One Piece: These Marines Are So Despicable!

I really dislike seeing fanfiction featuring the Navy. What are the Navy characters in One Piece? They're like comical figures, acting like they're truly righteous, maintaining the Celestial Dragons' army that slaughters a country every three years, and they actually think they're so righteous?

The sea does not need love The original One Piece manga is all about male romance. The romance parts of One Piece fanfiction always feel uninteresting. I really don't want the female lead anymore. There might be toxic spots if you're not careful. Hopefully, this time it will be as enjoyable as the previous Naruto episodes, providing a completely satisfying reading experience without any negative elements that will leave me feeling incredibly satisfied.

The writing has gotten progressively weaker; it's now so bad that you can guess the entire chapter's plot just by looking at the title.

The abilities are too varied; now that he's invincible, it's become boring. Furthermore, the author's knowledge of One Piece is somewhat lacking; many facts are incorrect. For example, Devil Fruit users aren't afraid of water, but rather because of the Seastone factor in seawater.

The beginning was good, but it got really bad after he entered Marine Headquarters. Then there was the scene where the protagonist beat up Hanma, and the later Shichibukai arc—the writing was even worse than before. I initially thought he was going to be a crazy, invincible guy, but he turned out to be a total loser.

The book is good, but the protagonist is a bit arrogant, bragging to Capone about how awesome he'll be in the future, which is a bit idiotic.

Could you please speed things up a bit? We're still just doing minor tweaks, and the readers are almost all gone. 😒

Is it possible that the fear of the ocean stems from the presence of sea snails, which is why freshwater people don't drink it? Should we change the setting?

Stop writing in such a flashy way. It feels like every book you write starts strong but then declines, and you just go off the rails in the middle.

I've read two of the author's books, White Town and Despicable Navy. Both were very engaging in the beginning, but later on, the characters had too many and too varied abilities, and suddenly one became invincible, leaving me with no desire to finish them.