Douluo: Huo Yuhao Double Penetrates the Peerless Dragon King

It's been weird since Na'er, and in the Valley of Qiankun Asking Love, she even stopped acting. The writing is more and more like the writing of an old thing, and there is no writing treatment of the old thing. It is different from other Shuangwen novels. The original work was written to resolve the difficulties, and the solution given by the author is divine magic (the protagonist cannot stop the sacrifice of the auspicious beast in the Valley of Qiankun Asking Love, and the method given by the author is to ask the King of Destruction to reverse the sacrifice of the auspicious beast. When the author wrote the sacrifice You also know that readers can't stand it, so you have to emphasize the reversal. What do you mean by the sadistic plot? How many of the ten Douer fans dare to write this kind of plot? Even if they want to write the plot of Qingqing Valley, the male and female protagonists work together to make it easy. As part of the fun, the male protagonist in your story has to give up half a cent to compete with the female protagonist, and then the male protagonist is forcibly suppressed. So the author wants to cosplay him and kill him three times, so as to show the author's supreme power over the characters in his novel. Why don't you just write that Huo Yuhao deceives Gu Yue back to ten thousand years ago to supply Tang San and continue to be a dog? In this way, you will understand the pleasure of freely controlling the characters in your novel, and you will be in the same camp. In addition to causing dissatisfaction among the readers by forcing the auspicious beasts to be sacrificed, you also let the readers see that the male protagonist is incompetent. In order to strive to destroy the God King and save people, and then feel that the male protagonist is weak.), I only read the first few hundred chapters, which I would call a readable fanfic, and there are a lot of poisons around chapter 400. I guarantee that the plot-related content mentioned in this book review is definitely not made up. There must be a considerable number of people who have their own opinions on this book after reading my book review, and are not bothered to click on this book. This is enough, and this is also the role of Shen Nong. (PS: I came from Penguin to post specifically on the main site. Such a long hand-written post is by no means a deliberate smear campaign, but my own thoughts after reading it in full. It only serves as a reminder. There is no reading time on the main site)

One thing to say is that the set of double labels of 78 and 79 is disgusting to me. I have been talking about how Shrek is so unreasonable and what-so-ever. First, I talked about the Shrek assessment in the Dou San timeline and caused trouble, and then Dou Er's Fan Yu went to your soul guidance shop to threaten you. Then I talked about Dou San's Ye Xinglan. They all talked about how Shrek was arrogant and looked down on everyone, and how he caused trouble everywhere. You wanted to lead Class Zero to challenge them. What did you do? You used simulated soul skills to reach the broadcast room and knocked out the host just to challenge them. What happened after the manager came? You take it for granted and say that you are here to challenge Shrek. You don't even have the slightest intention of "I did something wrong." It's completely natural. Damn it, you are more disgusting than Shrek. You have clearly learned the tricks of their founder Tang San. Shrek is an evil spirit beast for causing trouble like this. You are good spirit beasts for doing this kind of thing, right? Real horse abstraction

In the voting for the heroine at the starting point, it seems that Gu Yue and Qiu'er are far ahead now, and Qiu'er's vote is higher. Is she really everyone's dissatisfaction? So when we write about the auspicious beast later, do we hope that she will be the same as the original work, with the same appearance as Wang Dong'er, or will she transform into another form? (Stacked Armor: Wang Dong'er will not become Tang Wutong, and Wang Dong will eventually join the anti-Three camp and exterminate relatives for justice)

The heroine of Dou 2 is tentatively named Rui Beast. It seems that there is no better choice for the heroine of Dou 3 besides Gu Yue? Do you have any suggestions?

It's a bit surprising. Is there such a normal Douer fan in Q Yue? I have read Douluo fandoms over there before, and I can only say that they are extremely violent, and most of them are mindless black + mindless cool. I didn't expect that occasionally, serious articles with a style closer to the starting point can be published.

The author should revise chapters 78, 79, and 80. They are too lemony and annoying. What you wrote is indeed juvenile, but isn't it because people hate history because they are too high-spirited? . .

Having seen this, this is the first time I have seen someone take the initiative to jump into the universe and ask the dog for training without any back-up. I wonder if this is where Tang Fozu's reputation collapsed? They also arranged for a three-eyed golden cat that didn't have much of a role to be sacrificed, and fed it directly to the big one.

Six hundred and sixty-six, in the end, the three-eyed Jin Ni still cannot escape the fate of sacrifice, so what did you write? Are you just going to bring a bunch of food to the brothers?

I don't understand why Wang Dong is written as the heroine. There is so much space. Does anyone really like to read it?

Appraisal completed: Liangcao It's a pity that the indigenous people don't consciously see it through the eyes of the old version. It's their own problem 😢

Pure 🍬🐶 flavor, follow the original plot line, this is my favorite fanfic

They are all against Tang San, but they are against Shrek.

Qingbai has no objection Can the heaven-defying Lily Dolphin be able to do 414

One sentence summarizes the protagonist of this book: the indigenous dog-licker who believes that books are worse than no books.

Noisy. Also in novels. The filial son of Dead Winter, the virtuous grandson of the Cloud God King

It's not as good as Dai Zhongxian in the original work, who knows the history and still acts like an idiot. This kind of thing is worse than being killed by Dai Zhongxian in the original version of Dou San

Again, if you are not willing to add CP to the male protagonist, but if you are willing to engage in Lily's private goods, then you'd better not write it.

I don't understand why the original version of Huo Yuhao has to be the protagonist. It is absolutely impossible for the original Huo Yuhao to have multiple female protagonists. I remember clearly that because of Huo Yuhao's mother, Huo Yuhao believed that it was Dai Hao's philanthropy that caused his mother to suffer, so he swore that he would only pursue pure love. The emotional entanglement with the auspicious beast was also because of this. On the one hand, it was the mastery of Tang Shenwang, and in part, it was Huo Yuhao himself who rejected Wang Qiuer.

It's okay if you don't add the heroine, but what article would it be if you added a male lead and a lily dolphin?

I would like to give you a suggestion, don't spend too much time on Ban Bai and Wu Zhangkong. We are not here for these people. If you spend time on shaping the giant two, you might as well write more plots for Dou Er. There has been no progress there for a long time. . .

All I can say is that Huo Yuhao's fans have picked up Wang Dong'er's books, and none of them are popular. There are so many female protagonists who don't write about them, but they write about someone who likes bullying at the beginning 🤔🤔🤔

The more I look at it, the more something is wrong, the better it looks, the more it looks like💩

It's a bit disgusting. In the past few chapters, I've been feeling physically unwell.

Beautiful 🤩! Sure enough, Huo Yuhao has to be the protagonist of the Dou Er fic!

Dou Erjuebi was carefully polished by Ya San, and the logical chain was extremely clear, just to tame Huo Yuhao, and it was locked in all aspects, without giving any chance to resist. Unless you have at least a god-king level, regardless of whether you are aboriginal or a time traveler, the ending of the original novel is the optimal solution. Knowing the plot is of no use at all. As long as you get into the dog training valley, what comes out will be what Yakuza wants. Don't say anything and don't go in. The Yasan is reserved for violent means, and the Snake Monkey is the black glove. This is just on the surface. The resurrection of Huo Yun'er at the end of the original work is very meaningful. The conspiracy theory is that your mother's life is in my hands. I can kill her at any time, including your souls, and even your friends and children in the mortal world (Ya San can really do it, and he doesn't need to do it himself), and he can't even flip a wave. At this time, they had given up completely. Huo Yuhao's madness before actually gave the souls a chance to retreat. If he died, the souls could choose a host again, but if they dared to rebel against Ya San, they would never survive. Until his death, Destruction never thought that Ya San actually wanted to kill him. He always thought that he and Ya San just had different ideas between colleagues. Any differences were also their internal problems. If outsiders challenged them, they would definitely turn on Ya San. Under the circumstances at that time, Qian Xing San was the enemy of the entire God Realm.

Dou Er Dou San is satisfying enough, but it's not enough to watch...😭 I want to see Gu Yue appear.

In order to prove it, the author should let Wang Dong be the heroine to sacrifice to Qiu'er.

As long as it lands smoothly, there is no doubt that Dou Ershen will make a reservation.

Sequence Zero is still too awesome. The third young master of the Tang family has revived in the author's body.

? What the hell are you writing about? Do you also admire the Third Young Master?