I Really Don't Want to Be the Pirate King!

Very disappointed, it turned out to be a regular mindless cool article, with fragments of the rustling fruit talent? There are many novels written in this way, but I haven't seen any of them that can be finished. Give it up.

Are you trying to kill Hawkeye for a trivial reward when there is a 99% chance of death? Are you screening readers? Author, you did it

Is it finished? I remember the last book was finished at chapter 37.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. You are completely sexually repressed. Or you don't read comics news at all. You don't even know this. Even if you write pornographic articles, no one will read them.

The book I started writing a few years ago is just like this. Unexpectedly, after a few years, there is still no progress.

If you want to start reading, just turn to Chapter 27. If you find it unacceptable, you can just run away without wasting time.

Killing decisively is no problem. The navy is the opponent anyway. Even if he is a good person, he will have the consciousness to be killed when he uses the sword. But to kill the navy and do experiments, tsk tsk, the author does not really think that the reader is a psychopathic person.

Might as well write about Naruto, Pirates is too sexually repressed. There are a lot of green turtles in it, and One Piece is not finished yet. Now that I am writing a fanfic, who knows what big work Oda will do next.

It's okay, but the Robin part is a bit broken. Everything is only for "profit". Suddenly the small head controls the big head, and it is difficult to hold back and say yes.

So what the hell are you talking about adding a cooldown to an ability? Is it really written as a game?

The protagonists of some novels are like this. When they see a woman, they turn into a fool and their whole style changes.

It's very rough, very rough in every aspect, it feels like it was written as soon as I hit my head.

Has the author sold his account? I remember that the novels I wrote in the past were quite good.

The writing has collapsed. Basically two of the four kings are gone, leaving only a bloody white beard and ruined red hair. As long as the Navy pushes back every minute regardless of the cost, Dover is funny. His strength is there. He will be settled by Qiuhou in minutes. The Pirates game is over.

Just when I saw that the sooner the armed color is arranged, I know it is rubbish 🙂

Have you forgotten the setting of life paper?

Writing novels really depends on talent and hard work (one percent and ninety-nine percent)

Damn it, the words "Shasha Fruit Fragments" came out and it really made me unable to hold my nerves. Get out of here, you are really not suitable for writing novels!

The relationship between Robin and Robin was so sparse earlier, so I might as well not write about it. The weapon is a gun, which is very powerful but not handsome, and the fighting descriptions are not exciting. And the current development of the plot is also very confusing. He has already obtained the fruit power, and he is still following the Sand Crocodile. This is neither in line with the description in the introduction, nor in line with Goldfinger's maximization of interests. That's it, I can barely keep reading. These past few chapters have been really boring. We shouldn't have come to Wano Country. Just like in the comics, once we arrive in Wano Country, we will start to get bored and become bad. Now, apart from a cultivation speed, there is nothing else to gain. Why not accompany Lao Sha to find Hades?

This plot is moving at breakneck speed! In any case, the plot chapter will be ended directly. Is this because the enthusiasm has burned out and I am ready to cut it off and run away?

It really affects reading. The author still can't forget the few One Piece novels he wrote before. He wanted to do everything Not proficient in everything It really affects the reading experience. You

It was actually pretty good to watch, but the plot was a bit fast and lacked daily routine.

The more I write about it, the more I come back to it. It's useless.

I am still willing to support One Piece written by the author. Not to mention how brilliant the previous books are, they are enough to be used as food. I hope this one can make a breakthrough.

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The plot direction is quite interesting, but the protagonist becomes a background. Use the protagonist more often to promote events

The context is completely inconsistent. In the first part, it is said that Owen's body was given to Moria, but in the second part, Owen was resurrected on the same spot.