yuhao and saw the future? The confession game has been opened, so why are you pretending to be stupid? Secondly, Yuhao immediately pulled Yi Lao out without any convincing and without shaking the Snow Emperor. Besides, how could Yi Lao get out at this stage? During the final fusion of the second spirit, the Snow Emperor transformed and interrupted the progress, and was still connected to Snow Lotus. If such a big matter is not resolved in advance, what will happen if it is waiting to explode? In the original novel, Tian Meng made countless preparations and other possible conjectures for this matter, but would he forget a snow lotus at the last moment? And the second martial spirit is even more stupid. You can fuse an ice elemental elf, a scorpion, and a snow lotus into a sword? There are so many options to choose from, so you have to choose the stupidest one. If the original work is nonsense, do you want to follow the nonsense? And it goes one step further, an Ice God Sword can actually be used back ten years ago.

You can learn from the soul skills designed for the Ice Divine Sword.

I really don't understand why Huo Yuhao likes Orange in this book. After reading the plot, I feel so sweet to Orange for no reason. Whether it is Qiu'er or Dong'er, they are impeccable towards Yuhao and can give life to them, but they are obsessed with Orange. They don't even have any emotional basis and just want to be with Orange. I have no problem with anything else. Author, if you like oranges, then you have to provide plot and shaping. You are so direct. The protagonist likes oranges after reading the plot. I really don't understand.

He's still a sword martial soul with no real skills at all... It's a bit embarrassing

The writing is quite good. If the male protagonist were not Huo Yuhao, the results would probably be even better. Instead of time traveling as him and rewriting his destiny, it would be better to time travel as someone else and weigh him down for the rest of his life.

There is another eunuch book, and there are not many people who can really write Douluo 2 fan fiction that can finish it.

The second-coin author, Beast Martial Spirit, tell me how he mutated the weapon Martial Spirit, and why he keeps ruining his character. I'm too lazy to complain that the time of Snow Emperor's transformation at the beginning was wrong. Ok, it doesn't matter here. How did you know that someone was plotting against you before transforming? OK, just treat it as a premonition, but without a third perspective, she guessed that God was plotting against her again? ? ? 666 Really plotted against you. You don't even know how you died. It can also make you suspect that Huo Yuhao wants revenge. But after learning about the memory, how could he still be calculating this and that? He wants revenge, but should he value friendship more? Where has the character collapsed? If he had read the memories, he should have known that Brother Xuedi Bingdi and Tianmeng would all be his friends, family, and partners in the future. How could he still scheme like this? What's more, he actually wants the Snow Emperor and Ice Emperor to become his second martial spirit. Then after just saying a few words, these two emperors believed it. The most ridiculous thing is that what the hell is a sword when you pop up? How did the two ice and snow emperors fuse into a sword? If you don't understand the character, just reread it, okay?

Summoning Shennong, how about this book?

There are too many typos in your latest chapter, right?

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