My Bond Is Invincible

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I've read a few chapters, so I'll give it a review and hope you don't dislike it. The novel has no highlights. After all, the highlight of this type of dungeon novel is the survivors' cooperation, or their mutual suspicion and calculation. And this book explains from the beginning that except for the protagonist, all the other characters are female characters. After all, I am not here to read a harem story, so this point is quite deducted. It is understandable that there are few people in the initial dungeon. Once the level increases later, more and more people will participate in the dungeon. At that time, there will only be a man as the protagonist, and all the others will be women. Does it mean that the male protagonist has to do everything personally? Of course, it does not mean that female characters cannot take on important responsibilities. But you have to write well to read. You can read Shelter or some other dungeon novels, and you can also learn about group running games. Of course, this is just an opinion. After all, you have the final say on your own novels. The copy design is also average.

How should I put it, it's still not very interesting. First of all, the design of the dungeon is very average, even a little poor. Although the design of the subsequent dungeons all indicate horror, Chinese style, folk ghosts and the like, it is not felt at all. Maybe you are not suitable for writing horror decryption, so you can only enjoy fighting. The character level setting can actually be more quantitative and make the character data more straightforward. The poor design of the infinite flow dungeon really affects the look and feel. Is it possible to launch some competitive dungeons, where you will be punished if you fail, and in the real world, what benefits can you get from the abilities gained through the game? At present, the competitive relationship is weak in the early stages, and there is no clear enemy or goal. In general, the goal is still not obvious. The issue of copy design is a key point deduction, and more polishing is needed in this aspect. The evaluation may be a bit straightforward, but the problem is obvious. As I said before, don't be discouraged or angry. The novel actually has a good foundation. Please polish it more. At the same time, please come and read my books and give me some suggestions, comments, and criticisms. Thank you.