Douluo Peerless: Dreamer Huo Yuhao

The Holy Spirit Cult said that my son has fallen into a trap and immediately brainwashed and corrupted a dragon. Just kidding, although Shrek is really shitty, he is one of the few normal academies on the mainland. The Sun-Moon Empire, the Royal Academy and the Holy Spirit Cult all wear the same pants.

I read what you wrote, and it feels very immersive. The plot in the article is compact and has hooks and reversals, which greatly improves the writing.

Will the Xiaomeng brothers and sisters accept it together?

Can the author close his eyes when typing? I don't want to read second-hand words.

Have you ever been a visionary? Some things are just scrawled 😜😜

It's okay not to write the sun and moon lines too double-standard. The one written by Yan Yuhao in the previous book was simply the Lord of Hoover. Like a traitor

Guaranteed one, Meng Hongchen. In principle, the heroine of this book will not be just RBQ. If I am sure that I can write Wang Dong, Snow Emperor, and Gu Yuena well, I will consider adding them. The plot direction has not been completely decided yet. You can also make suggestions for other female characters below. If I am confident that I can write it well, I will consider joining. As for that label, don't pay too much attention to it. That label can only be changed once a month. I have to change it next time.

The author can actually add a setting. I have known Huo Yuhao's identity for a long time. In fact, I can add another setting, that is, Huo Yuhao's talent was originally very high, but due to long-term abuse, lack of food, and physical loss, the innate soul power tested was not high. However, his cultivation talent is particularly high, so his innate talent should also be very high. In the Sun and Moon Empire, thanks to various nutritional supplements, the cultivation talent was restored. I actually want to add this idea to every Huo Yuhao-type novel I read. I feel that this setting is more perfect.

Very good emotional lines, very good character descriptions, whether it is Huo Yuhao Meng Hongchen or Xiao Hongchen Feng Tingting, both men and women are normal people, unlike some Douluo fans who are all lustful ghosts without big heads, only small heads.

Decide for yourself, anyway, every time a book with multiple female protagonists has an unknown creature jumping around, anyway, every time a book with a single female protagonist is read, fewer people will read it 🤭

In the middle and late stages, if Lao Huo gets Tyrant-related abilities, he can directly destroy Lao San's Poseidon. If he gets Hanged Man-related abilities, he can split Tang Wutong and Wang Dong again, and even herd the remaining souls😋

How to say it? It doesn't matter at all to Douluo's harem. After all, this thing is just the same thing over and over again. You can add some seasoning, but at least there are requirements. Certain creatures dominated by the lower body can completely ignore their words, such as some bitch characters, Dou Yi's Ning Rongrong, and Dou Er's Orange Horse. Xiao Tao, the two phoenixes in Dou San, there are few female characters who stand out in Dou Four, and the most important thing is not to close up the broken shoes, Liu Erlong in Dou One, Tangerine in Dou Two, basically all except the protagonists in Dou Three, the same thing is said in Dou Four, there are not a few female characters who stand out, and the rest, the author depends on his own proportions. If so, you can write more, because now the mainstream is still the harem (Personally, the things I despise the most are Orange and Ma Xiaotao. Ma Xiaotao almost killed someone, and it doesn't matter whether Huo Yuhao can bear it? He just went up and fucked him, and later he recognized a godson, and Orange couldn't stand it. This one is even worse. Huo Yuhao went to death, but later reconciled and wanted to take revenge, saying that he didn't care what he was doing to have a son to stabilize the court. Why did you treat me as a tool? If you can avenge your father, even if it is a tool, I will be happy.

Do you think this sounds good? Don't you think it's embarrassing?

I have read two hundred chapters, but I don't want to read anymore. Here are a few points to make: First: I think this idea is very good, the combination of mystery and Douluo system. So the question is, why did you completely abolish the Douluo system? I have to admit that the strength of the mystery system is very high in the later stages, but the skills on the soul rings are not without strength. As of now, the fifth and sixth rings are just a blank slate. It is called engraving the mystery skills on it, but if you don't engrave it on it, you can't use it? Second: What is the use of your Ice Jade Scorpion so far? Why don't you forget about this martial spirit? When you are not strong in the early stage, you will treat it as useless, and the later one will just disappear Third: This emotional line is also inexplicable, I can say that you have Meng Hongchen, Xiao Xiao's dream of the Sims 200 times later, the Snow Emperor's inexplicable attachment, the orange Gu Yuenarui beast is getting more and more inexplicable Fourth: The plot advancement is very slow, I can't see any highlights in the article, is the highlight of your whole novel lies in the abuse of Tang Yin? Yes, this is one, you can't just start around Tang Yin again, Tang Yin is going to be a monster again, Tang Yin is stopped by Huo Yuhao, and then beaten up, after a while, it is intact, plus reinforcement, he can cause trouble again, he is tired of aesthetics, and has no points to watch. Fifth: You, as an audience member, are not good at burying clues, and you can't tell what the protagonist did. What happens to Xu Tianran all of a sudden, and what happens to others all of a sudden?

Only by absorbing the 10-year lonely bamboo can we defeat the God King. What a daydreamer and rubbish.

Nowadays, most of the novels are about harems. In fact, it is quite boring after reading too much. I feel that a normal woman will not accept a harem. Every time I see several women harmoniously sharing one man, it feels strange. Is it feudalism or something? Whatever, write more plots, and women will be used as seasoning.

The harem can only be said to be seasoning, it is still unimportant and dispensable. You have already written about Dou Er and the mysterious fan. I feel that the focus should be on the promotion ceremony and torture of Tang San, and it is inevitable to choose the dreamer to change the world. To be honest, Tang San's trumpet is not interesting to make him a clown. I have seen too much, so it is better to let him develop normally and then crush him.

Why do so many people like Huo Yuhao as the protagonist, just because he is miserable? The question is, is he miserable? Huo Yuhao finally became a god and later became a god king. Tang San also left the god world in the end. I don't know why he was so miserable. Isn't this pairing even more miserable than Qian Renxue's?

Huo Yuhao is a Douluo bus, and the things that many people do under his skin are no different from those of a Tang dog. It also satisfies the desires in my heart. I don't care about human affairs at all. I really like stories that can seriously write original protagonists. I hope the author will continue writing without OOC.

How does the author plan to deal with the relationship between Tianmeng and Ice Emperor? In the original novel, Tianmeng was so strong that I was disgusted. These two are single and should not be together until they die 😳

Although it has multiple female protagonists, I'm not too fond of it, but I can probably just read it. Now that I've read it, I find that this book is quite to my liking.

It suppresses the protagonist too deliberately. Everyone can say that the protagonist is a waste. I know you want to reverse the slap in the face to create a feeling of pleasure, but this routine is too vulgar. And if you haven't mastered this ancient trick of showing off, you will be underestimated in one chapter and slapped in the face in the next chapter. Every time the protagonist of your sixty-plus chapters meets anyone from Shrek's side, he will be called trash.

It is said that there is no spiritual world or astral world in Douluo. How can those rely on their power and authority?

Let me talk about the problems I have discovered now. First of all, the author has added some original characters. Although it does not affect the look and feel, from time to time, multiple original characters suddenly make me feel that this character is purely for the plot. If the plot needs it, just create one. Secondly, the author does not care whether it is the setting of Douluo or the plot. The mysterious setting is very strong when used to bring one's own opinions and judgments. For example, evil fire, anyone can smoke it, and it will become stronger when smoked. It is addictive. In the chapter I am reading now, the protagonist opens an incomplete mythical form before reaching sequence four... I can only say that this has affected my perception.

Why is the witch dreaming of the world of mortals? Isn't it bad for a witch to laugh at the mortal world?

I feel like this Huo Yuhao is just a time traveler with no new memories! 🤔

I see that there is indeed a discussion thread opened by the author, so what is going on with the heroine? Is it a single heroine or multiple heroines? What are the implications of having multiple heroines? Can anyone give me a clear answer? If no one answers, I won't read it. I'm not the audience for some types of books, and I don't want to waste time and money reading such books.

I heard that the messenger of death is also you?

Hatred, confusion, despair, this is the mainstay of everything, the purest and most powerful force. Because this is my mission. The man named Electrolux entrusted it to me with great care. That was the day of destruction of the Holy Law God of the Dead. Huo Yun'er, Electrolux, Tianmeng Bingcan, Wang Dong'er, Wang Qiu'er... I remember each of their names. Because remembering them is the only thing I can do. They were "killed" one by one under Tang San's conspiracy before my eyes, but I could only run away shamefully. ... Like a scared and weak beast. Every dark night when I can't see the light, I will dream of that man. In his transformation into a point of light, entrust me with his name and legacy, over and over again. Finally, I came back and used his name to fulfill the promise of destroying everything. Strength, destiny, ideals, when I inherited the name of the Holy Law God of the Dead, I thought I got everything from that man, but there is nothing that belongs to me under this name. I am just playing a shadow that has been dead for many years, But why should I play a failed shadow? That's right! I killed the Poseidon Tang San! Saved the world, I did it, what that man couldn't do, I have surpassed him. I am not crazy, I defeated the world This is my own strength, my own destiny, my own ideal... This... Is the real me!

The King of Gods has done all the bad things, so be sure to finish the book safely.