When People Are in Douluo, What Is Wuhun? What Is Luckin Coffee?

I came here from Douyin. I came across this novel tweet and specifically read it at Qidian. This idea is very good and I am very interested. But the writing of the article is really a mess, it can be said that it is just a mess. You either write about being funny, or you write about the protagonist's hard work. When you write a protagonist, you think about balancing literature every day. What does it mean when you write some writing on supporting characters every day? Do you think about finding a partner for your uncle every day, instead of thinking of ways to wish your uncle to become a god? It's too low-end. An 8-year-old boy is already thinking about his partner. Whenever a girl appears, he has to think about whether she is a suitable partner for marriage, and then write about it in various writing styles. Can you not let the sperm get into your head? Either you write about being funny, or you write about working hard to become a god.

The imagination is good, the level improvement speed has not been found yet, and the writing is just okay. The first poisonous point is to draw a red line for my uncle and Jiang Nannan. . I don't know if it's poisonous, but it's just a bit weird. Poison No. 2 Was successfully plotted by Dai Huafu and was pulled into the Star Dou Forest to push the plot. It is amazing for a six-year-old child to be put in a sack alone. The food and grass are on the lower side, and the imagination is more interesting.

How much advertising fees Michelle and Luckin will give you, I will double it from COCO

The first major poisonous point: The protagonist's uncle is very good to the protagonist, and as a food type Contra, and he is only in his 40s and is very young, he will basically break through to a titled Douluo in the future. As a result, in Chapter 33, you have to arrange a second-hand Jiang Nannan Give him The second most poisonous point: Dai Huabin wanted to kill the protagonist, and he did it first and openly at the city gate. Many people saw it, but you told me that for a Soul Master student, I need a Contra to sign a renouncement contract? And you can also say that the protagonist's uncle is not from Shrek? He has already broken through to Contra, so who helped him hunt for the eight spirit rings in front of him? Also, he has been working in the inner courtyard for so many years, how can he still be outsourced? Really, if you write Dou Er and want to rebel against Shrek, I think that's okay, but you can't write it so ugly, right?

How powerful is the Duke of White Tiger? The pseudo-extreme ice crippled the Duke's second son and he didn't even dare to save it. It was Mu En who came to pressure. The outline should be to go to the sun and the moon, but this plot is just what the author thought of and wrote. It's too out of the ordinary.

Not the author. You just apologized for writing the plot of introducing Jiang Nannan to his uncle in the last chapter. In the next chapter, you wrote about being almost killed by Ma Xiaotiao. Are you ready to forgive Ma Xiaotao again? Help, the love trilogy is disgusting readers.

Good idea, but the plot is very toxic.

According to the new setting of the Third Master, Ditian is actually a female dragon

From a plot development point of view, after being captured and returned to Star Dou, you should have been slapped in the face and moved towards the plot. But it turned out that you didn't regard Munn as a normal person at all. What did you think of a genius with at least a ten-thousand-year soul ring? What's more, they are relatives of their own members. Tell me which leader of a force would be stupid enough to suppress someone who will definitely be part of his core lineup in the future? What's more, this is Shrek. The key word for people is to protect one's shortcomings. If you want to change the sun and moon line, that's not how you turn it. The evaluation is that all the good ideas are wasted, and the plot is stupid.

I feel like what the author writes is based on what I've been looking for on Douyin lately.

Wherever there is luck, there must be Michelle Ice City. When I saw the title of the book, I wondered if there would be a heroine or villain of Michelle. After reading the introduction, it turns out that Michelle has a role.

I thought it was dirty, so I pushed it over to my uncle, 666

It's all just fun and a waste of time. You really can't bite the lighter.

It's hard to stretch, one book is about Lucky and the other is about Snow King

A good subject matter was ruined by the author. Not only was it OOC but he was also demoted. In the front it was written not to be sold to evil soul masters, but in the back he went to the Empire of the Sun and the Moon. Then he made the Holy Ghost Church the state religion.

The latest chapter of wc is so bt, I'm sweating the steamed buns at my feet🤮🤮🤮

If you don't want to help jnn, don't force him to do it. You still do this if you don't like it.

I've seen a lot of generally abstract things, but I've always been a bit salty when it comes to such abstract things.

My martial spirit is the Oriental Pearl Tower, wouldn't you explode 😁

I couldn't even make it through the first chapter, the writing is flawless

Let me share my feelings after seeing Chapter 47. Firstly: the male protagonist is too young and is not at the same level as the main character group. It can be considered that there is no female protagonist. After all, the male protagonist is only six years old now. Secondly: the male protagonist is an auxiliary, which means there is no fighting. This seems very frustrating. After all, the male protagonist has no strength. Thirdly: it is too everyday and the age of the male protagonist cannot be lowered. In the emotional line, the male protagonist is an assistant and can't write battles. The male protagonist doesn't work hard either. He just opened a coffee shop and then disappeared. It seems really boring. The male protagonist just gets up every day to sell coffee to go to his uncle for dinner, and then continue the next day. Moreover, the male protagonist is not old enough to participate in the plot in the academy. I don't know what is interesting about it.

First of all, Dai Huabin and Dai Yueheng will definitely leave Shrek Academy and return to the Duke's Mansion. In the future, the protagonist will have an uncle who is a Titled Douluo from the food department. Whichever is more important, I should help the protagonist in both public and private matters. As an Ultimate Douluo, Munn has a very high say in the entire continent, not to mention Shrek. A mere White Tiger Duke does not need Munn to take action at all. You have to know that Zhou Yi has the right to expel students just as a teacher in the outer courtyard, so his uncle's power will only be greater. (Dai Huabin is not even a core disciple of the outer courtyard) Secondly, don't degrade the food department to nothing. You may not need Munn, but Shrek can't live without it. It's so difficult to improve the food department. There isn't even a food soul Douluo with better talent in the next one. How about giving up now an inner courtyard food department teacher who is very likely to break through to a titled douluo in the future? (Abandoning the protagonist as an outcast without even investigating the protagonist's talent?) Especially at this point, Munn doesn't have much time left. What is more terrifying than the gap in strength is that everyone has their own hidden agenda. Even if the protagonist really signs a "sale contract", as a food major, adding more impurities to the food every day is enough to ruin the future of some students and stop their soul power from progressing. (With a character like this who doesn't even investigate the cause of the evil fire disappearing, no one knows even if the protagonist is poisoned) So as long as the brain is sound, it is impossible to adopt the method of selling oneself. Then, the whole thing itself is full of strangeness. A 6-year-old food-related child single-handedly killed the Shrek genius student of the attack-related department and two guards? There is no one who wants to investigate? It is definitely not the protagonist's side who is afraid of the investigation, but the White Tiger Duke's side. The affairs of Rui Shou are completely uninvestigable, and Dai Huabin has no brains to do things without leakage. The death of the fruit shop owner overlapped with the disappearance of the protagonist. What happened in this part? Such a big loophole tells me that there is no evidence? Everything has behavioral logic. Just because a 6-year-old child can't investigate something doesn't mean that Shrek's senior management can't investigate it. Just saying "there's no evidence" makes the protagonist choose to remain silent. Even if it's about Empire of the Sun and Moon, this twist is too blunt and bad. As long as there is nothing wrong with your mind, the first step is to check the protagonist's soul power level and martial spirit, and check his skills. He sells coffee at Shrek every day, and all his actions can be investigated. He disappeared from the fruit shop for so long, and what happened during this period should be investigated. (In the original work, Moon asked Huo Yuhao to choose the Noumenon Sect or Shrek. Regarding Huo Yuhao's opportunities, he also said that "everyone has his own opportunities," so he is very open-minded and will never kidnap the protagonist through a "selling contract.") His uncle is also big-hearted, and he almost lost the protagonist before. The protagonist is not equipped with a positioning soul guidance device, but a defensive soul guidance device. The defensive soul guidance device does not even have an alarm device. The protagonist dares to wander around alone, not even accompanied by anyone. Dai Huabin didn't know that he just left him in the Star Forest after a last-ditch attack. Dai Huabin dared to kill people in Shrek, so a last-ditch attack was nothing. They used the level 7 soul guide as an excuse, but after the protagonist comes back, won't the level 7 soul guide still be broken instantly? Being suspected for triggering the reverse scale? This is too blunt. There are many ways to solve it, but I chose the most useless way. In the end, we were transferred to the Sun and Moon Empire inexplicably. The people buying coffee in front of us were all invisible, and no one could help. The evil fire is obviously something that cannot be removed by personal practice alone. Even if the evil fire disappears, the reason will not be investigated. The protagonist's talent is completely a bargaining chip. His uncle is also a fool, and he doesn't know what his nephew's talent is. There is no curiosity at all about such a strange martial spirit of extremely high quality. It is absolutely correct to say that all members will reduce their intelligence. Even if I want to write against Tang San, this is too blunt. The pattern is opened up. In the later stage, Coffee can completely gain the ability to speak the truth, which will disgrace Tang San, or make Tang San fall in love with Luckin Coffee and be unable to extricate himself. In order to write counterarguments and let everyone be wise, it is a bit of a small gain. I really like the setting of Luckin Coffee, but it's a bit too grindy at the end. 😭

Black Shrek, Running Sun and Moon. Chun Chun makes me sick to death. Shrek is famous for protecting his shortcomings. Not to mention you, a White Tiger Duke, even if the royal family comes, Shrek doesn't even take it seriously. How can you describe Shrek in order to run Sun and Moon? A food-type soul master who can enter a titled Douluo will give up if he says he wants to. Do you look down on the food-type soul master too much?

In the latest chapter, I want to complain about what the author is writing nonsense, bragging about the tens of thousands of god levels that make Tang San's scalp numb. Tang San, a level 100 wild god who has never breathed the spirit of the fairy, does not use his true body, but has a domineering spirit.

They are all doing coffee and martial arts, selling coffee and milk tea, and they are also forced to leave. Normally, they can do some funny plots and daily plots, and change the original messy things and it will be fine. Many of the character descriptions are not in place, and it feels like they are all possessed by funny personalities.

You can drive from Douluo to Luckin Coffee and Mixue Bingcheng to All Heavens and Worlds

Can you change the name of the ninth soul skill to sugar plus three spoons?

Yesterday I saw a running spirit named Yukigao. Today its blue partner is here. Why don't you two continue to form a group and debut at the starting point?

I want to see the second martial soul develop into the power attack system.

I watched an AI short drama and it felt good. Come and watch it.