
The World's Strongest Weapon Refiner
全球最强炼器师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 21k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Alternative Fantasy
- Updated
- 11mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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19Chapters
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Hello author
After reading Chapter 4, there's nothing wrong with it. If I have to find faults, I feel that the part about writing a novel could be abbreviated a bit, and the part about the protagonist wanting to become an immortal could be added a bit, as it reads a bit abruptly. There is another problem. Your protagonist's parents are still alive and may be shackled in the future. You should be able to feel it when you watch part of the plot about cultivating immortality without money. I suggest you think carefully about whether this part is reasonable. Book title and introduction are not enough. Let's rewrite the introduction. Theme + core character + selling point + hook. Your introduction is too cliche. Neither does the title of the book. In fact, I still don't know the significance of the setting of Hulu. Think about it some more. You have solved the problem of the book title and introduction, and then try to submit it internally. I think the route should be like this. Then I emphasize it again. There's nothing wrong with the content, and every chapter is interesting and interesting. The character is not procrastinating, which is great! You should be able to see from my speech record that I still have a very venomous tongue. Good luck signing it soon.